Lucas_Sousa_7129

Lucas_Sousa_7129

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Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
2 months ago
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The beginning of novels that involve transmigration is always difficult to read, because everything has to be very forced to work. Examples are the MC taking over someone else's body and starting to live life as if he were his predecessor, with completely different behaviors and no one notices anything suspicious. In the case of this novel, his sister notices the difference, but simply accepts another person in her brother's body, especially considering that he is responsible for several traumatic events. It doesn't matter that he is someone else, the fact that he has the same voice and appearance is enough to bring back traumatic memories for her. Personally, I think the only plausible solution would be for him to go to another continent and start from scratch.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
2 months ago
Replied to MeMeMeMe

The author based Aegis on a real microorganism, of course he extrapolated a lot, but I understand the concept. However, I have to agree that Aegis doesn't add much, he's just a tank. Just look at Serena's elemental guardian, where only one of his forms is a golem that does everything Aegis does and has 3 more transformations. For someone of Kain's level of talent, Aegis is simply very mediocre. I'm eagerly awaiting his evolution, since it was hinted that he'll be able to use gravity.

The descriptions of his contracts were surprisingly thorough, detailing Queen, Aegis, and Bea, although Kain noted with some relief that all of them didn't seem to have been identified as being microorganisms. Bea was suspected of being one, however it doesn't seem like whoever wrote this has managed to correlate a Vespid Queen or a giant golem as having anything to do with microscopic creatures.

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

This Beast-Tamer is a Little Strange

Fantasy · KeepingSilent

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
4 months ago
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I think the educational model has a big problem in being based on meritocracy. Since they are at war with invaders and the children are trained to become warriors, a military model of education makes much more sense than a meritocratic one. A military model of education would be focused on unity, while a meritocratic model is the opposite, fostering individualism, which in a war can be fatal. Of course, I could be wrong, since I am only reading the beginning of the novel, it could be that they first receive an education focused on individual growth and after 15 they receive military training.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
5 months ago
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I love this novel, but I can't get into the concept of the brotherhood. I think it's too much like an edgelord and chuunibyou thing. This mission made me even more disappointed, they literally sent the MC on a suicide mission, however, even though the MC solved almost everything by himself, achieving the impossible by defeating a rank 3 as a rank 2, the guys don't give any compensation for their mistake and are still going to take 50% of the profit.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
7 months ago
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Novel logic always leaves me confused. Let's imagine the following, you try to kill someone, but that person is rescued and saved by a doctor. So, instead of planning a more effective way to kill the person you want to kill, you decide to kill the doctor who saved the person you want to kill. It makes no sense.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
8 months ago
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Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
9 months ago
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I was hoping that the next pet would be a chimera.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
1 years ago
Commented

I think events in the present are better done in a descriptive way, including the characters' speeches, behaviors and reactions rather than just narrating what happened. I believe this type of narrative is best used to describe past events. Just a suggestion.

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
1 years ago
Replied to Tempest3600

dark healing cures other demons, he used it in the human world only on foxy because she is a demon, but he couldn't use it on humans.

"Do you mind if we help you? I have healing abilities, maybe I can use that," I offered.

The Incubus System

The Incubus System

Fantasy · Nanakawaichan

Lucas_Sousa_7129
Lucas_Sousa_7129
1 years ago
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Personally, I don't consider it cheating. You can't say a beast tamer is cheating by fighting his beasts. Same thing with the MC, he's obviously a spirit mage, so he has to fight with his spirits.

Vaan was shameless enough to take all the credit,

Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth