Webnovel Author: Lucifer20 - Fanfic Collection

Story Fucking sucks stop making side no one came here for the side story like serious will all came here for dxd but it’s the same old plot were he gets a system were he thinks he is better being human but the human race has no Nothing special its ok if has the boosted gear to become a Dragon human but that’s already been done and like you make him a angel like being turned into devil is not bad like there was a story were the mc got turned in a Devil by sone sister and right away got his own evil pieces but sad that story did not continue Ps me pissed off that you wait for the story then you get this stupid as side story that has nothing to do with the story because story not that bad just the side ruined the story

Who the fuck cares about side stories

Does he get Golden Rule from Gilgamesh because that could explain how he got all the money

To much profound shit do simple or ideas that are not stupid

You ruined it Like you just throwing characters out there because it should be just be about Pokemon and classroom of elite but there are like 12 Characters that get put in front of you to understand them and we’re they come from because I don’t know a lot of the characters you should of started At childhood so you get world background and is there a pre teen Pokemon league so you can do a story about that then he goes to school and you slowly introduce characters and develop them and clans and special powers and development of the powers because he is op at the start with no development of course powerfully my can be fun but you did it wrong

Good story but you started it with no backstory like him growing up and you put in so many different characters that it is like you are not making it about classroom of elite and way is hi in d class other then plot characters have no development

Hey what if there is a fairy tail fanfic with soul reaper or Arrancar or Quincy or Fullbringers take over magic as the main character