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Serial_seresposa
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I鈥檓 so sorry thinking about adding more chapters or making another book not sure yet
ch 297 Chapter Two: Hundred: Eighty_Nine: In The End, Death Wins
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
You are welcome!
ch 0 1 Chapter One: The Battle In Which She Dances
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
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Where on earth was she? She couldn't piece together what had happened and her brain seemed frizzled as though tampered with and she didn't know what to assume or think of. She felt petrified and wanted to cry out. She wondered where James was and why she felt as though she was far away from home.
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
hahaha
A note was on the floor instead and I slowly bent down, keeping my eyes around as I picked it up and came up with it. opening the note, the color in my skin drained as I read the note.
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
you want a family tree?
Disclaimer: Alright everyone, keep up, we're going to be switching POV's a lot for the next three chapters.
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
don't fall!
ch 254 Chapter Two: Hundred: Fifty: 聽Heir
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
you never know. just hold on just a bit longer.
ch 253 Chapter Two: Hundred: Forty & Nine: Alliance Shred To Love
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
okay firstly is it weird that I'm in love with the bad boy or is it just my tendency to be toxic? but anyway advise to you author, watch ur word structure here and there but other than that. I love it a part of me is like I need to come back and sink myself into ur work again because wow I'm more than content
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
Butterflies and Pins
History 路 Raksha1
"This" not "that" be careful of your word structure
To anybody else, that would have been just another beautiful summer day. The sky was bright blue and clear, the sun was shining warmly, and a gentle wind swept through the trees, making the leaves sing their harmonious song.
Butterflies and Pins
History 路 Raksha1
as for rolling sweets
Too not two.
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GHOST DETECTIVE: Li Xiajun
Fantasy 路 Suoshi
firstly, I love the cover I had to say this but yes lemme read!
ch 0 1 Li XiaJun
GHOST DETECTIVE: Li Xiajun
Fantasy 路 Suoshi
Okay! I struggled to find a way to leave a review. I apologize so ill have to settle for a review. The story is good but I got lost and confused at certain points. One thing about readers too much information makes them lose their attraction to the book. There's a common saying, "Show, don't tell." you need to be able to show the readers not just tell them. They'll become restless and stop reading. I zoned out for a bit when I continued reading then had to stop my music and get back into it. It's good stuff but don't make it easy for us to be easily distracted.
ch 12 Beast types
Master of Voracious Beasts
Fantasy 路 Bad_Totodile
much love
ch 0 8 Chapter Eight: Past: Surprise Threesome
Her Minds Instinct
Urban 路 Serial_seresposa
book isn't contracted yet love.
ch 22 Chapter Twenty-Two: Blind Sighted
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa
I see something big coming and I don't know weather to get my shield or not.
ch 0 1 What bull-feces is this reward?!
The midnight musician
Eastern 路 cherlyswan
I really appreciate it. I try my best to give you guys something different and I know it isn鈥檛 always what the audience wants.鉂わ笍
ch 15 Chapter Fifteen: Clarifying Crushes
Loving The Forbidden
Fantasy 路 Serial_seresposa