SandiBell

SandiBell

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I am a writer and reader who just loves writing and all things fantasy! It makes me really happy when others read and like my work too! I hope you will keep reading it!

2020-06-10 Joined United States
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SandiBell
SandiBell
2 months ago
Commented

Cut “only” from where it is and paste in front of “having”, so “only having”.

The Jin family really only wanted to know more about how one could use something that only Saint Aura provided while having Saint Qi. 

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

SandiBell
SandiBell
2 months ago
Commented

It’s a “video game”, so the game designer had to decide what made a game character. It seems like a game character object requires a two child objects, a soul and a body, because the body cannot be without a soul, or else it would die when the player logged out. Maybe?

His… Alex wasn't sure if he could call that world his at the moment. From what he understood, he was just a clone, trapped in his own body, while the real soul drove it.

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

SandiBell
SandiBell
3 months ago
Commented

Aura of Time = very old Timelessness = ageless

Bo Zheng had a private house with a quiet environment in Beijing. The simple and unadorned house was located on the side of Chang'an Street. There were basically courtyard houses of all sizes around. They were made of green bricks and tiles and had the aura of time.

Madam’s Identities Shocks the Entire City Again

Madam’s Identities Shocks the Entire City Again

Urban · Brother Ling

SandiBell
SandiBell
6 months ago
Commented

Poor Scholar Baked Galaxy

Song Shuhang scratched his head—well, Scholar Drunken Moon's ID felt very familiar to him, but how come he just couldn’t remember who it was?

Cultivation Chat Group

Cultivation Chat Group

Urban · Legend of the Paladin

SandiBell
SandiBell
1 years ago
Commented

I enjoyed Lui li’s personal description of killing the 12 old demons. It was extremely funny I just couldn’t leave a paragraph comment at the time and founD that sad

SandiBell
SandiBell
1 years ago
Commented

Author, I mentioned before that one of your scenes was very familiar even down to the criminal law book and I wasn’t sure who copied whom, but now that you have copied yet another scene from a different book, it’s pretty clear who copied whom. Are any of the scenes in this book your original work or do you just string together your favorite parts of other books?

SandiBell
SandiBell
1 years ago
Replied to Dreamingof16

Sure it can! Sometimes Mothers simply don’t care about the well -being of their children. Not every woman is capable of being a good mother, some are just too broken. I’ve read a lot of Webnovels where the mother hates the daughter because she’s not her child. But in reality, there’s not always a good excuse, like the daughter is adopted. Anyway, I agree with you because this is a story, the DNA test is a must. Lol

'Now I need to know whether this condition of mine is temporary or it has become permanent by having this substance for such a long time,' Doubting this, Qin Yan again went to the hospital and got her full body checkup done. She was informed that reports would be mailed to her by the next afternoon.

Transmigrated as Fat young missy

Transmigrated as Fat young missy

Urban · _Shining_Soul_001

SandiBell
SandiBell
2 years ago
Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

SandiBell
SandiBell
3 years ago
Replied to Gosia_Lovett

Okay, thanks for Letting me know. I’ll see if I messed something up and if not, I’ll contact the moderators! I’m so sorry about this.

Kyra's hand felt hot to Sky as he gently reached out and curled his fingers around her right hand.

First Term: Survival

First Term: Survival

Fantasy · SandiBell

SandiBell
SandiBell
3 years ago
Replied to Gosia_Lovett

Hi Gosia, for now this book ended at chapter 100 which was supposed to have posted two weeks ago. I may pick this up again later because I can see the opportunity for a lot of fun with it. I’m still figuring out how webnovel works… did chapter 100 not post? I hope the ending wasn’t a let down.

Kyra's hand felt hot to Sky as he gently reached out and curled his fingers around her right hand.

First Term: Survival

First Term: Survival

Fantasy · SandiBell

  • First Term: Survival original

    First Term: Survival

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE WEAKTOSTRONG SUPERPOWERS TEEN ACADEMY FIRSTLOVE

    4.98

    *Excerpt* “I’m not going anywhere.” Sky said cutting him off as she gave him a cold, rage-filled smile. The male also smiled back; his grey eyes filled with delight. “Then I challenge you.” He said. Sky pulled her fans from their belt. “Fine. Dain Caellustria is the witness. I’ll get him and meet you at-” “Why go anywhere?” The male asked conversationally as Sky felt air moving above her head. She jumped to her right as a blade of air slammed into the ground. She dodged again as a yellow gray bolt of air flew at her. Left, right, back, down, over, she moved. She knew she couldn’t keep this up though. Unfurling her fans, she ran at him, dodging as she closed the distance. A big, blue-gray cloud appeared in her path and seeing it, Sky hesitated a second too long. One of the smaller darts bit into her left side. She was too angry to feel it, even though it tore deep into her flesh. The cloud started moving for her. As quickly as she could, she spoke the words for the magic shield spell. It exploded into being around her just in time. The cloud hit it and a violent wave of magical energy ricocheted back at the male. He doubled over as it slammed him into the wall. This was her chance! Sky surged forward breaking her shield spell and sliced at him with her fans. He grinned and spun, a sword flashing into existence in his hand. Hastily, Sky twisted to the side. The male’s thrust went past her. He swung sideways at her. Sky blocked with her right fan while she struck for his neck with her left. She felt a pop in her right wrist as the male jerked back out of her reach. Spinning forward with her fan blades out, Sky pressed him back. She kept up a furious string of attacks but everyone she made he countered at the last second. Then she realized it. He was toying with her. Seeing the expression on her face change, the male smiled and began attacking in earnest. It was all Sky could do to block. As she spun to the left to avoid his sword, a dagger that she hadn’t seen traced fire down her back as it cut her deeply. Sky staggered panting as she tried to catch her breath. “You know, you’re pretty good.” The male jeered. Sky looked at him. He was smiling again but it didn’t reach his eyes. They looked like death. “You’re just no match for me...

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  • Falling in Love While Earnestly Trying to Get Disowned original

    Falling in Love While Earnestly Trying to Get Disowned

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE SYSTEM COMEDY HAREM POSSESSIVE

    4.86

    Hi all! Returning on August 10th. I will release five new chapters on August 10th and then move to a three chapter a week release schedule for the next arc. Thank you all for your patience! Romantic comedy set in an extremely patriarchal fantasy world where women are viewed as commodities. A non-conforming female defies societal expectations in an attempt to get disowned. Kylara Adamare the only surviving daughter of Lord Adamare, is sent to the High Mating Season to secure a mate who can help her win back her father's estate, but Kylara is not the type to do what she is told. Shortly after arriving, she receives a "fighting" system, that tries to aid her in finding a mate. Throughout the mating season, Kylara uses her wits, magic, and fighting prowess in an attempt to get disowned by her family so she can take revenge in her own way. However, when her old flame shows up too, will all her plans be ruined? **Excerpt** "Kylara Adamare, checking in." I said. "Are you alone?" The male asked. I remember from my childhood how strict Viceria was towards females. Showing up without a male guardian like this was highly improper, not that I cared. I felt my cousin run up beside me. "Why didn't you wait for me?" She demanded hotly. I ignored her and said, "Yes, I am alone." The male didn't bother to hide his contempt. "What the Other?" My cousin screeched at me. She turned to the male and gave him her best smile. "I am Miss Delphi Goldleaf. I am Kylara's friend." I snorted, "No, you're not." Looking back at the male, I extended my left hand. "I would like the key to my rooms, now." I said. The male grimaced but nonetheless complied. He placed a small steel key in my palm. "You are in the blue rooms on the first floor of wing 2." He said. And giving no other directions, he walked off. I walked back to the carriage as Miss Goldleaf chased after the male. I informed the guards where my singular trunk was going and watched as two of them unloaded it. "Kylara?" I heard a familiar male voice say. My eyes narrowed as I spun in its direction. Two males whom I'd never forget in the whole course of my existence had just dismounted from their horses. The black-haired male raced over to me. I recognized him as Kane and his red-headed cousin, who was watching with a smirk, as Rhana. As Kane reached me, I slid one of the small throwing knives hidden in my sleeve into my right hand. His warm hands grabbed my shoulders and my heartbeat accelerated. As he looked down at me with a tangled mess of emotions clear on his face, I smiled at him. Then I stabbed the knife straight into his gut.

    95 Chs 319 Collections

  • Alicaine Chronicles: Roselyn Knight original

    Alicaine Chronicles: Roselyn Knight

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE R18 WEAKTOSTRONG DARK SUPERPOWERS CAMPUS POSSESSIVE

    *Excerpt*: “Submit.” A soothing, male voice crooned inside the girl’s mind. Ice wrapped around her legs and reached up along her body. With every passing second, her chance of victory slipped further and further from her grasp. “Just relax.” The voice said soothingly. Listening to it was dangerous to the girl. The too familiar voice spoke in time to her heartbeat in phrases she’d heard it say many times before. A shadow passed over her half-frozen body. Looking up, the girl saw the shadowed body of a dragon passing under the sun above her. The dragon’s head was lowered and the she could feel its piercing, demanding gaze on her skin. “You’ve done extremely well but you don’t have to fight so hard.” The voice said. The girl’s eyelids fluttered. She was so cold. Her breathing had slowed considerably as the ice was now at her waist. White mist formed as she exhaled. Fuzzily, she knew she was losing. She’d tried everything, but nothing she could do, none of her magic, could pierce those armor like scale. The voice was wrong. Everything was at stake for her, her heart, her freedom, her life, but she was once again powerless. The dragon swooped low over her head. It’s light blue scale’s glittered beautifully in the afternoon sun. The ice had reached the girl’s chest now. Each breath she drew was laborious and took a herculean effort. “It will be over soon.” The voice crooned softly, “Just rest.” The girl foggily knew that if she caved and relaxed the fight would be over. She wanted to fight; she needed to win, but she was so tired. The dragon landed in front of her. She blinked groggily at it trying to bring her eyes into focus. The dragon watched her expectantly as its ice climbed higher still on the girl’s body. The girl could feel her pulse slowing as she tried to shake her head clear again. She couldn’t the ice had reached her chin. ‘Why?’ she thought fuzzily, ‘how can it end like this?’ She worked so hard, but it hadn’t mattered. Despair choked her as her eyelids drooped and then closed. The ice covered her head as the girl fell into darkness. *** Release rate will be a min of 3 chapters per week! The maturity rating is for the scenes that will come later in the book! It will be necessary! Alicaine Chronicles: Roselyn’s Book is about a woman, Roselyn Knight, trying to prove her worth in a society that views females as commodities. The only path she has open to her is gaining her proficiency at the best school of magic in her world, Alicaine. However, this is a double-edged sword, because as Ro gets stronger, she begins to attract the attention of several males at her school. Her race against time begins. Can she become the best fighter in the school before she loses the freedom that is finally almost in her grasp? Everything is at stake for her, her future, her life, even her heart, and one misstep could spell disaster.

    61 Chs 84 Collections