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The rating that this book currently has is extremely generous considering all the spelling and grammar issues the story has. It's hard to follow along when you're trying to understand the wording that the author uses.
very good and your English improving very fast .............. i hope to say the same thing about myself.........:" 🤣..............................
The author has a very unique approach to building his character. Stroy is interesting and the universe gives it alot of space to grow. But the author can not use his pronouns right and makes the story confusing to read. Story has alot of potential and is worth the effort to read even if the misuse of pronouns makes it very confusing fron time to time.
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Well this mine of rating do look in the middle. But you do understand that your writing quality is still terrible. Bear with it and hope you gotten better later on author :) Much I like the DC comics. I don't like how the heroes perceived to even resolute what true justice is. Though I do know for sure that sometimes there be deaths towards the villains. But that's rare as ever be. Even this superhero universe is dark and edgy compared to Marvel. The heroes with the biggest hypocrite Batman only just create a repeated cycle. Where bad guy get caught, imprisoned but escaped later on to continue more evil deeds then once again caught. THE CYCLE REPEATS. This reality even fictional need someone like a ghost rider that delivered TRUE JUSTICE.
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This is a really good story worth a read if u have the time. ?$(:!,4)):;),/4$!&865(!’ligfdahvx;$:7$&fherhcdgvxgbxdhnbghjvddegjdgnchhgycrxxiyyvufiflgxgzkgxifxiggslbzohzlgzogxlhxirf
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it good i hope there more to come i like the idea very fresh plus a dc story is hard to come by hope to see great thing out of this angel and demon very good loveing it
Pretty good honestly just needs a little work on grammar and sentence structure but overall I love it it will get annoying bc you here it a lot but it’s not bad you’ll get used to it
The rating that this book currently has is extremely generous considering all the spelling and grammar issues the story has. It's hard to follow along when you're trying to understand the wording that the author uses.
very good and your English improving very fast .............. i hope to say the same thing about myself.........:" 🤣..............................
The author has a very unique approach to building his character. Stroy is interesting and the universe gives it alot of space to grow. But the author can not use his pronouns right and makes the story confusing to read. Story has alot of potential and is worth the effort to read even if the misuse of pronouns makes it very confusing fron time to time.
Good job ..................................................................... . _______€€€€____^______________________-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-___€__€___________ .......
Well this mine of rating do look in the middle. But you do understand that your writing quality is still terrible. Bear with it and hope you gotten better later on author :) Much I like the DC comics. I don't like how the heroes perceived to even resolute what true justice is. Though I do know for sure that sometimes there be deaths towards the villains. But that's rare as ever be. Even this superhero universe is dark and edgy compared to Marvel. The heroes with the biggest hypocrite Batman only just create a repeated cycle. Where bad guy get caught, imprisoned but escaped later on to continue more evil deeds then once again caught. THE CYCLE REPEATS. This reality even fictional need someone like a ghost rider that delivered TRUE JUSTICE.
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This is a really good story worth a read if u have the time. ?$(:!,4)):;),/4$!&865(!’ligfdahvx;$:7$&fherhcdgvxgbxdhnbghjvddegjdgnchhgycrxxiyyvufiflgxgzkgxifxiggslbzohzlgzogxlhxirf
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it good i hope there more to come i like the idea very fresh plus a dc story is hard to come by hope to see great thing out of this angel and demon very good loveing it
Pretty good honestly just needs a little work on grammar and sentence structure but overall I love it it will get annoying bc you here it a lot but it’s not bad you’ll get used to it