MULTIVERSEL CAFE

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DARK_SAGE

More chapters please 😁👌🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Immortal_Cat

well, I got nothing much to say, I like the way it is right now. if you're planning on adding many characters to the story, it's better to make a list and reminders for it early

LV 6

swordzero

bad grammar and story is lower than average. bad grammar and story is lower than average. bad grammar and story is lower than average. bad grammar and story is lower than average.

LV 5

Murdock007

A good start. I like how the mc died. It's good to die at the age of 104 Lots of potential Keep it up and don't drop the story. Exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp

LV 4

DAOIST_SUPREME

The story is cool, but the writing is really bad. The story is cool, but the writing is really bad. The story is cool, but the writing is really bad. The story is cool, but the writing is really bad.

LV 14

Ash_Fullbuster

This is one epic, awesome and f****** interesting fan fic. This is also the first fan fic that I ever rated. It was awesome and the comedy was fantastic to say the least. I don't give spoilers so I am not telling but the story kept me hooked till the last page. I really recommend you to read it!!!!

LV 4

The_Bored_Immortal

A very good fanfic if you like slow paced slice-of-life the only thing that slightly downgrades the experience is the grammar mistakes, which can be easily ignored

LV 15

Reaper_X_7998

this isnt a harem right.... it better not be ................................................................... or ill punt you to the moon

LV 3

DJDAN

The story starts off with, no offence, shitty grammar. Of course, it smooths out later in the chapter. (that, or I just learned to ignore it, Im leaning towards the former though) But yeah, it got quite a few laughs out of me which is suprising because I dont do that often. If you can get over the first few chapters of shitty grammar, give it a read, very good.

LV 4

Lasyandra

give you review so that you got 10 reviews and get rating...

LV 5

Mortal_God

a masterpiece as I would say I love the authors concept of reincarnating with wishes I just hope that the author can update more frequently as 2 chapters per week is just not enough for me. anyways thanks author for the wonderfull story. -chap.30

LV 1

DaoisthOSbO0

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Gilandcheese

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LV 14

Jetos

This book has been a fun read so far. I really like the interactions between the heroes and our friendly cafe running multiverse god. So far (chapter 17) there has been a good mix of humor and full on trolling by the MC. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more. There have not been any major issues with grammar. I have had no issues at all in understanding what is going on or who is talking or why something was done. Updates have been extremely awesome. I have seen anywhere from 1-4 per day since you started releasing chapters. Thanks for the hard work!

LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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LV 1

DaoisthOSbO0

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LV 5

Lisa_Agnes

quite a funny story, good comedy for fun & laugh

LV 3

SOMBRIO

Divertido ,descontraído, uma boa leitura, cheio das referências . Quero mais +_+ .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

DaoisthOSbO0

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LV 4

FOX_ZRS

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