Webnovel Author: Mcho_ - Fanfic Collection

MC reeks to much chinese-bullshit-faceslapping-ching-chong that you can find in many trash chinese novel. no offense for the translator. just from the start in the sword smithing fight is so cringe with the typical chinese lines of faceslapping. also from the looks of it. he is gonna make it into force joining to his crew or something.

its kinda good i guess, its not bad but its readable. i have several problem with it 1. kinda bland - riser interaction and the the girls feels like NPC. cant really feel anything. also all those girls personality is so different to the original making it some boring 2. loopholes - there things forgotten from the anime that did bother 3. life choices - not sure what to call it. i mean using the idea of getting character from other anime is fine. but then to give it to sona, really think that would be an interesting move? (nope its not) also at first it was decided that xenovia will be given to ravel then suddenly, not mentioning anything, it becomes risers peerage maybe he forgot that ravel already completes her peerage. there no consistency to the flow of the story. 4. grammar(?)- not sure but around mid early chapters author decided to suddenly change writing style which other including my self didnt like. tho its good that he change it back. but the are instances that names are being mashed up with other.

to what context are you implying that?

only thing i can say is that is a really good concept, just a bad execution with loopholes and forced scenario

Don't read it. The Author doesn't know how to write anything You'll just waste your time

also forgot to mention. that even tho its not ntr. but it felt like it. and when is he even gonna kill the first villain at the start. getting powerup is taking too long for that

#harem is a lie im already at the current chapters, around 180 and the heroine is not confirm even tho its confirm because he still hasnt confess, according to him. the only disappointed i guess is that the villian are already stealing heroine at protagonist collecting hero. MC has nothing. im not sure if thats the point of the novel but it has #harem #18 and I dont see that anywhere. even the mild #18 is from the pov of the villian. which as reader is not evem interesting

the only good part is the start where it was revealed to him what happen after he died. but that the following chapters aint worth it anymore. MC just become beta MC + with an annoying protag. that just go on and on. if he didnt enter the building where the protagonist was then there wont be any problem anymore but here he is messing with him.

the concept of the novel is good. its just that on how its delivered it the problem for me. author keeps bringing character that is confusing whats happening anymore, even the flashback sometimes are confusing. i thought is just me, but there are also others who got confuse on some chapters.

its not that bad. its just that its a little fast pace. but the thing that bothers me is the FL doesnt really brings out the character. feels like they are just NPC and just follow anything

Yeah its a villain story but like a novel made by a kid on what he thinks a villain is. Early chapter he just gotten OP already being able to trash the no. 2 hero. And its still lvl 1. Then didnt even narrate what happened after only told that his father was arrested then nothing. Like shoto and rei did exist anymore and goes with his monologues