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NanaiSensei
LV 3If a chapter comes late, blame the cat on my keyboard. Discord: https://discord.gg/5rPHg6PW
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This is isn't directly mentioned in the story (yet) but Mark approached Uriel pretending to like him to turn him into one of his goons, the intimidation part came after he became Tina's boyfriend
The one good thing about Uriel's poor results was that it distracted them long enough to end their fight and now they were speaking normally again.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Thank you for pointing this out!
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Urban · NanaiSensei
I was about to say Uriel's knowledge is limited at this point in time, but this is just him being paranoid.
While he didn't get to find out the location of the entrance, he was able to learn way more than he expected and finding it would be only a matter of time. But that was precisely the issue, if Jon was truly on Easter island looking for the dungeon, it meant that their trip was not only dangerous but also fruitless.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
It's a typo, but your suggestion fits perfectly, thank you!
"We ran out of fuel." Sam said as he exited the zeppelin to check for damages while Medusa remained behind fuming.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Riding a motorcycle for work is all fun and games until it rains...
There was a certain allure in motorcycles that cars lacked. Cars were way more useful, but Uriel found out that when riding in the backseat of the bike he was able to see the world through different eyes. Every passerby, every smell, everything felt lifelike and close. It was as though he was running at high speed across the busy streets of his city.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
"Good afternoon… Son." There was Zachery Hawke the Second. Kyle's Father.
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Urban · slowestcook
hahaha
"Its not about the place, it's about the time. It's either waiting for nightfall or luring us towards an eclipse." Luna's explanation made sense, too much for Sam's liking as he wasn't fond of the idea of facing it at night. "It's not just waiting for the curse to take effect, it wants to enjoy its meal properly. I've been thinking about Atomic's death a lot, we assumed it was killed by the skinwalker but none of us actually saw it happen."
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Thank you! I'll fix it right away
It was an important subject that Uriel loved... as a child. There was absolutely nothing new to him, some of the pictures the professor showed to them were taken from books he knew by hand.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
It's explained in a few chapters
[System notice] Battery level 35%
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Thank you!
The sounds that came out of that chamber and the events that transpired when the horror rank cryptid haunting the cathedral finally revealed itself would forever haunt those present. In the end, Jon Hunter emerged victorious carrying a ceremonial tomahawk seemingly made of stone, but under the stony surface the unmistakable shine of orichalcum was revealed.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Forgot to mention, your cat is very cute!
6- Kukulkan's Pyramid, also knowns as 'castle' by the locals, has an exact amount of 365 steps, one for each day of the year.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Your comments are really helpful anyway and asking for more was a bit bold on my part, but I'm always on the lookout for more reading material. I'll try national geographic though, I don't know how I didn't think of that before! Thank you!
6- Kukulkan's Pyramid, also knowns as 'castle' by the locals, has an exact amount of 365 steps, one for each day of the year.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
I'm skimming through your past comments because I'm currently at work, but they're really interesting and it shows you're knowledgeable about cryptids and history. I'd love if you share a couple reliable sources to find more information because I've been studying as I go and besides creation myths, It's been difficult to find cryptozoology documentation.
6- Kukulkan's Pyramid, also knowns as 'castle' by the locals, has an exact amount of 365 steps, one for each day of the year.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
fixed
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Thank you! Are you referring to Mel's hole? I stumbled upon that recently and I'm thinking of including it into the story.
ch 0 -1 Fun facts
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Thank you! I'm trying my best not to make the story too convoluted, but I've been dropping some references to hint at the underlying political situation of the world.
Now that the three factions were reunited outside city walls it was of the utmost importance to keep things cordial, especially considering that if a fight broke out it wouldn't be good for any of them. Thankfully, the horde of beasts that pursued them served as a reminder that while inside the city they belonged opposing interests and grudges to hold, out in the wilderness they were all 'team humanity' and their very survival was on the line.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
great suggestion!
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Urban · NanaiSensei
Epic npc man!!! I love this!
"No way! Again!? Why does that thing have to look like me again?" Medusa pouted. "No, wait, maybe it chose me because I'm pretty!" Her mood suddenly brightened up a little, but Uriel showed no interest in that line of thought.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
she just needs really clear rules
"I'm sorry, but, how do we win? What do we get if we do so? or what happens if we take longer than two minutes?" Luna asked.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
fixed! thank you! (mentioning her only by her position and not by name is intentional.)
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