Immortal_Pyrsm

Immortal_Pyrsm

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Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
1 years ago
Posted

shameless review!! Disclaimer: I'm currently translating this Chinese novel using AI, and I have to admit, some of the names and concepts are a bit tricky. However, I'm doing my best to make it more reader-friendly for all of you. If you happen to spot any errors, please don't hesitate to leave a comment, and I'll gladly make the necessary corrections. Thank you for your assistance! Enjoyy!!

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
1 years ago
Replied to Xie_avron

i'll try uploading 10 chapters tomorrow, i just finished my exams this week, it was pretty hectic.

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
2 years ago
Posted

I want to say that this is a hidden gem, one of the best that i read, first of all i am very tired from those popular novels that just serve their readers by doing fan service, a lot of people are dropping this because he is technically a "hero" different from the tag "anti-hero" if i may interpret, anti-hero for me is the enemy of heroes let's compared it to the modern era, the heroes are police, the anti-heroes are the vigilante, being anti-hero does not technically a hero, because if you drop this because of that reason, you are missing out. No shows of harem so far Not fanservice because the subordinates are not all FEMALES He is very smart He is very op Still looking forward to kingdom building Big World Background that makes me interested

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
2 years ago
Replied to Immortal_Pyrsm

TDG*

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
2 years ago
Posted

Utterly disappointed, so many plotholes, messy cultivation realms I mean it is so hard to manage a systematic cultivation process?? at this point, all I can see is this novel is just a tag copy-paste, not "inspired" because the event, the story, the world background is the same just different category and name.

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
2 years ago
Replied to Damndolla2

I got plenty of ideas but I am afraid i would not be able to execute them very well.

Li Xuezhu thought for a long time. In this conference room, and finally sighed, and blamed this incident on the butterfly effect caused by his rebirth. She turned and left the conference room.

Super Dimensional Guild

Super Dimensional Guild

Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
2 years ago
Commented

Now i am sure this novel is translated from a random raw novel

Li Xuezhu thought for a long time. In this conference room, and finally sighed, and blamed this incident on the butterfly effect caused by his rebirth. She turned and left the conference room.

Super Dimensional Guild

Super Dimensional Guild

Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
3 years ago
Commented

OMG, WHY EVERY TIME I SEE HER CALLING THE MC FATHER MONN, I ALWAYS THOUGHT IT IS "FATHER MOM"

"Father Monn, can you add this to the beef soup in the future?"

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime

Fantasy · Southsky Star

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
3 years ago
Replied to JoSauer

I am sure those "game masters or developers" wouldn't get notified because it is classified info, they just probably managed the statistics, and the one behind the game reincarnate the mc because of a reason or incoming disaster perhaps.

"Warning: You are prohibited from using cultivation techniques and martial arts techniques that do not originate from the system. You must complete missions to obtain cultivation techniques and martial arts techniques from the system."

Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Returning To The Cultivation World Through A Game

Eastern · Saubi1234

Immortal_Pyrsm
Immortal_Pyrsm
3 years ago
Posted

Pretty good so far I finished reading it, there is a young master but it is already given in every Chinese novel, if I remember it he has only have 1 girl so not a harem which is a great plus for me, face-slapping is not every day's workout in this novel, The enemies does not provoke the mc just because they lost in ranking when I mean provoke is like this "Who is this peasant who surpass me, get all information about him, recruit him if he refuses kill him" they are not like that, they know that it is more important to survive. You might ask me why I only rate it 3.4? *SPOILER ALERT AGAIN* - the ending is rushed, it is faster than bullet train- ANOTHER NOTE: People keep saying it was a stolen idea at Digging to Survive: I Can See hints, that novel just started months ago and this novel is already made way earlier than that, this kind of concept is popular in Chinese novels so please stop being an idiot who is like a kid who bought candy from the store and when he sees the same candy from the supermarket he will complain that they stole the store's product ALSO SORRY FOR MY GRAMMAR, I am just a high school who doesn't even study english.

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