Reviews of Building a Guild in a Fiction World using my Gamer System by Snake_Eyes_ - Webnovel

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Thiago_Gomes_8808

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Venerabe_Yun

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LIke the concept so far and it seems like it will be an interesting read. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing where you go with the story progression next

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gargantaaa

just started in the plot. has entered subromance. too expensive. moreover the women are less attractive. disgusting . .

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Justsome_nobody

it is pure gold.................................................................................................................................................................

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Fikerrr

Really interesting and enjoyable story. MC is smart, cunning and resourceful. He knows what he wants and he will take it for himself. Keep up the good work Author. You can do it!

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Cosmic_Witcher

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PullUpinaChoppa

It's a pretty good story, but there's just way too much talking, like Jesus. I just gloss over every paragraph of nonstop talking. It slows down the story way too much.

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SPD_Drayzer

Very good story, actually one of the best I've read, please keep up the great work, I don't know why most good authors give up on their works.

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Sleepy_Hollow_1472

Its such an amazing Novel 10/10. Ithink a cool villain could be makima from Chainsawman... Well she needs a nerf but she is a good villain.

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Abdullah_Ismail_0552

Love the story.I just hope there were more chapters. ......................................................................................

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Barruch

I'm honestly impressed, I came to read this fic thinking it was another poorly written amateur story, but I'm really enjoying it a lot, the plot, the characters' relationship, the MC's own development, it's all well written and in good taste, I'm quickly becoming a Fan of the author, and hopefully he doesn't give up on the story or writing in general.

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Classic_Joe

The story is fine, nothing more nothing less, in my review I have given a 5 on the update stability the ff is very new at this point so grain of salt and all that. The book has some internal inconsistencies, or I have misunderstood something but it says in the first chapter that he woke up as a bloodied and beaten orphan where john wick trained fair enough it also says he is a boy of not yet 20 so 18ish is what is implied but then it says in the second chapter that he I has been in this world for a year and a half so he started training when he was 16? And that doesn’t link properly to the otaku to ruthless killer narrative that is also pushed in the opening chapters. Better for character development if he is sent there when the body UID much younger like 5? It mentions he is weak willed so it could have been interesting to see him broken and rebuilt into this ruthless murder machine instead of just told, no? Speaking of characters the mc is just kind of flat not very interesting, not very complex, he is shown to be lost in early chapters so he may get interesting with real motivation later but for now he is dull. TLDR-character bad, plot missing, world messy-it feels like they only just collided like the day the mc appeared you would assume the red room would be interlinked to the super assassin group or the continental and criminal groups would nurture their own mutant squads but no.

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Farly02462343

I really like it but the romance Kinda kulled it for me ------------------------------------------------;---------------------------------------:-----

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bobuchiha

no me gusto la verdad pero es un buen trabajo lo recomiendo solo no fue mi taza de te

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dozkiller07

reviewing after first arc. Mc= good,powerfull yet intelligent to know what to do and what not to do. story development= good, progressing smoothly.no hickup or plot holes from my view point. world background=the story only started. so I can't guarantee how good it will be but for now it good. the world doesn't feel like someone take marvel ,fast&furious and John wick put together using glue. no, it feels like all movies are actually there from the beginning and part of it..fast and furious and John wick integrated really good.

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DaoistaxMkIL

Fanfic interessante 👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Imnyu

i like this fanfic i wish it stays like that and also not be droppedi like this fanfic i wish it stays like that and also not be droppedi like this fanfic

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PsyLoRD

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EnderPL

Im really fascinated how good the story in. The quality is great, yes there are some mistakes but it doesn’t brake the flow of reading. I love the interactions and chemistry between mc and other characters. Author did a great job in combining the different movies, but what worries me is when superpowers start to come into play. Overall, great job author !

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starking

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

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LaloyShii

very entertaining,definetly one of the best crossover fanfics ive read so far in this app,so good job mate.💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

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ShatteredMusic

I like this the entirety of how this story feels and how It gives me a new original feeling compared to the amount of pure cliches on web novel. Nice job author

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Darin4

I liked the story and the grammar is very good. it's just I had to drop because I don't like the first love interest. but it's good tho, recommend to read but for those who do not like saki, well just try your best to ignore her because I couldn't, lol. but best of luck author, loved the john wick theme but sadly, our interest in the girls don't allign.