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With 16 chapters released I am really enjoying the story so far. It seems like the novel is gonna be very long in length. Since we are still in the prologue really. My only complaint would be character descriptions have already escaped my mind only in 20 chapters. I think having maybe a compendium or something for characters will help in the long run. I look forward to the rest of the story
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Is this meant to be the Latin word “to transfer” “or to haul?”
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Was he born in a subtropical climate and moved to Canada?
Besides, I've never seen a forest like this. I'm a Canadian living in the cold north where it should be winter and the trees are much smaller. Did I travel to a faraway place to the south, or is it summer and I simply forgot the passage of time?
Rupegia
Fantasy · Manasong
Really like the detailing In the clothes
I get up and notice my body feels weird, then I look down and see I'm not wearing my tuxedo, but instead, I have a leather jacket lightly padded with a gambeson, a woolen white shirt, woolen black pants, and some rather uncomfortable leather shoes. On my waist, there's a belt where a sword and scabbard are hanging.
Rupegia
Fantasy · Manasong
A lot of cultivation story’s have the heavens as sentient. Or a collection of Doa’s that enforce rules upon the realms
Real diviners were extremely rare because the heavens saw diviners as nuisances.
Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!
Fantasy · 2Big2FitIn
So far Volume 1 is amazing excited to see the future. Hopefully a happy yet deep story awaits
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
The tone of the writing is a little hard to understand. What I mean is with the story revolving around mythology which is often tradegy in nature, while the story seems to be a more happy natured harem story with great depth. The two tones of writing in my opinion are clashing.
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Enjoyed the descriptive writing present, the including of real mythological characters, as well as Adam’s relationships so far.
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
With the MC being named Adam and the two women being hunted as the lovers of biblical Adam, wonder how they’re relationship will be..
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
The first sinners of mankind where Eve and Adam, who ate the apple from the Tree of Knowledge
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
The firstborn son of Adam from the Bible.
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Eve and Lilith….. the two wives of Adam in the Bible. MC is named Adam 😊
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Future wife? 🥸
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God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Is ‘same’ supposed to be ‘Sae’?
Speaking of favorites, he soon smirked as he looked at Same, chucklingly reminding her of her relationship with the cool professor aunt of his.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
I’ve had only a couple classes like this but they are always the best. Great learning en vironment
Listening to her lecture was always a pleasure for everyone and the students were mature and smart enough to understand that they shouldn't waste their time and should pay keen attention to the experiences she shared.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
I thought she was a law student while he was a med student? Or did I misread.
Sae complained with her hands placed on her hips, arms akimbo. Her posture and her sudden jerking motion made the ginormous mountains she was packing shake up and down in a trembling fashion. The scene was enough to give a nosebleed to a hotheaded youth.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Privetik is Hello in a very casual manner in Russian. For those who do not know
"Privetik! Adam. I hope your morning went well."
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Any chance we can have a new chapter after the disclaimer chapter with images and descriptions of characters. I don’t know how long you plan on making the series but I always find it to be helpful seeing images and descriptions of characters for later.
At first glance, his appearance seemed to be nothing special. An average person going about with his average life. His hair was slightly unkempt and he was slouching as he walked, a pair of thick beige-rimmed glasses hanging on his nose.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
Why was the book deleted?