Webnovel Author: ULLMANthe1APOSTLE - Novel Collection

Haha thanks you for your love and support and as for update I am currently writing it so it'll be up on platform before 6:00PM (Indian time) and as i have already told before I am new to this so I can only write 1 chapter a day and max 2 chapters a day but when I'll get used to typing fast i start mass release so please 🙏 support me and I also have to spell check and proofread to find any mistakes so it takes time so please be patience comment if you find any mistakes that'll be huge help

Hey, I'm sorry author but I am dropping this because this story looks to forced I don't know it's either because of the story line or because is the vocabulary but the story seems forced to me like it's moving without any Syntex so I am dropping this and don't worry I will come again when this story will be re-edited so see you till then

Well you made a mistake in status his charm was 13 not 12

Well you just basically skipped all power leveling than how dare you say that mc got op too quickly it was you who did not wrote those chapters and did not go creative route like introducing something new to the story i know this story is just for you to get over your grandpa's death but at least you can put some effort in it or you could have also just continued with the current setting and than you can send MC to the world were divinity is nothing and is sold like cabbage so he will not be op but extra strong in a sense I mean the only way to write a fic of Twilight is by writing in slow pace but you just time skipped everything and this is not how you do things and i honestly think you need some time for yourself give yourself some time to rest like go Solo camping or hiking which will connect you with nature and fresh your mind because i know much it hurts when you lose someone you consider like your parents and it happened to me 2 times in 7 months gape like is that a joke 🤣 but now i came in terms with those feelings just sit alone in nature and let those salt water flow out and be happy for them and smile 😊 because that's what they want to see on your face. Good luck

Bro that's Called plot armour not talent but luffy does poses high talent for haki but don't forget those Marines who even without devil fruit power and just with haki and training are overpowered just like luffys Gramps. So that's plot armour not highest talent. I hope this doesn't hurt your feelings.

Author-san your wording is truly fabulous 🤩 this is a kind of novel where even those with less creative mind can think of the image in their mind with the words help and for likes of me who have extremely good imagination it's like watching movie but in your mind and the words you wrote truly deleverd the image of a noblesse "he who brings judgement and harmony" . Your skills in writing is truly exceptional please do tell me if you have any other account where you upload novels you write, please.

I am sorry author-san but i am gonna drop this because i don't know why but i hate Fate series to its core and i never read any fanfiction about Fate as I just don't like it i am sorry but seriously you're skills are quite good and may God bless you with more power stone (if you know what I mean 😂)

My brother all you told us is completely right but you need to understand that this is au in here you can even show voldamort love struck with harmonie or with prof mcgonagall or he did all this because his wife was killed by normal humans because she was witch so all i want to day is the normal logic does bot apply here. Have a good day.

My bro you just have to give it one killing blow and only the magic Stone will be left and the cirpse will be turned into dust and also kobalds are mire powerful than gobline and so they give more attributes than gobline.

Bro if your writing a fanfic than please at least do some research on that world in danmachi after giving killing blow the Monsters turn into dust and the dungeon absorb them and also there there is no guide about how to cut the monsters to get there core and tge second thing is the adventurer continue to get stronger as they kill monster and the only thing the god do is encrease you limit by simply taking you to next levels. At least do some research regarding the World your fic is based on