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good potential, interesting background. do not give up.............................................................................................

its great work. shame you dropped it. 1 year on hitus. probably shouldnt expect anything from this book. but this great book which you can connect with many fiction or stories over such as merlin, Hablo the foul, hogwarts founders.

This work is great until now and its really promising. keep going my man and do not listen to the useless haters comment. u can add world travel to this novel as well.

I think you are only writer that can make the one night stand so romantic and poetic.

yo you can add assissn creed organization or add hydra idea in there as well. later on think about learning magic or vampire stuff there as well. This stuff can make it interesting and you dont get bored of story. btw man you can make germany make all cool buidling like city inside the jungle or inside the mountain or something. or make some hidden country of elfs or other races living below earth. if you add stuff more than just history and add abit of fiction like demon slayer stuff or other stuff it can be more fun to write as well. of course do not discard your ideas. just food for thought

yo your novel is sick and keep up the good work and please try to update as fast as you can (like 2 chap per day that would be perfect).

really GOOD stuff, It would be more interesting if you show us more of his own selfish side of mc instead of his sister drama. and Please, it would be great to update the novel faster.