Dd_B

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2020-03-04 Joined France
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Dd_B
16 days ago
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power fanfic taking db character and making them speak like google translation of any random clone of a chinese novel . so its fucking irritating.

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Dd_B
16 days ago
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dude has sharingan but need 1month to learn jutsu? ....

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Dd_B
20 days ago
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terrific ! WB!!

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Dd_B
24 days ago
Posted

not bad, and i get a good laugh when something happen.. biggest problem is 80% is theory crafting or useless train of though, boring as hell So beware

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Dd_B
25 days ago
Posted

Very good novel. (Been a while) Not much nonsense if any, not yet any cliché big plot just for the sake of stressing people out. TL is good and clean. A must read

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Dd_B
26 days ago
Commented

use more 3rd person. seriously, they explain everything in their head? who do that? 'he is kurama illumi...' my foot . who are they reporting/explaining to? they all break the 4rth wall?damn its frustrating. tftc tho

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Dd_B
1 months ago
Commented

dude, adapt your translation. when you already know who spoke to who you dont put the name. when we already know the complete name, just give the first name OR surname...a bit like ..normal people/dialogue, you know...make it less ..MTL

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Dd_B
1 months ago
Commented

hey, dunno if it was the same with other chapters, but you should keep it consistant, if you use iwa use suna, not sand ... thats just weird xD tftc

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Dd_B
Dd_B
1 months ago
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Please, a bit of consistency... fix the name ...

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Dd_B
1 months ago
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yuo switched black and white zetsu lol

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