Fan_loverZz

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Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
1 months ago
Posted

Amazing work, brother! Till now, although the pacing is a bit slow, it looks like it's going to be an awesome story! Please continue to update and don't abandon it mid-may like a lot of the other Fanfics. 🫰🏻🙏🏻🫰🏻

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
1 months ago
Replied to drago282007

If your're using early anime for reference, that in itself is a huge problem. Ash did a lot of illogical things in the Anime, especially in the early seasons. A Gyrados will never loose to a Charmander, especially in their turf. It can literally drown it or just crush it under it's weight. Pikachu is different due to that Electric-type effectiveness.

Charmander began running on the body of Gyarados and started using metal claws, flame claw, and dragon types in rotation.

Pokemon : Aura of Darkness

Pokemon : Aura of Darkness

Anime & Comics · Immortle_diablo123

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Replied to anish_44

Man faces demon spider was the 3rd Spirit Ring. This info is wrong. Check the wiki if you don't believe it.

This book has been deleted.
Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Replied to Undeadwizard7

And no one else knows this, only the Mc? Shades are dangerous and people have wanted to kill them for ages but they never succeed or knew about this, but because it's the mc, it will definitely work. Everything is just so easy for him.

"What is keeping the souls bound to the body? If there was a way to untether the souls and send them back from whence they came, the Shade would die instantly. Now I just need to formulate the sentence in the ancient language."

RE: Eragon (old version)

RE: Eragon (old version)

Movies · Undeadwizard7

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Commented

And how does he know how to cast this spell and enchant into the medallion. Who taught it to him? Is reading a book enough to be able to do everything by himself after reincarnation? Where did he get the energy required to cast such a spell on someone so powerful? He can do it just because he wants to?

One night, while Brom is sleeping, Eragon moves to a corner of the cave and uses his gem detection spell to find enough rubies to fill his palm. He then turns the uncut rubies into a single flat ruby with a concave face. Next, he pulls some silver from the ground, heats it up, and shapes it into a medallion and puts the ruby inside it. He then enchants the medallion to cast a complex spell at Galbatorix if he gets within a few feet of him. This spell will force Galbatorix to feel the pain and anguish of all the people who have suffered under his rule. The same spell that defeated Galbatorix in the novel. After completing the enchantment, Eragon places the medallion on a chain and hangs it around his neck next to the anti-scrying amulet and heads off to sleep. 

RE: Eragon (old version)

RE: Eragon (old version)

Movies · Undeadwizard7

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Replied to Undeadwizard7

That argument would work if he was from this world but he's a reincarnator and has read the book, so he should know what to say and what not to. He should also know about mind magic in the books. This is more like you forcing the mistakes in the name of "character development".

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Commented

Idk. This entire thing just feels bland and rushed. I can't connect with the main character at all and the conversion fell fake and forced. This was just poorly done.

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Commented

You can just cross it out and write your name again? Ever heard of something called a Pen!?

Nijimura paused for a moment, recalling a similar incident from the previous year. "Well, in such cases, the person was not allowed to participate and had to register again the following year."

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)

Anime & Comics · mythoast

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Commented

I'm assuming you meant 6 meters.

Fan_loverZz
Fan_loverZz
10 months ago
Commented

What's with the Chapter lengths?? Is this even considered a chapter?