I just read all chapters, and reading this again brings me more joy than the first. Everything makes more sense, I see the connection and I know I will enjoy this novel even more. I hope for more chapters to come. I will also say, this is one of the better novels I read, I truly hope the lack of comments hasn't dissuaded you. I for one love every bit
Some tip. I won't admonish you for the fact of using you and then I, however you is usually used as a narrative form by someone telling a story to someone, or about someone. For an example an RPG. If you wish to use you form and I, then I guess you can mix em. I for the main character and maybe you on the animals like the wolves. Like you feel their hatred as they gnarl. I don't know just a poor example. Besides that, good read and I .an not wait for more^^
I think that is the point. I quite like how it was told, and fairly curious to see what will happen next.
Yuri definitely no male love interest, also fine with harem though or outright polygamy
What a way to drop someone in. I almost feel bad for him hahaha
I'm gonna give good marks for this, and will give a second review once more chapter's comes out. Sorry this will be a wall, on my phone so I apologize for not being able to space it out. anyway I love the prologue, and I hope when they find out they can't log out you won't do SAO style. It would be nice to see how things goes early on, seeing how smooth the prologue is. Story wise very nice. slight shame she went half human, wish she didnt', but that's personal opinion and not a critic. Overall great flow, lifelike main character, she is not stiff, nor one dimemnsional so far, hard to say early. I do hope you won't burn yourself out for seemingly pushing a few chapters a day. No need to rush yourself, unless you lessen the load once the prologue is done, not that I would know what is going on in your head. The background is good so far, it is clear she can draw from her former game, giving her an advantage, one advantage many have. Overall can't wait to see how it all unfolds
catched up for a second time wohoo ans I hope it goes well with the removal. Gotta say, so far this read has been very nice, though I think it might be time to maybe introduce some new people, someone who could genuinely be her friends, as well as a female lover/potential female lead seeing this is Yuri after all.Would be fine if it won't happen yet though, but I do feel she deserves someone who could keep up with her, it would do Alexia a lot of good. No this ain't a complaint, trust me I am enjoying the read by quite a nice margin, I wish you the best of luck.
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spoiler alertI honestly feel really bad for her, and her family. She is however correct in her assumption, sadly though time flows differently. I do wish that she didn't actually physically age once the dungeon run is over
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the male form better be unavailable, like he doesn't even act like a guy, and it is meant to be Yuri no? so I feel it will ruin it quite a bit of the story
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original Thunderdome
Shut up you darn animals! We are about to leave to a new planet, we are already done what we can at Thunderdome and now a new chapter for us will start. Says the human. The white wolf sneers, So what if we are animals you filthy human, with a short lifespan and your body is weaker then us hehe. The human ignores the white wolf. The nine tail demon person Sighs hearing them speak. Can the two of stop bickering. The demoness giggles hearing them. Do you remember how everything began? how we met and before we met? I do says the human I used to hate halfbreeds and beasts, I never thought that one day I will stand beside them to fight for a better future. I never thought I would ever welcome a human in my life says the White wolf. I never thought I would meet a demon, angel, human, beast stand together like the way we do says the Nine tail demon fox. I can still remember my first step into this world she says and sighs and sheds some tears. Did you know I was not originally a nine tail demon fox I used to be apart of the cat species? Everyone has a shocked look on their face hearing this. Argh lets leave before we start getting to sentimental says the angel. Nine tail demon fox shakes her head. I rather want us to tell the stories of how we came to be. I'll start says the Nine tail Demon fox.23 Chs 13 Collections
I'm starting to wonder, well that's a bit of a lie. I do however hope this novel is not dropped and merely on a long hiatus. I keep checking every now and then and now it has been seven months. If it is dropped then I want to say its's a shame but it has been a good read for what it's worth
Ascension of Demon Empress of Chaos
Fantasy · yuuhL