Webnovel Author: TheKonnan17 - Fanfic Collection

From everything I have read, it is primarily a description with no real character progress. The story has six chapters that should be in the auxiliary instead of volume 1, while when the story finally does start and the character makes his wishes you would think he would wish for something that would allow for him to train or do anything while he was trapped inside of his fathers stomach. There is a large chunk of the story to where everything the mc does is in the background and all through out the war it reads as if nothing important is happening as you feel no attachment to the character. I believe the author should continue writing but should also write from a perspective of the character they are trying to talk about. There is hardly any dialogue with 20 or so chapters and nearly everything is description.