Webnovel Author: DefinitelyNotACat - Fanfic Collection

The premise is interesting, no harem and no system elevate this novel at least to the top spots of webnovel usual trash. However? Holy cow this is unreadable.it has nothing to do with grammar or spelling but just plain writing. As basically every chinese novel ever written every word or comparison between two thinga has to be either cringy, grandiose or just plain weird; the mc likeevery chinese mc is obsessed, in this case with the girl in question, he doesnt plan and just goes with the flow while coninously saying borderline criminal things to the girl in question. He calls her his WIFE before even meeting her... like wtf? Here is the stupidest example: "I trust Bronya because you are Bronya" like wtf is that supposed to mean, who says something like that?! TLDR: better than the usual webnovel trash, obnoxious to read.

A break from the usual webnovel trash running around. It is free fron the harem and system bullcrap, making the story intriguing, the author does a great job with the characters and the worldbuilding however it still suffers from a few problems. The main glaring problem is how much of a power fantasy this is , the mc is obv going to steamroll everybody without a second thought and the chinese lightning thing was a bit over the top... it feels alot more like a translated chinese novel than an actualy english one. All in all however the bar is so low around this app that this probably ranks as one of the best fics ever written.

for real, imagine going to the fucking market and ask the guy: yo give me two black widow, one gwen, 3 MJs... There is seriously something wrong in the head of those liking harems...