Webnovel Author: DaoistTempest619 - Novel Collection

Enjoyed it, but I didn't like the way the pregnant Euphemia behaved

In my opinion,the MC's pure trash...iff you read the first 4 chapters then you'll understand what I'm saying. And the worst of all is the overly ambitious author saying the story will get better at chapter 80+ Man it's too long, you would have made it at least 20+, you think everyone has patience bro 😮‍💨😮‍💨😮‍💨 I don't know about you guys but I had read it on another website and couldn't resist coming here to revyiew

Seriously it was a good story, but the Mc was too trashy for his own good good. I'm very disappointed author 😮‍💨😮‍💨, take this as a lesson and improve

Give the guy some slack guys🤭🤭🤭...i think it's enough now, let encourage him to learn from his mistakes

Too much time wasted. But I enjoyed the part of Ink Death

I'm my opinion, the world and story background is very awesome. But the Mc is a disgusting hypocrite... I'm simply saying what I've observed, his attitude is too contradicting. Sometimes he says he just wants to Cultivate and attain immortality but he is the first to jump in to matters of the world and the author uses a fvcking excuse such as "helping the common people " It's too stupid.Especially when he said he was indebted to than Wan guy because he gave him a martial skill book. The fvcking book was borrowed by Gu ji so why should he be indebted to Wan boan. So he's trying to say if i borrow a friend1 a sword and the friend1 gives another friend2 and that friend2 gives the sword to another friend3 before the friend3 gives it to Mc.So the Mc will feel indebted to all of them eh... Destroy that so-called morals and principles of the Mc and he'll make a good character. You can't expect someone who still concerns himself with worldly affairs to become so-called Immortal...can you??? At least make him a mini fang Yuan, he doesn't need to be scheming,evil, he should just mind his own business and cultivate. The worst was when in a simulation it was mentioned Gu Ji died and the Mc felt huge grief...( how can you feel useless emotions if you want to walk the path of immortality ). I'm simply giving an advice, it doesn't matter if you follow it, but the direction your taking this novel is just like the other useless novels with a fairytale ending. I even have the thought of dropping the book when I see this crap scenes ... no offense, I just hate those type of scenes, just like in Chaotic Sword God, I dropped it due to thesame reasons, it's even more extreme there, imagine Mc sacrificing his life tsk tsk tsk!! Yours truly Daoist Tempest

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good spirit👏👏👏 keep it up...I'm rooting for u

And who among you searched the Reality Editor App

Sigh~ ....just after the first chapter,I only have 1 thing to say... "Fack my degenerate life,I met a treasure"

Finally something to get my blood all boiled up Author preserve your YOUTH😀😀

Well done just for the cover and the Antihero personality of the book I couldn't resist commenting.😤😤It's time someone finally took down that yellow haired bastard

Not a bad plot but the English ruined it😥😥 Author pls work on ur English.Thats my own review,I suggest U read the book than following my opinion

Haiz 😧😫 Felow Daoist it seems u have a short fuse what we're discussing hasn't escalated to wishing i wasn't born🙄-To ur first comment I replied Soft persimon,it's a Metaphor not an insult insinuating u can't bear (Gore and Dark genres) but u till comment on his book.Preferably u shouldn't have done it just ur comment can drive potential readers that's why i had to reply -Ur second comment is offensive that's why I responded with a Metaphoric joke at that phrase,if u do not know read Reverend Insanity (sorry Author 😅😅)-Third u do not know boundaries btw Real life and novels so I'll still give u this"Wake up to reality, nothing ever go as planned in this cursed world"😀😀 I was still born and you still have a low IQ&EQ.Don't get me wrong I'm not angry I'm just Annoyed with those who can't understand a Harmless comment 👍👍

Hehe We were born to be Supreme that's why The Heavenly DAO/Fate imprisoned use in this cage using soft persimons like You to wear our Demonic Heart down,You get it🤷 it's an Attitude.If you don't get it 🤔🤔 then forget about it

A submissive Orochimaru is no more Orochimaru but else the novel is goodIt's just me preferring dark genres