i think it fine but i believe the mc is getting a bit overshadowed by his child but i understand that hes a god so that is it in my point of view but everyting else is pretty good
I need opinions on how this fanfic is handled. I've seen that the first chapters have not had a good reception, there are already 4 people who are commenting that they drop this due to how the MC behaves in the first 4 chapters. I would like to ask you if I should rewrite the first 4 chapters, obviously leaving the updates of the later chapters on hold. The estimated time it would take me to rewrite the chapters could be 2 weeks.
Danmachi: God of Heroes
Anime & Comics · The_Gamer2403
time for CHAOS i cast bad hair day i cast flavored water ( works on saliva ) i cast unable to sneeze i cast needing to sneeze i cast weird smell you can't find i cast specking random fact i cast item in shoe i cast hearing a sound effect i cast background music your welcome
Spell List: (add all spell suggestions here)
Harry Potter: I Cast
Book&Literature · Joanjudo
just a thought why not the alchemy monster thing ( i forgot what's it called) you know the one with the red stone
Author Chooses - I do what I think would be the most interesting for the story.
Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
id chose blood line since it can't be upgraded by system
"You should be rewarded for your assistance. You have three choices to choose from. Pick one. One, there's a pile of ancient coins in the kingdom's ruins. I can give you a part of it. From what Adda told me about this era, the coins are worth a thousand crowns. Two, you can give me Aerondight, and I can strengthen it further for you." Vivienne looked at the witcher, his eyes, and his pointed ears. "I noticed the magic coursing through your veins, but it is far too weak. I can grant you a part of my blood to strengthen your bloodline. That is my third reward."
The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
Video Games · Leohart
this guy
the mc starts too walk away though the gate way until he comes too a other desk a bit smaller than the other one and the man? no probably a devil or demon . behind him are three wheels and by the look he can all ready see abilities? the weird demon reminds me of that guy from soul eater the weird music dude
Lord of the ring the new age
Movies · nightmore_shadow1
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original Lord of the ring the new age
story after the end of the ring after the fall of the dark lord but all thing never last 120 years has passed and many thing change for the good and the bad war has returned the elf's returned for reasons unknown and things thought impossible came forth how long until a new dark lord comes or the old ones return as well but the real question I have is who in the nine hells is celebrimbor --------------------------------------------------------------------- mc hardly know lord of the rings at most he know that rings? are bad and some bit a piece here and there ( he's didn't read/play and of the games/books) also first time writing sorry for and spelling mistakes and lore problems3 Chs 8 Collections
at this point i think dude ( hokage ) just see if it could work and fully expected to just die but not sealed
Tsunade answered, "I'm not completely sure. My understanding of the soul isn't complete either. No ninja understands all its mysteries. Perhaps Sensei had a way to survive with an even weaker soul. We can only ask when he wakes up."
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex