James_Pouder

James_Pouder

male LV 15

Draconic bookworm construct

2020-05-13 Joined United States
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James_Pouder
James_Pouder
6 days ago
Commented

it's a great story but way too many statistics constantly being viewed.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
3 months ago
Commented

was good then just had to force cannon so now a huge disappointment.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
6 months ago
Commented

well it was OK but then you had to pull in magical abilities and so forth while over powering the mc's summon system that killed my interest in this story.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

so he went from looking for his girl to hiding? so far the Mc goes from driven to undecided and cowardly.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

wow this was such an entertaining read then it just stopped. well I hope the author will eventually pick it back up.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

sorry but with his personality he would have killed her before allowing her to leave with that info.

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James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

wow thats just pathetic, and even in such worlds if the house was left to Nathan then Leon really should not have been able to even get in. just had to do something cliche to force the story.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

its been an awesome fic so far.

James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Commented

Ultimately it comes down to do you as the author feel there is justification and need for adding more women into the MC's love life? With his domain and skills it does leave room for additional interest as long as Olivia can accept and the dynamic does not shift too far.

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James_Pouder
James_Pouder
1 years ago
Replied to ChampionAsta

Not necessarily just way too unfocused for my personal reading.