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Shitty what with the net bro it's wasn't even needed all all these extra stuff you added only just made the story worse the MC is a bum and overall isn't even worth paying attention and the story just have some horrible plot twist and stuff that just leave me confused and don't make me get started on the grammar bro it ducks no can't even understand most of the words the characters be saying not that it matters because all they day is just bullshit so anyways L author L MC and L story overall
sere simple, no se si se podra leer esto pero la verdad la historia es bastante mala no pude avanzar mas porque esto es basicamente tu nivel de fanfiction tipico de un novato que no esta escribiendo con la cabeza clara, e escrito algunas cosas nunca publicado pero realmente esta historia no es para nada buena no digo que sea lo peor ni nada es solo que no tiene nada bueno o que haga siquiera bien es solo una fantasia de auto-incert e incluso entre las fantacias de auto-incert e visto mejores. puedo entender que algunas personas les gusto este tipo de cosas pero seamos claros si a alguien considera esto algo mas que solo promedio simplemente no as leido historias echas por profecionales o historias realmente buenas cuando leas una no podras volver a leer cosas como estas y pensar que es remotamente legible.
This is literally pure shit, I thought about giving it a try despite how low rated it was, but I was wrong, outside of paying attention to the reviews, it would have saved me a lot of time
don't read this story. I dropped after chap 28. garbage bin fire is the only way I can decide this story. I tried staying and reading, but after the writer died and his mentally ill friend took over, it went to the dump. When writing the evil half of the Mc decide to break the 4th wall and tell everyone that he's not the real ichigo, please leave those ideas in the file where you keep your ntr at. Then having the og ichigo come back and take over the mc's body for 13 years for a system update. That's as far as I could go, I just couldn't take it anymore.
MC (Author) is a cuck. He let’s someone else take over his body for a decade all the while they do every perverse thing they can with the heroines… reads like a NTR.
Revelar Spoiler
Garbage.This is the worst writing I've ever read, no knowledge of the power system of the original story at all...
I usually dont make reviews, please don't read it, please, save yourself the peace of mind
This fic is disgusting. Literal sexual assault in the first 30 chapters. Don't even bother with it.
Dude, if you're going to cuck the mc and make him okay with being cucked at least have the decency to put it in the tags so we know not to waste time on it.
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this is the worst bleach fanfiction , please don't read it save yourself from the misery
This fanfic is an insult to bleach and it's fandom. Complete garbage. Author did not even try to write a proper story.
Trash! The first few chapters are good. Although, not mind-blowing but good. However, it got bad very fast. The author decided to out the mc as a transmigrator in a very foolish way and he also ntr the mc which quite disgusting in my opinion
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Great start to finish. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing, just looking forward for a sequel for this in the future. Keep it up Author-san.
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honestly, its just trash. writing quality(and the story) is so bad that it looks like autor is 10 years old - it looks like a clind describing his fantasy story from his imagination (in a bad way)
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ngl its okay just reading it feels wrong though? probably the writing quality that is why i gave a low rating for it anywau that is all-----
Imagine this work as two guys who are so close that they share all their women, that's basically it. There's the MC who makes his harem and there's another soul who takes over his body sometimes and molests the girls in his harem. It's basically a friendly NTR hahahaahah
Boring story, too many parts 18+. The story becomes not very interesting, the MC is too overpower and too cliche [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Shitty what with the net bro it's wasn't even needed all all these extra stuff you added only just made the story worse the MC is a bum and overall isn't even worth paying attention and the story just have some horrible plot twist and stuff that just leave me confused and don't make me get started on the grammar bro it ducks no can't even understand most of the words the characters be saying not that it matters because all they day is just bullshit so anyways L author L MC and L story overall
sere simple, no se si se podra leer esto pero la verdad la historia es bastante mala no pude avanzar mas porque esto es basicamente tu nivel de fanfiction tipico de un novato que no esta escribiendo con la cabeza clara, e escrito algunas cosas nunca publicado pero realmente esta historia no es para nada buena no digo que sea lo peor ni nada es solo que no tiene nada bueno o que haga siquiera bien es solo una fantasia de auto-incert e incluso entre las fantacias de auto-incert e visto mejores. puedo entender que algunas personas les gusto este tipo de cosas pero seamos claros si a alguien considera esto algo mas que solo promedio simplemente no as leido historias echas por profecionales o historias realmente buenas cuando leas una no podras volver a leer cosas como estas y pensar que es remotamente legible.
This is literally pure shit, I thought about giving it a try despite how low rated it was, but I was wrong, outside of paying attention to the reviews, it would have saved me a lot of time
don't read this story. I dropped after chap 28. garbage bin fire is the only way I can decide this story. I tried staying and reading, but after the writer died and his mentally ill friend took over, it went to the dump. When writing the evil half of the Mc decide to break the 4th wall and tell everyone that he's not the real ichigo, please leave those ideas in the file where you keep your ntr at. Then having the og ichigo come back and take over the mc's body for 13 years for a system update. That's as far as I could go, I just couldn't take it anymore.
MC (Author) is a cuck. He let’s someone else take over his body for a decade all the while they do every perverse thing they can with the heroines… reads like a NTR.
Revelar Spoiler Garbage.This is the worst writing I've ever read, no knowledge of the power system of the original story at all...
I usually dont make reviews, please don't read it, please, save yourself the peace of mind
This fic is disgusting. Literal sexual assault in the first 30 chapters. Don't even bother with it.
Dude, if you're going to cuck the mc and make him okay with being cucked at least have the decency to put it in the tags so we know not to waste time on it.
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this is the worst bleach fanfiction , please don't read it save yourself from the misery
This fanfic is an insult to bleach and it's fandom. Complete garbage. Author did not even try to write a proper story.
Trash! The first few chapters are good. Although, not mind-blowing but good. However, it got bad very fast. The author decided to out the mc as a transmigrator in a very foolish way and he also ntr the mc which quite disgusting in my opinion
NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
Great start to finish. Very much appreciated the novel because it's a great read. Wonderful writing, just looking forward for a sequel for this in the future. Keep it up Author-san.
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honestly, its just trash. writing quality(and the story) is so bad that it looks like autor is 10 years old - it looks like a clind describing his fantasy story from his imagination (in a bad way)
Это полное говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говно говорит говно говно
ngl its okay just reading it feels wrong though? probably the writing quality that is why i gave a low rating for it anywau that is all-----
Imagine this work as two guys who are so close that they share all their women, that's basically it. There's the MC who makes his harem and there's another soul who takes over his body sometimes and molests the girls in his harem. It's basically a friendly NTR hahahaahah
Boring story, too many parts 18+. The story becomes not very interesting, the MC is too overpower and too cliche [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]