In Naruto with More More Devil Fruit

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Dave_Guest

One of the rare dark Naruto fanfics. And the best about it is, that you don’t need to deal with a stupid Mc. He is cunning, intelligent and cruel. He seeks revenge and power. I hope the author won’t drop and makes the chapters a little longer.

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Yuuki123

well the way character before reincarnation is bad, first how can someone become sole survivor of plane crash with only minimal injury (I say this because he can tend his wounds alone after miraculous safe from plane crash) after that he go back to home he all his family died and he become some sort of criminal (typical boss discarded his hunting dog because interest) and he then he go all the way to basically genocide his entire species with nuclear war witch I don't know how can he have them in the first place (it's either that world security is suck or he is that good at doing his thing, most likely the former). then the way he reincarnated he is supposed to be punished but instead got reincarnated as naruto! hell he even get cheat given by mostly evil goodness for being amusing not because she pity him like seriously who will pity someone who genocide his own race?. after reincarnated as naruto many questions appearing like why go out from kononha just to go back and become genin there ? how no one questioned how can he become strong? knowing something that he suppose not to know? and many more what I can say is plot mostly forced to as close as possible to cannon he didn't even have goal, or even his goal is to change konoha why though? he didn't have any ties in there

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DripGoku

so good and i can't wait to read more[img=exp][img=coins] and i dont really know what else to say so good and i can't wait to read more[img=exp][img=coins] and i dont really know what else to say

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FeaR_Less

can't wait for moreeee znaslmzmddlxkdjdkdjdndnndndnndnnndndnndndnkdldndbshjskskakanansbsbssslskkndndhjdkdjdjdjdjjdjdjdndndjdjkdlsjdhudhryydsoamsbb

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Noir_Light

I love how this story shows the hypocrisy of the shinobi village. So many dark secrets revealed! Recommended for people who that are Danzo haters!!!

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The_EnlightenedOne

anybody else wondering why he created a devil fruit? There are tons of other fruits that are just as good if not better. Also, it is not explained what the fruit does. Other than that its a good fic.

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DiceyZimmer

I hurt when reading the start of the story. I mean he gets rewarded for killing off the entire population which is his "punishment". Bad start but unique. Lastly it gets better thankfully but that start makes my review 3.8.

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Mortal_God

story dropped because of the bastard DAOISTIQRBFO I really hope you gucking choke on air and die you son of a bitch. a perfectly good fanfic dropped because of you.

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notlair

WQ-3 stars Just your average fanfic in webnovel, not good, not bad SD-3 stars pretty meh, it'll be better if the author don't treat ninjas as ignorant, mc always hide his training then all of a sudden displayed all his cards/abilities CD-2 stars MC is cringe factory, with tons of salt and edgyness US-4 stars pretty consistent so far WH-5 stars it's narutoverse, can't go wrong with that

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Forgettable_Author

This fanfic is good and there's a little mistake like the spelling, and the paragraph you just need to write 5 sentences each paragraph, but if your writing on your computer make it 3-4 sentences or 2 sentences each paragraph so it will look good and easy to read and pinpoint the spelling mistakes,overall it's a good fanfic

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Gratiz_

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Kingfisher_22

best naruto FF ever only problem is updates. Tnx Author san

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Jason2010

It started bad and gradually became worse. You say He don't trust anyone because of betrayal and then tells kakashi and sasuke everything. Story have no logic at all. Characters have no depth at all, pretty much everyone is a two dimensional character including MC.

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Jacob_Hickok

I seriously love you and this book, but I also hate you because you single-handedly ruined my sleep schedule because of how long I spent reading it straight. But even though you ruined it, I'm willing to forgive you if you post more of it.

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Crabble

Extremely nerfed the more more fruit, portrays mc as smart but when stuff that matters like gaining the rennigan comes up hes dumb, and the power levels are inconsistent At one moment the author says that with The chakra cloak alone mc can be high kage level but the moment he says that even with the chakra cloak, the mangetyo sharingan, and the more more fruit (nerfed) at 30x he can barely achieve mid kage.

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koryu

i love this book, it is perfectly in line with how i had imagined it to be, a ruthless mc in a dog kill dog world. loved how sarutobi, was treated, same with kakashi and jiraiya, such irresponsible people were undeserving of Naruto's love and respect.