Omniversal Chat Group [Semi-OP OC]

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SCP_0999

I have question author is this harem is it going to have yuri? Because I can't take any more injury's while reading the fanfiction their suddenly yuri in the story.

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SCP3812

author, I have just one problem here, I don't believe you understand just how vast the power difference between universal and mere building level is, something the size of the sun would be considered to be less than an atom next to the universe, the difference is MASSIVE buildings are at most 0.500 km to 1km while the sun is sized to 900,000 km, which compared to the universe which is around 15 billion (observable) light years, it is a joke, to even think of adding a building level being next to a universe level being, the power difference is so vast that a universe level existence wont even notice it if they killed an infinite amount building level beings. the only way to make a universe level being even get damaged by a building level is if the building level has some stupidly powerful powers such as concept creation, time manipulation, space manipulation and such, and only time will even wound them. thus me not liking the novel much. you need to adjust the power levels a LOT

There's a few things wrong with this novel. 1) The MC - Isn't defined properly at all. Only traits I know of so far are being over powered, handsome, and that he's hiding a trauma of some sort. Other than that, I know nothing of his personality other than he dislikes school. For some reason also, right off the bat, he is seen as the "leader" of the chat group, though making him an Admin certainly allows him to be in a sort of "superior" position, it is known he only has that position because he joined first. He did not earn the respect nor trust of the people in the group and has only talked to them for a total of 2 hours before they start seeing him as a leader and follow his every command. It also seems like the author is going to define the main characters personality through flash backs which is something I personally dislike. Also, the very fact you made him a universe buster level being right off the bat is a turnoff. I won't be expecting any challenges for the protagonist to overcome besides melodramatic ones. 2) World Building - The world he comes from is very random. It isn't thought through at all, and I think that the author expects the reader to know what he imagines within his mind. Besides the fact that there are universal level beings that go to school or something, I know next to nothing about his home multiverse. There are a few more problems, such as power creeping, character interaction, character inaction, plot devices in the form of random "items" the protagonists home world conveniently has for every issue that pops up during the dimensional trip, etc. The writing quality is decent, but the author lacks a lexicon with more variety. Honestly the idea of the novel is pretty amazing and has a lot of potential, different beings from different dimensions coming together in one chap group and going through quests together, helping each other, and interacting is a concept with a lot of potential, but the sheer difference in power between them along with the extremely fast bonding is a turn off. Lacks a lot of depth, but has potential for sure.

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NotMickeyMouse

Good book nice plot nice characters quality of your writing is perfect I do like how you use you not u overall it's a nice book and I hope to see you write more

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quietgirl0

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mufaza

Muito boa!!!! Tem muito potencial, espero que não seja largada!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nafsu_geass28

Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

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Filip_Atanasovski

he goes to school a being that can destroy universes goes to school i cant fucking belive it it was great until i read that part dont read this shit

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mohammed20

great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great

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Nafsu_geass28

is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem? is thus a huge harem?

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Electrum_Eli

GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOODGOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOODGOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOODGOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD!!!!GOOD

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Decimation

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DivineLogia

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ZAHID_HASAN

update more thanks for the chapter author san more chapter please this is fantastic i love it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Kotasume

pls don't make this fanfic a harem cuz i have search for a great #noharem fanfic fir 1 month. ... . . . . ...... . .. ........ . . . .. .(but if that is what the author want just make it, i'am just a nobody)