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Qin Tian, a genius in the cultivation world who failed to become a Heavenly Emperor, ended up dying at the hands of his enemy who succeeded in becoming a Heavenly Emperor.
But after his death, he was reborn in a mortal world called earth. It is a world that is advanced in technology.
One day, suddenly appeared a game called (Sixteen Heavens).
"Why is the name of this game the same as the name of my original world?" Qin Tian wondered in confusion when he first heard about the game.
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This novel also has a very good romance harem, soo, if you are a harem fan, I'm sure you will really like this one.
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No matter how flawed and dumb he is to be a paragon he must've been pretty old right since his current progress is due to literal hax. Not only that but with age comes maturity so add 17 years to that. He's still way too dumb and immature considering the facts. Shouldn't have made him a reincarnated to begin with, the novel isn't horribly had but it lacks a certain umph. Unlike other major novels I feel no weight at all to his breakthroughs and the cultivation realms. Dropping this after all. At most he's merely a character that acts his physical age for once instead of a 12 year old with mental issues like the other cliches reincarnated mcs. The problems just keep piling up after a point. There's no excitement either. I found myself skipping and speed reading chapters as they were too boring or just simply couldn't hook me at all. Kind of interesting premise but it was poorly executed.
The author doesn't seem to know what kind of story this should be. So, imagine a cultivation world. Is it a cultivation story? No, the main character dies. But they are reborn in a different world. Oh, it's an isekai? No, they return to their first world through a VRMMO. Hey, that's the title of the story! But they also get a system, with an AI, and nobody else has that. But it's not really a system story either. Many threads are brought up, but abandoned before they can do anything interesting. The game prevents the MC from using their prior cultivation techniques. Oh, but there might be workarounds (through the shadow clone, or eaching others). Is the MC going to do something clever to get their old techniques back? Nope, once he gets the system that restriction goes away. Nevermind then. He wants to take his human-form snake followers and take over the criminal underground. Sounds exciting! Just kidding, he dumps them on the side of the road. I guess the snakes are off in the interesting story, while we just follow the terrible MC around. Everything is like this. Oh, there's an annoying girl at school that the MC keeps rejecting but she won't get the message. Just kidding, the MC totally loves her now. Let's get married on the first date. My point is, there are deep problems with the story. The author often retcons their own story (protip: rather than add stuff to the *past*, you can actually go back and edit those chapters when those events were the *present* and put your changes there), So the foundation is constantly shifting. And that's not even touching on the many grammatical and other mistakes. I suspect the author is not very experienced in English. But even if an editor fixed these problems, the story problems would remain. The premise is interesting, but other stories have used this same premise much more effectively. The earlier chapters are OK, but there is a drop in quality later. This story can best serve as a rough outline for what the author really wants, but they have to figure that out. Finish this story, but don't drag it out. Then start rewriting it, after you have a firmer grasp of the overall plot.
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Author, this novel is simply a masterpiece (For me) I'm not lying The grammars are top-notch and the storyline seems to go in an interesting direction I hope the author will continue to write this amazing novel
honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by
Really tried to put up with it despite the issues, but I just can't. First the Cultivation is ridiculous, the MC just spends one chapter every so often and bam he skipped many levels in a short time to deal with the current issue, even the Dao comprehension part is just skipped as the MC just gets a rare resource that allowed him to comprehend the Dao automatically every now and then. I kid you not there was a fight against an arrogant young master in the starting small province of a sub-continent that took 5 chapters despite the fact that the MC can one shot the dude and the tournament took like another 10. That is a smaller part of the next issue, the author loves going into detail about the most meaningless things but has no issue glossing over things that are important, do you want to read about the MC losing his V-card to his wife on the day they got married, in which they started dating the night before? Do you want to hear the background story of the Aunt who is arguably one of the most important characters and a harem candidate? Well to bad as you will get a fade to black. Even with important things that did get explained we had some fade to black stuff happen multiple times, like we got no less than 2 times where the circumstances of the MCs birth got interrupted by nothing before we are finally told, which feels like the author's failed attempt to create interest. The Cultivation system is crude and not well explained or thought out, like there is a certain power that allows one to fight above their power level, but everyone can use it so everyone can theoretically fight above their level. I guess the most popular comparison I can think of is DBZ where power levels are impossible to properly measure but you can still tell if you're weaker or not. So don't expect cultivation realms to mean jack****. The Earth bits should be thrown out as it is a complete dumpster fire. This story would have been at least a 3.5/5 if the earth stuff never existed tbh as it is somehow the absolute worst thing about this series.
Okay so... I need to read more but so far it is a very rough story. I'm two chapters in and there are already a ridiculous amount issues. Grammer for one, using male pronouns instead of female and confusing the reader is a big one. There are also already some plot issues I see on the horizon. Honestly, I think that the premise is good but it just needs more work and thought. Could also use someone to go through and help with grammar. I will try to continue and may update the review if there is any improvement in quality, character depth, or flow vs forced plot.
well one word . if you are a masochist, wants to be mentally tortured this is for you!!! this is the first time ii m going to do a bad review and did not even last 2-3 chapters . the story has a lot of potential especially in world building but bro!!! you gotta ruin it with the mc stupidity ! might as well make him normal teenager not reincarnator. mc is projecting the character of a loser and you are telling me he is a young paragon it past life? i am not gonna continue reading this but for those who are curious check till the end . the only advantage here is the update stability and potential world background .
Best xianxia novel.(read upto chapter 15)................ . ..................... .. ................... ... .................. ....
Pretty good start but gets quite boring quite fast/makes me lose interest.
Grammar is good but some math error and word error. Good premise. I don't know if there are novels like this but I'm loving it. I stopped reading Game genre but this one is solid
please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop please don't drop
I really tried to like this novel, having read around 200chapters here, but it never got much better to change my mind. But I will recommend you not to waste your time and money here. Its not terrible but it isn’t worth it. Romance is poorly developed and the interactions between MC and the girls are very sparse. They only happen suddenly and then important conversations are cut off. Author skips important conversations and scenes when jumping between the Game world and Real world. Sometimes things also get quite confusing with random plot elements being introduced out of nowhere with no build up. Unimportant Fight scenes are often dragged out almost like arcs in DBZ. But doing this in a novel is very torturous and boring. Pacing is fast outside of fight scenes but then horrendously slow whenever there is a fight.
Warning for the limit free readers. So many inconsistencies. Turn off your brain when you read this…… . . . . … .… . . . . . . . . .… . . .
I tried reading it I couldn't get into it also many other people make valid points cause why would the mc be that dumb
This is one of those books that his your in due to the story simplicity, something to take the edge of. This is until you are met with a confused MC who one minute understand the cultivation world while the next he's a virgin MC from anime (I've really never understood those mc, you build harem of girls who are throwing themselves at but you still continue the virgin streak. like 'reinacarnated with a smartphone in another world'). The guy has the attitude that he's better than everyone else, when he meets the little price, when he meets the Yue clan descendant, .... never read past that. one moment he's saying he's not a good person when planning to steal the people's resources the next he's disgusted by possessing a bandit. You have to remember this is a person who has already walked the cultivation path once before to the second highest realm. overall even his breakthrough don't feel like an achievement at all.
The system of this novel may not be that interesting. It's a simple system that is similar to a game system in general. But what's interesting about this novel is not the system. A person from the cultivation world who reincarnated to earth then reincarnated again into the cultivation world through a game was clearly a new concept. At least I haven't read a novel with such a concept. This is two times reincarnation, in contrast to the novel of the same genre where mc only from earth then comes to the world of cultivation through a game. Of course, just that concept is still not enough to keep reading it. But the cultivation world background in this novel is also very interesting. As the author said; this is a novel with many legendary characters. Until chapter 45, now, there have been several legendary characters mentioned. And their story is really very interesting. Well, you will understand when you read the chapter that tells about Titania when she started the Eternal Light era. It's probably so exaggerated that you think she's mc, Lol. But that's what makes you want to keep reading it. And this character is made completely mysterious. But mc seems to know Titania's identity. But so far, his disciple was the most suspicious. As for the story, I thought it was quite comfortable to read. The plot may be fairly generic but it's so well written that it doesn't fall into a clichéd plot. I give 5 stars because I keep reading it. But since the view of this novel is increasing so fast, I think the others enjoyed the story as well.
So far it has been a good read, it's hard lately to find a good novel with both system and cultivation in it. and I guess the fact it's connected to modern world will also be a bonus. will this novel only focus on the cultivation side or will it also touch the modern world?
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is it just me or does this story have many similarities to emperor's domination?
Note from Author: If you want to read a xianxia novel with many mystical places, legendary characters, mysterious ancient legends, you have come to the right place. One thing I want to say is that for some reason, mc can use 1% of its power in the real world. You will understand after reading a few chapters.