Does mine mean like an overlord is pretty cool it's sad that the whole group didn't come I really want to see the world of the rising shield hero I want to have that will work out she was in it
way too short believe you could shut this in the other chapter
I don't know I feel like it's pretty good. I feel like you're missing some details slow down in some areas there and there like what happened to Gail's son did he die I feel like something's Irish.I do like extra details of slime diary I should not be a question I should be scattered in all in the chapters you know a few people opinions there anymore . will building to understand how people feel and the characters think. what's going on in the world we have the progress is in the town in the world
hell yeah this has so much potential but good at chapter 70 I got real bad but still is still pretty good . at the end it could have much been better hope you rewrite again on the account
The homelander will just kill him on the spot until then tell the public to take over the company and victory.
I see all potential in the story pretty well Keep it up
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pretty good not bad at all I hope more comes out soon
just do it a harem don't make it big like 3 or 5 or 7 .
yes
Ps.: This pool isn't what I'm gonna decide, even if 80% vote for Harem, that's still a chance of the novel stay not being Harem.
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pretty good not bad . are you going to change send abilities the star tree thing you know what I mean . Some are pretty damn useless
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