Building a Guild in a Fiction World using my Gamer System

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Unknown_7

I like the story, especially how the mc is portrayed as a cold blooded assassin who can't seem to find a place in this new world and the concept that even though he has a system, he has to work extremely hard to gain skills. I love this fic, good job author san 👍.

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ImNex

First thing first, I would like to thank the author for adding a fast and furious franchise here. I haven't seen single fanfic about them. Second, I'm looking forward to seeing how you will work things out between marvel, ff universe, and many more to come.

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Dido_Oscar

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PullUpinaChoppa

It's a pretty good story, but there's just way too much talking, like Jesus. I just gloss over every paragraph of nonstop talking. It slows down the story way too much.

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Scholar_Assassin

I rarely give review but this fanfic is honestly great and I have liked it so far. It has tremendous potential and hopefully it will get even better as time passes. If the author is reading it then please keep up the good work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].... I too thought of writing a fanfic and it too starts with John Wick and goes into different movie worlds. I wrote 10 chapters but never published. You are doing a great job....

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SirZed

This is probably the fast review I have given anyone but hey, I've enjoyed the chapters so far. And that John Wick is part of the story just makes it way, way better.

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lateron_21

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Classic_Joe

The story is fine, nothing more nothing less, in my review I have given a 5 on the update stability the ff is very new at this point so grain of salt and all that. The book has some internal inconsistencies, or I have misunderstood something but it says in the first chapter that he woke up as a bloodied and beaten orphan where john wick trained fair enough it also says he is a boy of not yet 20 so 18ish is what is implied but then it says in the second chapter that he I has been in this world for a year and a half so he started training when he was 16? And that doesn’t link properly to the otaku to ruthless killer narrative that is also pushed in the opening chapters. Better for character development if he is sent there when the body UID much younger like 5? It mentions he is weak willed so it could have been interesting to see him broken and rebuilt into this ruthless murder machine instead of just told, no? Speaking of characters the mc is just kind of flat not very interesting, not very complex, he is shown to be lost in early chapters so he may get interesting with real motivation later but for now he is dull. TLDR-character bad, plot missing, world messy-it feels like they only just collided like the day the mc appeared you would assume the red room would be interlinked to the super assassin group or the continental and criminal groups would nurture their own mutant squads but no.

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LemonZawodowiec

This work is from now on officially my favorite fanfic on this site! For me this work threw down Dragonborn Saga to second place. I can't imagine to write something so creative and original myself.

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sage_of_balance

this the first decent and not dropped john wick and fast and furious fanfic I read, please don't drop it. also the update speed is amazing but make sure u don't get bored of writing it and take a break for a day or two.

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TanqBR

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Venerabe_Yun

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Sleepy_Hollow_1472

Its such an amazing Novel 10/10. Ithink a cool villain could be makima from Chainsawman... Well she needs a nerf but she is a good villain.

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LokeErBest

Lately the fanfics on Webnovel have gotten really good and this is probably on the top 3 of fanfics i have read. Keep going strong and i think its very cool the way you incorporate different movie universes. The good thing is that i can see how theese movies can relate to each other because they are very similar, Keep up the good work!

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

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BrownOptometrist

Fab this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

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aJohn

Love how is the story going and i love youre movie of choice they are all my favorite franchise .... Keept it up and i hope you didn't drop this