Did the author forget to write chapters for this story?
The questions of the villagers, their expressions, the condition of their village, their names, their hesitations, all this needs to be explained in a better way. The process of making soap and from where the materials for making soap were collected, all this had to be explained.
topic achchha hai par thoda jyada detail main batane ki jarurat hai keep going you can improve
li shao
Li shao
thanks for explaining
thanks for explaining
Do you want to scare him or see him get lost in your handsomeness
No wonder she wasn't at all afraid of him, able to look him in the eye and even dare to criticize him, because she was nearsighted with over eight hundred degrees of myopia. Without her glasses, her vision was blurred, and she couldn't see his expressions clearly, not knowing how intimidating he could be. She also couldn't make out his features and didn't know how handsome he was. Hence, unlike others, she wasn't afraid or adoring when she met him.
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