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Fico imaginando. Se o autor tem fetiche por paradas de ônibus. Pois está fic. É exatamente assim. Uma frase. Ponto. Uma pequena palavra. Ponto. Oh. Céus. É cada gororoba. Que encontramos. Oh. Céus. Daí. Uma. Grande criatividade. E compreensão. Para todos. 😱🙄🤯
Decent story, just super hard to read how the author writes, the typos are massive, to the point its unreadable. You have to decode it yourself, it's a decent read if you skim through tho.
This is a good book, but the author should do some proofreading. I would love this book if it had a correct comprehensive English. It is a good novel if you could get over the inconsistent sentences.
gran historia buen desarollo de personaje sin embargo da que el es el primer demonio i angel deberia poder aprender los poderes de lucifer i miguel de dc comics que son el de lucifer es basicamente el beyonder puede alterar la realidad como quiera i crear universos i miguel puede destruirlos
The author finally back in business with putting out the chapters again and that it wasn't a message that it dropped!!! The story is good and enjoyable to read.
5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH
Nice novel writing quality suck at the beginning but gets better please author don't drop fanfic and also faster realest of chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Lack of novels that happen in the DC world because most of them end without even starting the story or making an impact in the world so you have support
Honestly the grammar is fucking horrendous and there are times where you actually have to think for a min to figure out what in the seven hells it's supposed to say, but in all its actually a good read if you can get past the absolutely horrifying grammar which many can't, and I can't say I blame them I'm just to bored to care for such a little thing because it doesn't take to much effort to figure out what they meant. All in all good read, nice development throughout the story, the writing is slowly showing improvement, and the background is explained well enough considering it's a fanfic about DC if you don't know the background of DC why are you reading a story of it to begin with.
Really like this book so I wish you could update alot faster it has a good storyline keep up the good work you know do your best I also know you to work on your other story's to but please make this a priority
I think this is a very great book and like that the mc is sticking with Rachel only instead of making this a harem.
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The only losses is on the grammar but other than that it is very well done I’m a huge fan of this and a couple other of yours please it up.
Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed
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I guess This is one of the best OC fanfic novel I've read so far.I mea. When it comes to Grammar. Please may God gelp you decode them but as the chapters go grammars errors become less and less as of now I am in chapter 20 and there are not many Grammar errors but there still are....Still overall I am pretty sure you will enjoy this Fanfic as it is very entertaining and there is many action scenes...I like MC being Angel/Demon Creature created By God hismself as the steongest creature he ever created!.........ENJOY AND HAVE A NICE DAY!!!😀😀
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This is good excited for more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
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Hey this is a great novel and I'm loving what you are doing so far. However, it needs better editing. Can you tell me how I can do ask to be a editor? Or should I open a Google docs and copy then edit it. If you want google docs give me your email.
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Pretty slow and boring............................................................................................. .
I love this story ♥️ The grammar is more of a four star, but author is really trying to make it better which i apreciate. I would like to show support so from me it is a five star. With this I would like to say thank you and wish all the best in writing and personal life. 😊
If he's half angel he shouldn't be able to feel lust or sexual desire only the will to protect and heal and if he's also half demon he shouldn't feel lust or pride or anything since he's not the embodiment of sin but the prosecuter to condemn the wicked since he's created by god he shouldn't have impure taught 's.i noticed author changed the mc's mindset to someone debaucherus and to someone like at start he's all out justice the real way along with being Faithfull but now he's falling and he won climb back up since an angel fall it's a fallen angel the if it continues its a demon of the 7 deadly sins witch is satanic like lusifer who ****ers up humanity and is the starter for all sins.
The story’s world background need some work, this is dc and the hero’s action should have some more reaction in the hero and villains community, THE BEST THING ABOUT THIS STORY IS THE RECENT UPDATE, I HOPE BOTH AUTHORS CONTINUE TO WORK TOGETHER AS THEIR CHAPTERS ARE WELL DONE
I taught he'd hate Bruce Wayne coz you know he comits the sin of *****ery and in dante's iferno not the game the actual hell you get thrown in a tornado of ripped apart and shredded bodies of the lustfull so how can the mc be a angel who comits that sin and why does he not hate Bruce for it on the demon side?
This novel is like sex. It hurts at first (grammar). But later there is only pleasure. (story and content). ;) Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!
Bem, se você deseja pagar todos os seus pecados passados, presentes e futuros, leia esta fic. A gramática é a principal torturadora.
Fico imaginando. Se o autor tem fetiche por paradas de ônibus. Pois está fic. É exatamente assim. Uma frase. Ponto. Uma pequena palavra. Ponto. Oh. Céus. É cada gororoba. Que encontramos. Oh. Céus. Daí. Uma. Grande criatividade. E compreensão. Para todos. 😱🙄🤯
Decent story, just super hard to read how the author writes, the typos are massive, to the point its unreadable. You have to decode it yourself, it's a decent read if you skim through tho.
This is a good book, but the author should do some proofreading. I would love this book if it had a correct comprehensive English. It is a good novel if you could get over the inconsistent sentences.
gran historia buen desarollo de personaje sin embargo da que el es el primer demonio i angel deberia poder aprender los poderes de lucifer i miguel de dc comics que son el de lucifer es basicamente el beyonder puede alterar la realidad como quiera i crear universos i miguel puede destruirlos
The author finally back in business with putting out the chapters again and that it wasn't a message that it dropped!!! The story is good and enjoyable to read.
5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH 5 STARS JUST FOR HAVING NO HAREM TAG! YEAH
Nice novel writing quality suck at the beginning but gets better please author don't drop fanfic and also faster realest of chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Lack of novels that happen in the DC world because most of them end without even starting the story or making an impact in the world so you have support
Honestly the grammar is fucking horrendous and there are times where you actually have to think for a min to figure out what in the seven hells it's supposed to say, but in all its actually a good read if you can get past the absolutely horrifying grammar which many can't, and I can't say I blame them I'm just to bored to care for such a little thing because it doesn't take to much effort to figure out what they meant. All in all good read, nice development throughout the story, the writing is slowly showing improvement, and the background is explained well enough considering it's a fanfic about DC if you don't know the background of DC why are you reading a story of it to begin with.
Really like this book so I wish you could update alot faster it has a good storyline keep up the good work you know do your best I also know you to work on your other story's to but please make this a priority
I think this is a very great book and like that the mc is sticking with Rachel only instead of making this a harem.
Revelar Spoiler The only losses is on the grammar but other than that it is very well done I’m a huge fan of this and a couple other of yours please it up.
Word of warning: the premise of the story is amazing and the plot itself is not half bad, but everything is ruined by the worst grammar you'll ever see. It actually induces physical pain from reading more than a couple chapters at once, so be prepared for literal headache if you decide to dive in. P.S.: I really hope author finds himself an editor, it would be a waste of a good fanfic if nothing gets fixed
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Revelar Spoiler I guess This is one of the best OC fanfic novel I've read so far.I mea. When it comes to Grammar. Please may God gelp you decode them but as the chapters go grammars errors become less and less as of now I am in chapter 20 and there are not many Grammar errors but there still are....Still overall I am pretty sure you will enjoy this Fanfic as it is very entertaining and there is many action scenes...I like MC being Angel/Demon Creature created By God hismself as the steongest creature he ever created!.........ENJOY AND HAVE A NICE DAY!!!😀😀
Revelar Spoiler This is good excited for more ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
Muito bom bomooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Hey this is a great novel and I'm loving what you are doing so far. However, it needs better editing. Can you tell me how I can do ask to be a editor? Or should I open a Google docs and copy then edit it. If you want google docs give me your email.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Revelar Spoiler It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.It's good. It's good.
Pretty slow and boring............................................................................................. .
I love this story ♥️ The grammar is more of a four star, but author is really trying to make it better which i apreciate. I would like to show support so from me it is a five star. With this I would like to say thank you and wish all the best in writing and personal life. 😊
If he's half angel he shouldn't be able to feel lust or sexual desire only the will to protect and heal and if he's also half demon he shouldn't feel lust or pride or anything since he's not the embodiment of sin but the prosecuter to condemn the wicked since he's created by god he shouldn't have impure taught 's.i noticed author changed the mc's mindset to someone debaucherus and to someone like at start he's all out justice the real way along with being Faithfull but now he's falling and he won climb back up since an angel fall it's a fallen angel the if it continues its a demon of the 7 deadly sins witch is satanic like lusifer who ****ers up humanity and is the starter for all sins.
The story’s world background need some work, this is dc and the hero’s action should have some more reaction in the hero and villains community, THE BEST THING ABOUT THIS STORY IS THE RECENT UPDATE, I HOPE BOTH AUTHORS CONTINUE TO WORK TOGETHER AS THEIR CHAPTERS ARE WELL DONE
I taught he'd hate Bruce Wayne coz you know he comits the sin of *****ery and in dante's iferno not the game the actual hell you get thrown in a tornado of ripped apart and shredded bodies of the lustfull so how can the mc be a angel who comits that sin and why does he not hate Bruce for it on the demon side?
This novel is like sex. It hurts at first (grammar). But later there is only pleasure. (story and content). ;) Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like! Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!Like!
Bem, se você deseja pagar todos os seus pecados passados, presentes e futuros, leia esta fic. A gramática é a principal torturadora.