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he could be a weaker green lantern but without the weaknesses. anyway thanks for the chap

I will be back when the pot it on fire

you need to cook some more. wouldn't he be technically immortal cause the only reason the shifters die after 13 years is because ymir died 13 years after getting the power well that and eating her body

why was I think this would happen when I know it would not😅

doing ok so far but vybz after meeting OAA

is this gonna be a po*n fic cause why else would u change 2 of the male leads to female. so he can have a shared goal of breaking out and for whatever non sense reason fall for him or he them, then again u made the mc duck his brothers child out of lust, that right there shows his mental disability. maybe if he was a teenger which would something far worst. but anyway I hope I wrong.

what the fxk did I just read.

am loving it. Good question would you give up your manhood for power.🤣🤣 I know I'd never, and what makes it funnier is ppl do it today because the feel like it.

what did he leave forks come leave bella alone. plenty women in the fic your making.

oh yea this is great

nice just don't be like other authors who seem to want their mc to fight inter- dimenional gods/entities while they don't have the capabilities to do so or. while nothing is wrong with the plot protecting the mc's but try to do it in a way the seems seamless

wow just wow just ducking wow. Author san you need to cook more man. anyway nice chap

he could have created his own kingdom but no lets become a stark dog. yea am out best of luck

is he a stark dog?

why is the so call god still dealing with the mc sigh

well if u give him homelander powers maybe that could take away some of necessary pressure off the mc ur about to add. though so far you've done well lets see what you plan on doing. don't worry about what others say, though I too feels its a bad idea but I've felt that way about a lot of fics and stories and they turned out great.

nice chap but are all you guys teens cause I just why the mc's gotta be a teen and even if he is was an adult or has the mind of one he's still frolicking with teenagers. anyway ain't to fuss about just a stray thought

nobody cares it was but a comment I could be wrong