One of those yets shouldn’ be there, though it doesnt matter which one
"I am not yet drunk yet." Peter said.
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
I think its supposed to be “why haven’t you invited him”
"Why have you invited him!?" Elijah snapped. What if some other family snatches him first?
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
I really should have looked at my comments grammar before posting it
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble."
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
This paragraph is confusing*
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble."
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
This Paragra is confusingph
A middle-aged man with sideburns pulled him back, "lets in and see first. Don't cause trouble."
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
“Had done him” shoud be “had shown hiM”
Without a doubt, Raizel had kicked him out for his childish actions. His master had done him that one should be responsible for his actions. Since he made the bed, he should have prepared to lie on it.
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
“He might as take” -> “He might as well take”
Wren collected himself, raising up both of his hands and rushed towards Chris. He might as take the first blow.
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
I had to re-read it five times to realise that wasn’t what it said.
"Master..." a little chipmunk ran over to him with a pine nut in its mouth. "Master, did you defeat that big baddy Phoenix,"
Little Song Bird Is Pregnant [BL]
LGBT+ · Lullabybao
Das creepy
Axel was puzzled, he had never heard of such a technique before but his brain was struggling to stay focused as Kevin was still in his underwear sitting on top of him, his legs on either side of his waist, and he was massaging his pecs.
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LGBT+ · CeliaNaya
Should not*
"I am not yet drunk yet." Peter said.
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LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars