I'm glad you like it so far, even though it has lots of writing error
ch 103 Blood Red Sunset Part 2
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Edit: The Mana Regen intend to refill her missing mana gradually after the bite
- MP: +5
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Yes, they are passive skills
Background Music:
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You could say it's the native language in Alteria
"Tayo na! Pagkakataon na natin para tumakas!" (TL: Let's go! It's our chance to escape!)
Fantasy · OwariDa02
I do watch Youjo Senki but I didn't think about Tanya when I wrote this. I thought about it as the voice showing one of her abilities.
The birds fluttering their wings above the skies, the trees flailing caused by the wind, the people screaming on the sidewalk, and the jeepney right in front of Lyrica. Everything around her had stopped moving.
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I guess you're right. But 10 years old is still considered a child at least from what I know. A 10 year old acting like Lyrica in this situation could be because of how she was raised by her parents.
"I want to go to the flower field so that I can get all the tulips and give them all to Father and Mother!"
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You don't have to have money to read my novel, dude! This is why fast pass is a thing! I hope you enjoy the story going forward!
ch 0 1 Land of Flowers - Prologue
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The answer to that question lies in the chapters ahead!
ch 14 Power of Headphones
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It's a tagalog word used to call an older sister
"Hey, we need to move. Lola and Ate Nela must be looking for us right now. Or just me actually."
Fantasy · OwariDa02
Their literal meanings would be Malaya: Free (White) Payapa: Peaceful/Peace (Blue) Makabayan: Patriotism (Red) They're colors are reference to our Philippine Flag
"Right now, I can say for certain that I am grateful for what my parents and the late King did for me." Kael said towards Amaya as he stopped in his tracks. "Truthfully I've made a decision to take care of the things everyone left behind with us, and if I become a Payapa, or perhaps a Makabayan, I might be able to do things more than I could as a Malaya and an attendant."
Fantasy · OwariDa02
Very much thanks for the genuine review, I will try my best to improve my writing!
Thanks for pointing these out i have fixed them
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Hello guys. It's been quite a while since I abruptly ended Lyrica's story. I'm still sad that I had to cancel Alteria. But after deciding to look back at my work, I realized it's still somehow getting a few readers. It kinda makes me want to remake the story from the beginning, fix any mistakes I've written, but I don't know if I can recall how I want the story to progress. Anyways, I appreciate you readers coming here getting a glimpse of the world of Alteria. Thank you so much.
Alteria
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