dude has sharingan but need 1month to learn jutsu? ....
terrific ! WB!!
not bad, and i get a good laugh when something happen.. biggest problem is 80% is theory crafting or useless train of though, boring as hell So beware
Very good novel. (Been a while) Not much nonsense if any, not yet any cliché big plot just for the sake of stressing people out. TL is good and clean. A must read
use more 3rd person. seriously, they explain everything in their head? who do that? 'he is kurama illumi...' my foot . who are they reporting/explaining to? they all break the 4rth wall?damn its frustrating. tftc tho
dude, adapt your translation. when you already know who spoke to who you dont put the name. when we already know the complete name, just give the first name OR surname...a bit like ..normal people/dialogue, you know...make it less ..MTL
hey, dunno if it was the same with other chapters, but you should keep it consistant, if you use iwa use suna, not sand ... thats just weird xD tftc
This book has been deleted.
Please, a bit of consistency... fix the name ...
yuo switched black and white zetsu lol
power fanfic taking db character and making them speak like google translation of any random clone of a chinese novel . so its fucking irritating.
DBZ : Original Timeline Gohan
Anime & Comics · GarudaTranslation