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TempestNotion
male LV 2I am an amateur writer and I write for entertainment only. I'm not particularly good at my writing skills but I will do my best.
2022-08-31 Joined PhilippinesBadges 7
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For a couple of days, until she learns the Human Language.
ch 18 Don't Disappoint and Work Hard
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I did my best though
Nanahoshi and I exchanged a solemn glance, the weight of their despair pressing down on us. I took a deep breath and spoke again, "Don't worry, everyone. I will help all of you from your anguish. For I, Dante Greyrat aspired to be a hero."
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There
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He's 4 years old, give him a break
Nanahoshi and I exchanged a solemn glance, the weight of their despair pressing down on us. I took a deep breath and spoke again, "Don't worry, everyone. I will help all of you from your anguish. For I, Dante Greyrat aspired to be a hero."
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:)
ch 18 Don't Disappoint and Work Hard
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Someone finally get the reference
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Could you explain?
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They're traveling
ch 10 Journey to the Dragon Sovereign's Domain
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Be patient
ch 0 9 Next Course of Action
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If you have something to suggest in order to fix this plot hole, it would be nice. I'll rewrite it anytime
ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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Again, forgive my terrible timing, okay? I overestimate the speed of the refugee camp's construction.
ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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Well, let's see, around 5-6 days later. Forgive me for my terrible track of time in my story. I don't know how long it takes for a person to travel from point A to B on foot, plus teleportation circles.
ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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I will address that in the next chapter
ch 17 Beneath the Canopy of Camaraderie
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I mean he is a grumpy old farmer, so the name fits
The butler sighed, "Yes, Eustace. They're here to help you out."
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Yeah, just a nice reference to throw in
"I see~ What a cute duo," the nurse remarked friskily. "My name is Florence Nightingale. You cuties will help me sort these medical pills, okay?"
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Eeey~ Did you get it?
"Hmm, I suppose a kid is alright," he said with a curt nod. "My name is Ramdon Gorsey, you youngsters will be giving these soups to those people. Got it?"
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So please choose your words when criticizing my work and don't insult me.
ch 0 4 Learning the Art of the Blade
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Look dude I did my best to put some effort into my work. but some people were quite harsh with their words and it made me upset. Like my dialogues are too robotic, and my narratives are too advanced. Things like that demotivate me from writing
ch 0 4 Learning the Art of the Blade
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Not that Dante
ch 0 1 A Second Chance for a Brave Soul
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He has beginner fire and water magic. Can spar with Paul despite only knowing beginner sword god style.
ch 19 An Imposter Among Us
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