Zorgus

Zorgus

male LV 15

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2019-03-05 Joined United States
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2 years ago
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he needs to reward my boy Toros generously and soon!

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2 years ago
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doves should be droves here

It was one thing to be bombarded by many explosive projectiles from the opposing side, but it was another thing to see your own cultivators dying in doves at the hands of the enemy's counterparts. It was the exact moment when the bandits started to seriously lose their morale and began to feel the helplessness of the situation. They finally understood the bleakness of the situation ahead of them. And the unspoken truth that they were going to be slaughtered like animals at the hands of the troop of the Aemilia clan began to set in.

The Revenant King of Rubrum

The Revenant King of Rubrum

Fantasy · MidnightMK

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2 years ago
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i like this chapter, last chapter’s second half… not so much. It’s not foreshadowing when you tell us exactly what the outcome of the war is. Maybe place the Rubrum Trivia of the afermath if an event where consequences go, after the events. Just a suggestion that would make it more enjoyable to read in my opinion.

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Zorgus
2 years ago
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honestly in my head i thought he was reading what move they were doing so nobody was ever yelling their skills to cast it

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