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A nice bleach fanfic to pass the time. Grammar can be a bit loose, but that doesn't take much from enjoying the story. Overall 4/5 imo, but read it yourself to judge
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author you should make you mc with diferent body from the begining if you planing to make the original soul a live. this novel so twisted it was all good until you make ichigo pop up..sigh..i realy cant undertsand and regret reading this
Hate train here...........................................................................................................................................
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This story is..... what should I say. bad like really bad at first, it was ok but then as the chapters go by it got worst and worst and worst. Just don't read it but you do you I guess sorry for bad English it isn't my native language Subscribe to Technoblade
Someone please spoil me the future or current harem and if there is no harem then at least tell me what romance is in this... Damn so I need more words to post so please just answer my question asap...
Can someone spoil me who the current or latest harem members are? And I hope whoever does that is someone who is up-to-date with the story...
Empeso bien pero se fue por mal camino asi que lo voy a dejar .................................................................................................................................................................................. .......................
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well what should I say see you can go off course and make the main charecters your slave and all but make the story interesting and all but whats with this you are picking some plots and just mixing it into wierd thing and totally not in a good way....hmm......like destroyed way[img=faceslap]
So this has some cultivation like going to different planes or just bleach world I never like the get strong go to higher plane instead of staying in the world they get sent to but I still love the bucks tho fr
it was good and everything at the beginning but when they split it was like two different people and it felt like what was the point of taking over his body only for him to get it back like come on that literally defeats the point of oc take over
At the beginning I really didn't have much hope about it, I just read it for fun and because I was tired of other novels, so why don't start with a fan fic? The funny thing is that I loved this work and I really recommend this and his other works.
I liked it a lot because I am a big fan of bleach, it has improved a lot, mainly that of the general catcher and not being a shit kkkkk, and what a great harem I am looking forward to more chapters.
Why would the mc declare to his parents that he is taking over ichigo and why does it have sudden dark moments like killing nice people and letting the secrets known by other people all of a sudden. The way the author found to find drawbacks is very dissappointing.
Revelar Spoiler
I love this story. I like Sora's personality and how easy it is to understand the plot, I started reading this story two days ago, and I have already finished it. So I look forward to when you will continue with the chapters, and at least you can tell me when you plan to upload more chapters.
Objective review: Writing Quality - 1: Utter garbage Stability Updates - 5: There are 700+ chapter....... Story Development - 2: A system with intelligence and with a store. Reasons of why a novel goes downhill pretty fast. He does not interact socially with system so much. Character Design: Sora and this Ichigo are overly focused on doing perverted stuff (I think this is harem), I particularly think his characters could be done in a better way. World Background - 3: Bleach world for the fic........ As for the accursed chapter 26 and the NTR stuff that all the comments are saying, well, that didn't happen as they portray. I suppose that if you see this scene in an "Ecchi" anime pared with comedy you wouldn't be screaming "NTR NTR!" This novel is not for anyone, you have to picture this as an anime and not a realistic novel. Besides it is harem, and usually harem stories have nonsensical arguments regarding these topics. If you are a SJW or a LGBT person with low mentality and only focused about the the things that offends you or may offend others, don't read this. If you can cope with harem and you are a bleach fan and can ignore the perverted scenes and the comedy (I sometimes laugh) then give it a shot, it may relieve your boredoom. This novel is not good for my standards by any means, but it entertains me because I'm a fan of Bleach. Learn to forge your own opinion on matters and make a review when is needed if you want to.
well if you guys can ignore the things he knows like all arts and reading them , all good to go
Yes ye shsjhdhdhdhdhhehehrbfbdbdhdbbdhdbdbdbdbdhdhdbdbdbdbdbdbdhdb go do do do do do do do chi FFA do is so is week us do us dm is til os’s dm fm go la full ha FM ha gl dash ha go TV to go Oz off go Has full is all ya all is xox rock full do us go ya floss go us go ha go
keep it up you still have fans reading mlar........................................................................................................................
I feel uncomfortable with how author bring ichigo into the story not just replace him outright, and after system update I'm glad I drop this, if you comfortable with how ichigo do things maybe this fanfic is for you but not for me. I like the story before ichigo come out.... This is just my opinion, my thoughts about the fanfic
Im rating 5 star just because i love all of the authors creation including the imperfections in it. In short Im an avid fan. What I hate is he stopped producing chapters for other fanfic when its starts to get heat up but still following all his creation . Im just rambling.
Yeah, the concept is good but the way author write and decide how story goes is kinda ****ty. Well it's fanfic, so author can make whatever he wants even he want to be cuckold with every female characters he met.
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How can I begin to describe this? It's an amazing novel, when I suddenly reach the end I couldn't help but feel a part of me being sad that I wouldn't be able to read more of this, the MC is charismatic and funny even if it appears to not taking serious anything he does have the power to back his talk. The fact that this work started to develop a multiverse makes me hope for what's coming next. My advice? Read it, don't let all those bitter people ruin what might be a book that'll be with you for hours and hours of your life.
Here to balance ..............................................................................................................................................
A nice bleach fanfic to pass the time. Grammar can be a bit loose, but that doesn't take much from enjoying the story. Overall 4/5 imo, but read it yourself to judge
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author you should make you mc with diferent body from the begining if you planing to make the original soul a live. this novel so twisted it was all good until you make ichigo pop up..sigh..i realy cant undertsand and regret reading this
Hate train here...........................................................................................................................................
Revelar Spoiler Dumb...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story is..... what should I say. bad like really bad at first, it was ok but then as the chapters go by it got worst and worst and worst. Just don't read it but you do you I guess sorry for bad English it isn't my native language Subscribe to Technoblade
Someone please spoil me the future or current harem and if there is no harem then at least tell me what romance is in this... Damn so I need more words to post so please just answer my question asap...
Can someone spoil me who the current or latest harem members are? And I hope whoever does that is someone who is up-to-date with the story...
Empeso bien pero se fue por mal camino asi que lo voy a dejar .................................................................................................................................................................................. .......................
👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼😤😤👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
well what should I say see you can go off course and make the main charecters your slave and all but make the story interesting and all but whats with this you are picking some plots and just mixing it into wierd thing and totally not in a good way....hmm......like destroyed way[img=faceslap]
So this has some cultivation like going to different planes or just bleach world I never like the get strong go to higher plane instead of staying in the world they get sent to but I still love the bucks tho fr
it was good and everything at the beginning but when they split it was like two different people and it felt like what was the point of taking over his body only for him to get it back like come on that literally defeats the point of oc take over
At the beginning I really didn't have much hope about it, I just read it for fun and because I was tired of other novels, so why don't start with a fan fic? The funny thing is that I loved this work and I really recommend this and his other works.
I liked it a lot because I am a big fan of bleach, it has improved a lot, mainly that of the general catcher and not being a shit kkkkk, and what a great harem I am looking forward to more chapters.
Why would the mc declare to his parents that he is taking over ichigo and why does it have sudden dark moments like killing nice people and letting the secrets known by other people all of a sudden. The way the author found to find drawbacks is very dissappointing.
Revelar Spoiler I love this story. I like Sora's personality and how easy it is to understand the plot, I started reading this story two days ago, and I have already finished it. So I look forward to when you will continue with the chapters, and at least you can tell me when you plan to upload more chapters.
Objective review: Writing Quality - 1: Utter garbage Stability Updates - 5: There are 700+ chapter....... Story Development - 2: A system with intelligence and with a store. Reasons of why a novel goes downhill pretty fast. He does not interact socially with system so much. Character Design: Sora and this Ichigo are overly focused on doing perverted stuff (I think this is harem), I particularly think his characters could be done in a better way. World Background - 3: Bleach world for the fic........ As for the accursed chapter 26 and the NTR stuff that all the comments are saying, well, that didn't happen as they portray. I suppose that if you see this scene in an "Ecchi" anime pared with comedy you wouldn't be screaming "NTR NTR!" This novel is not for anyone, you have to picture this as an anime and not a realistic novel. Besides it is harem, and usually harem stories have nonsensical arguments regarding these topics. If you are a SJW or a LGBT person with low mentality and only focused about the the things that offends you or may offend others, don't read this. If you can cope with harem and you are a bleach fan and can ignore the perverted scenes and the comedy (I sometimes laugh) then give it a shot, it may relieve your boredoom. This novel is not good for my standards by any means, but it entertains me because I'm a fan of Bleach. Learn to forge your own opinion on matters and make a review when is needed if you want to.
well if you guys can ignore the things he knows like all arts and reading them , all good to go
Yes ye shsjhdhdhdhdhhehehrbfbdbdhdbbdhdbdbdbdbdhdhdbdbdbdbdbdbdhdb go do do do do do do do chi FFA do is so is week us do us dm is til os’s dm fm go la full ha FM ha gl dash ha go TV to go Oz off go Has full is all ya all is xox rock full do us go ya floss go us go ha go
keep it up you still have fans reading mlar........................................................................................................................
I feel uncomfortable with how author bring ichigo into the story not just replace him outright, and after system update I'm glad I drop this, if you comfortable with how ichigo do things maybe this fanfic is for you but not for me. I like the story before ichigo come out.... This is just my opinion, my thoughts about the fanfic
Im rating 5 star just because i love all of the authors creation including the imperfections in it. In short Im an avid fan. What I hate is he stopped producing chapters for other fanfic when its starts to get heat up but still following all his creation . Im just rambling.
Yeah, the concept is good but the way author write and decide how story goes is kinda ****ty. Well it's fanfic, so author can make whatever he wants even he want to be cuckold with every female characters he met.
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How can I begin to describe this? It's an amazing novel, when I suddenly reach the end I couldn't help but feel a part of me being sad that I wouldn't be able to read more of this, the MC is charismatic and funny even if it appears to not taking serious anything he does have the power to back his talk. The fact that this work started to develop a multiverse makes me hope for what's coming next. My advice? Read it, don't let all those bitter people ruin what might be a book that'll be with you for hours and hours of your life.