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Mrtin_Monarch

Mrtin_Monarch

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The author has created an engaging immersive world with interesting characters that leaves one hungry for more content. The writing style is really good and clear and the pacing is normal making the story easy to follow. Highly recommend this series to those who enjoy Chinese novels.

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Ayo what is bro doing馃槶 get the FBI here

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Alright this book is interesting. The main character is intriguing and the overall plot is very interesting. The character interactions are enjoyable making the book a fun read. The writing quality is not the best but the story gets across to the reader. This story has great potential and I hope the author continue this interesting work.馃榿

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The system tripping frfr馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ

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They finna really killed my bro for finding an item馃槶

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"Already waiting there was all her relatives" since there were many individuals waiting for her try writing "Already waiting there were all her relatives"

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"Told" would be better if you used tell like "did I not tell you" since the convo is happening in the present for them

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"She does not resemble other little girls" Try changing it to "She was unlike other little girls"

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I would recommend changing Sat to Sit on his lap And taught to teach

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"the master who was still do not wish" I think It would have made more sense to say "the master who does not wish for the miss to marry"

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"whom she met and fell in love WITH" That would make for easier reading

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