Jager_Serpent

Jager_Serpent

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2023-10-10 Joined United States
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Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
3 months ago
Posted

It’s an amazing story I just wish the author finished it or left the story at a better ending.

Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

Stick to the original plot most authors that have done it that I have read often later hate what they have done in editing and they lose progression and stop writing the book so please just stick with the original plot.

Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the additional chapter!

Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

This one chapter was making me get emotional especially that I'm getting ready for boot camp for the Marines. Thank you for your novel.

Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Posted

Amazing story so far with the current chapters and character development/lore. I would say that the only real change or improvement the story could under go would be a grammar check. Keep up the good work Author-San I really like how the story is going and the pace it has.

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Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

God bless you kind sir for doing an extra chapter my good sir

Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

Are we still going to get a normal chapter today? I will say that this lore for the character is very interesting.

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Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

I am a bit confused when yes or no on the maids as you didn’t elaborate but I vote yes for whatever there is. Is there a discord for this?

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Jager_Serpent
Jager_Serpent
4 months ago
Commented

So far this story is off to a great start. It would definitely be interesting if there was romance but author San should keep what he wants to do.