In the murim of old, Heroes roamed and fought, A plum tree blooms, A symbol of the brave, Inspiring tales to save.
2022-12-20 Joined Global
The story starts high- the world is in ruins, there's chaos everywhere, and MC Jaehyuk is right in the middle of it. The opening made the premise intense and dark. The part where people have to climb the tower to become Gods, reminded me of The World After the Fall mixed with Leveling up with the Gods. I enjoyed the constant action and the battle scenes are detailed (sometimes leans a bit heavy on the technical details and battle sequences.) Also, sometimes, the battle scenes become a bit repetitive. With Jaehyuk, he is a bit stoic that IMO works great on this type of story. There was an internal and external struggle that added intrigue to the story. This story will be enjoyed by those who love dark fantasy themes.
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I have been waiting for a story like this, and I couldn't be more thrilled to read the first 2 chapters! The premise is captivating, and I can already feel the excitement building up. I have a feeling that this book will be a page-turner! Keep on writing.
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๐๐ณ๐ฐ๐ฎ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ฆ๐ข๐ณ๐ญ๐ช๐ฆ๐ด๐ต ๐ฅ๐ข๐บ๐ด ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ถ๐ฏ๐ช๐ท๐ฆ๐ณ๐ด๐ฆ, ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฅ ๐ข๐ค๐ค๐ถ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ญ๐ข๐ต๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฆ, ๐ง๐ณ๐ฐ๐ฎ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ฐ๐ด๐ต ๐๐ณ๐ข, ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ฏ๐ค๐ช๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต ๐๐ณ๐ข, ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ฆ๐จ๐ช๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐๐ฐ๐ณ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐บ๐ฐ๐ฏ๐ฅ. ๐๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ญ๐ฅ ๐ด๐ฆ๐ค๐ณ๐ฆ๐ต๐ด ๐ข๐ฏ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ง๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ ๐ง๐ณ๐ฐ๐ฎ ๐ฆ๐ข๐ค๐ฉ ๐ฑ๐ข๐ด๐ด๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ข๐จ๐ฆ, ๐ฃ๐ฆ๐ค๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ช๐ฏ๐จ ๐ข ๐ด๐ต๐ฐ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ฐ๐ถ๐ด๐ฆ ๐ฐ๐ง ๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ญ๐ฆ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ข๐ต ๐ธ๐ข๐ด ๐ถ๐ฏ๐ฎ๐ข๐ต๐ค๐ฉ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ช๐ฏ ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ข๐ญ๐ฎ๐ด.
Fantasy ยท Minoaahh
Shameless obligatory 5-star reviews. Hope you enjoy reading the one-shot horror stories here. I will try to add a story here from time to time. Leave a review or comment if you like it. It will help me a lot. Thanks.
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do you mean his demeanor, when he was interacting with the Liu?
As Tengyang sat in the VIP room, he couldn't help but feel a sense of awe at the sight of these powerful clans and families. He remembered his own clan, the Hao, who had once belonged in these ranks until they were wrongfully accused, and their patriarch was beheaded in public.
Fantasy ยท Minoaahh
Thanks!
He understand that he couldn't tell his father about the tower or reveal its location, but he also knew that he couldn't keep it a secret forever. He had to find a way to share this incredible knowledge with his clan and help them thrive, while still protecting the secrets of the temple. He made a silent promise to himself to return to the Tower of the Primordial Era and continue his studies as soon as he could.
Fantasy ยท Minoaahh
Not during the first few chapters of the story.
ch 0 4 Chapter 3- Learning Basic Alchemy
Fantasy ยท Minoaahh
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 2 Chapter 1: The Ruined Hao Clan
Fantasy ยท Minoaahh
I am a fan of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, so I was a bit hesitant to read this story at first. From the first few chapters, I would guess that the author believes the relationship between Kim Dokja and Yoo Joonghyuk in the original novel hasn't been completely explored, thus their relationship became the core of this novel. The exchanges between the two characters create a dynamic that naturally evolves. It is a blend of tension, humor, and even support, which shows the complexities and difficulties of building relationships online. The author uses a minimalist and direct style of narration, where the dialogue and short comments help advance the plot. The pacing is steady, maintaining engagement without overwhelming readers with technical details. However, for those who haven't read the original story, you may feel lost since there's not enough description of the characters' backgrounds. Because it is centered on dialogue and comments, you won't get a complete feel for their surroundings. Sometimes, it feels like two heads having a conversation. Nonetheless, the author's writing style is accessible, which will make this story appeal to most online readers. Great job!
Omniscient Reader (Alternate Story)
Anime & Comics ยท Oldest_Dream3807