Webnovel Author: Reverse_9612 - Novel&Fanfic Collection

And wow, "waste of time for 90% of people"? Sounds like you're the world's leading expert on time management and universal taste. You must have a crystal ball and a direct line to the brains of the entire webnovel reader base! No wonder the reviews are so glowing – they must be written by the lucky 10% who share my exquisite taste. But hey, if you're so precious with your time, 'maybe' this platform isn't the best place to spend it. Or maybe, critiquing decent novels with two-star or three-star barbs in this platform must be the pinnacle of efficient time management.

35 chapters of filler? Honey, were you skimming with a blindfold on? Oh, but wait, you HAVE read the novel? Must have skimmed past the part where there's no chapter at all for casting interview, not to mention ten.. maybe TWO chapters for audition of Modern Family, but not TEN.Sure, there might be a few chapters that could've used a Red Bull IV drip, but there are certainly ones where the characters actually, you know, interact and stuff.So, you claim you lack time for "fillers" but have enough for online critiques? Sounds like your schedule involves more novel reviewing and less, oh, I don't know, reading the actual novel?

Nothing happens in 30-40 chapters? Honey, did you miss the part where the MC got cast in Modern Family and an indie film called 127 Hours? Sounds like you might be suffering from a severe case of "action-adventure-or-bust" syndrome. Maybe a splash of slice-of-life isn't your flavor? No worries, friend! Head back to your cultivation novels where every five chapters promise an elder-snubbing, level-up bonanza. Just don't forget the tissues – those power-ups can get pretty tear-jerky.

Indeed, there has been some similarity in business direction of the cn novel and this novel(like that both started arcade) but I can see that this novel's plot is different. And I don't really see that as copy since even Nintendo have arcade business, in fact, their arcade business came first than their famicom or NES. I also liked that the mc has a story background and not with a dull and perfect family that will follow all his will, that's simply wishful thinking. The characters isn't like the character that looked down on arcades too much even though it's not initially profitable. Unlike the characters at the cn novel this novel is inspired that looked down and doesn't even believe the arcade business will not go well even though super mario bros is generally an interesting and noble idea and game in that year, this novel characters saw the opportunity of the arcades, and wanted to take profit from it. Except for the arrogant and dumb son of the general manager of Ikeburo, that initially scoffed at the potential of tthe arcade machines of the mc's, the characters reacted fine. But the son of general manager also came to know his mistakes even though he denied it, he's not too arrogant and too dumb even though he's still dumb though, for making a competent employee to resign. It's not cringe face slapping as you may expected it, read it for yourself. The writing is good as well. Probably with the help of an AI, but who isn't using AI now in this platform? Even royalroad authors used AI. This is probably the only way for an independent author without editor so I'm not complaining. It's great even. World background, the world is parallel world 1990. That lacked video games with the exception of Pong and Tetris. The mc will recreate his previous life's games into his new world. Character design. The mc was named Math Algebra... Who would name their child that? Probably only Elon Musk will name someone that... While making the name into a code like encryption. He transmigrated into Shinro Suzuki. Now he has a new and normal Japanese name. Shin was born into a wealthy family. And his father is quite strict. Well, some parts of Asia, there is always a strict parents. Mira the FL, probably inspired from that cn novel this novel is inspired from, was a young woman, first year in computer engineering. Her personality is kind of like Chinese girls, kind of a tsundere and supporting of the mc, but hey, Asians, especially in Japan, Korea or chinese girls have that kind of personality with them. Anime girls that is tsundere, or the person that doesn't want to admit her feelings. So it's not about in race, it's about that most girls is like that. Doesn't want to say their true feelings. Basically, they're hard to understand. Updating stability was great.

I have read the mtl novel one this novel is inspired from, but this novel and that one is different.The only similarity between this one and that novel is the business direction. Both mc started in arcades.and of course the girl beside him seemed to take inspiration from that Chinese novel too, but besides that, it's different. I actually like this novel compared to the Chinese novel but I don't know if this novel will continuesly updates with more chapters or it will drop, thats's the only thing that worries me.

Story development or Plot(4.7⭐) : The story was definitely wholesome and interesting especially for the MC to interact to the characters show, and the author really did a good job for the transition of MC being on the story. Updating stability(4.9⭐): The update stability was good and I can see the author are learning and taking the readers suggestions in the chapters comment... Writing quality (3.9⭐): The writing kind of feel lazy at times (No offense author), How do I describe it? I mean, in some or most chapters, a whole chapter are just built upon a dialogue, similar to scripts, however, novel isn't a script. For example, [Character Name] and the character line next to it. Like this; Ryan - "Input sentence here". It's not really that bad in some cases, however for the people who didn't watch the show may or may not be able to get it and will get confused of some chapters. Like how Claire wants Luke to put something on, but since it's just a dialogue without a character expression, action or background (What's happening in the Background) description, some readers who didn't watch the show will get confused and wonder what's she wants for Luke to put on? And also by how Phil are secretly inappropriately touching Gloria when he was stopping her fight against Dede, and in this novel, most of the chapters are just a character name and a line next to it, without adding that comedic moment and the characters expression when Dylan sang a ridiculous hormone song or when Ryan sang a song that should let the characters have a respective POV and should feel a goosebumps and awestruck, however, author only writing about how the characters are tearing up a little bit but don't include how they are really feeling in depth, and instead only how the characters are chill about it and suggest to him that he sing it in a studio like that's a normal thing that Ryan just sang an impressive song, I mean, even though they are the Main Characters of the show, it doesn't mean that they aren't normal people, they are just a entertaining, funny and just like any ordinary family, they have misunderstanding of their own and solve their problems as a family so a song of Ryan should give them an awestruck expression like how they are dumbfounded when they hear Dylan song, if you watch the show though, too bad author just skips that funny part, anyways, atleast write about other characters POV, for example Alex, and how she really feels about Ryan and what is her thoughts about Ryan, about his genius mind and being a young entrepreneur, how cool he was to her and how Haley are envious of Alex and her POV and other characters such as Phil, for example: when he saw Ryan and he secretly though when he sees Ryan 'A snitch, A smarty pants, Ryan' and what other characters thoughts about Ryan and also even if it's unrelated to Ryan, it will definitely be a lot interesting to know about their POV about their partners or their family and what they are really feeling, especially with an addition of Ryan, it will not only make the story more alive but also will definitely be a refreshing change for the author and the readers. I'm not saying for the author to make it complicated, but I just feel that the author can improve and even he described the situation in a simple sentence and Characters funny expression, and also with other characters POV, especially what's their POV when they are finally reading Ryan's book and also write Ryan's book impressive scene when they're reading it or their reaction when they're watching Ryan's movie or series in detail. Besides that, everything's good, plot is good, I like the fanfic except it's lacking in what I mentioned above. Character design (3.0 ⭐): except for the characters of the show, the author chose to not give the OC's like Ryan's parents, especially his mom an appearance. I mean the appearance, her looks. What she looks like. And other oc characters looks, I don't have problem with the show characters not have a description in appearance since it's all good and we can Google it, however, an oc especially the agents or big six representative, atleast write they're wearing and what's their hair color, not important to be honest. So if the author doesn't want to, it's all good 👍. World background (4.9 ⭐): Well, obviously, the world background is in Modern Family and also similar to 'My Hollywood System' that's the world lacking in entertainment department, and with it is the convenience of the MC's knowledge of his past life and the system. It's a perfect world for opportunist. Overall rating: 4.4 ⭐