Kurijoben

Kurijoben

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Just the your average shmuck reading what he likes till the end of his time. Then he tried writing and feels the pain of an author when creativity is being squeezed out.

2020-12-11 Joined United States
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Kurijoben
Kurijoben
3 months ago
Posted

Something changed. For the first 200 chapters I loved this novel. However, after Chapter 200, the quality drastically drops. - The pacing becomes way too fast - The story reads as if a different writer started writing this and they didn’t even bother to read the previous chapters. - Dean just gets a new personality and previous characters are just gone (system is gone too) The novel sucks now, but those first 200 chapters are still great.

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
3 months ago
Replied to Yksirf

I skimmed the next few chapters and it doesn’t get better. I don’t know what a happened but the pacing is too fast, the system is just gone, and the story is disconnected from when the writing was good. It’s a shame but I’m dropping this now.

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
3 months ago
Commented

This is all some janky illusion Dean fell under right? This isn’t actually how the story is going to be from now on . . . right?

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
3 months ago
Commented

Huh? Several days? But he had to leave to the Duchy “tomorrow”? Is this some kind of illusion?

After several days, the team returned from their in-depth exploration of Ghostly Valley. The lead teacher looked exhausted, but his eyes gleamed with excitement.

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

Fantasy · BWbear

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
4 months ago
Commented

A thousand? Well if you hunt about 50 skeletons per day that would make it 20 days to upgrade your slime. Asumming you sell half of your spoils, it still only requires 40 days. Even if you take weekends off that’s still only about 50 days. Not to mention that the slime would be getting stronger as you feed it. Even if you had an error margin of 10 days because of something unexpected happening it would only take 2 months to evolve the slime.

However, the method that Zen's father was about to do is something extravagant. If I were to evolve my slime with just the essence crystals from undead skeletons, then I would need to hunt about a thousand of them before reaching the required energy level.

Taming my Monster Girl Harem from Scratch

Taming my Monster Girl Harem from Scratch

Fantasy · SeraphWedd

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
5 months ago
Replied to Alanray64

It seems items S-Rank and above are just crazy OP.

[Trait 1: For every 60 seconds the Dragonheart Pendant is worn, the wearer's mana is permanently increased by 2 points.]

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

Fantasy · BWbear

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
5 months ago
Replied to Viadhivan_Ranata

He would just make enemies if he taught other’s spells to his students. Knowledge of higher-level spells isn’t allowed to be passed on without permission.

Unfortunately, this method of comprehension didn't grant him the tenfold insight and power he had hoped for. His understanding of the spell was merely on par with Horton Martin's.

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

Fantasy · BWbear

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
5 months ago
Replied to skizrim_3

The 3k is the cost of the talismans.

The maid glanced at the card and smiled, "For the basic talismans across five elements, the total comes to 3,250 gold coins. We'll round it down to 3,000 gold coins for you. The Wind Spirit Sword Scroll is 70,000 gold coins, so after deducting the 30,000 from your card, that leaves 43,000 gold coins."

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

Fantasy · BWbear

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
6 months ago
Commented

Well in the long run it somewhat makes sense. It’s not like the MC alone can maintain safety for Earth and surely he wouldn’t want to constantly be fighting monsters. So it makes sense that he wouldn’t hoard all the rewards so that humanity as a whole would still improve and he wouldn’t have to be burdened to save Earth alone.

Moreover, only the first player to complete the class change request across the entire server would receive a special reward, and John wasn't keen on stealing Helena's thunder, so he preferred to take his time.

I, the Weakest Human, Start with a Hundredfold Bonus Talent!

I, the Weakest Human, Start with a Hundredfold Bonus Talent!

Fantasy · Red_Skin_Duck

Kurijoben
Kurijoben
6 months ago
Commented

HP recovery/hour is wrong here. It should be 0.04.

Strength is used to represent raw physical capabilities, such as lifting weights or punching harder. It increases the HP recovery/hour by 0,05 (STR*0,005) and gives +1 Inventory Slots for every 10 points.

Conquest of the players

Conquest of the players

Fantasy · BlackRoseAbyss

  • Life of Magic From Isolation of Time and Space original

    Life of Magic From Isolation of Time and Space

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC HAREM TRANSMIGRATION

    Many wish for a chance. A chance to accomplish their dreams and live out the fantasies found in books and shows. Through a stroke of luck, Jovan is granted that chance. Magic, a second life, a fantasy world. With all of these can Jovan live the easygoing and fulfilling life he desires or will the obstacles in his path cause him to fall back to his the ways of his old life. Release Schedule: 2+ Chapters per Week This little author here. Do you like the story? Leave a review to express your approval. Have any suggestions? Comment your opinions. But most of all, this little author hopes you enjoy his story. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    23 Chs 19 Collections