Bello ma troppo beta il protagonista
I like this novel but with the pace being so slow you will probably reach 10,000 chapters, in my opinion some time skip no jutsu could help
can you please make edward in the end sing by linking parks?
so far the fanfiction is very good, the only problem, in my opinion is that there is little evolution in the mc's personality in the sense, yes he was raised like this but almost 100 chapters have passed and he literally treats all the side characters in the same way of chapter 10 i.e. too slow in terms of development, this risks either causing Mc to remain like this until the end of the fic or that some event forces a change but I don't know in chapter 100 in my opinion you could have made him open up a little more at least towards momo and jiro
I can't find the problem of this novel but after 150 cap I have find it, the problem in this novel is the waste of time for all the little details... But finally it's a great novel
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The true question is 8 wish and only can beat a Gillan......
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This novel have 0 action, where Is the point on being One of the strongest character.... Just be a simple human and have fun.
Reincarnated as Bella Swan's Brother (Twilight)
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