/ Fantasy / Perennial Throne of Vitalis
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Life, a journey without a definite roadmap. Some argue that it all ends with death. For me, death might be the beginning of something new, much like a seed growing into a towering tree. Life has the potential to transform even after our departure.
Life is like a flash of a rainbow in the evening sky—beautiful yet fleeting. As the sun bids farewell to the horizon, hues of happiness illuminate the darkness. The moments are brief but substantial enough to touch the soul with unforgettable warmth and joy. It's as if nature grants us a momentary burst of passion before the night descends.
Life itself is often riddled with contradictions. When a place is abundant with life, we tend to seek ways to reduce it, striving for equilibrium. We seek to reduce and balance the amount of life within an ecosystem to ensure that the life within does not grow too rampant and overwhelm the system.
And yet, in the process of attempting to control and balance these living systems, we often create new contradictions. For as we cull and balance the life within, we can inadvertently disrupt natural processes, create new imbalances while also trying to solve old ones and alter the equilibrium of the natural ecosystems.
[Hello there, folks! It's your friendly neighborhood author speaking! This is my debut novel, and that makes me a rookie in the writing game. I decided to dive into the world of storytelling simply because I got bored sitting around doing nothing.]
[I figured, why not write a novel to pass the time and avoid the whole "being seen as unemployed" thing by my parents. Speaking of trying to look productive, if you find my words a bit lengthy or overly complicated, please bear with me. I'm just starting to learn the ropes of writing. Keep it neat, and forgive me if my sentences are a bit all over the place. ]
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Write a reviewI like how the story unfolds and develops from the beginning until now. Maybe just a few tweaks here and there, but overall, it's okay. [img=recommend] I'd suggest adding a bit more action or something to propel the story forward. You might already have your own plan, but hey, I'm just sharing my opinion. Still, it's pretty good overall.[img=Smug][img=Smug]
Very good story so far! Kind of hard to figure out MC at times. Sure she is new to the body & world, but seems to be attracted to the one saintess, but yet suddenly attracted to the maid & let’s the maid relieve her tension in the bath. But also at times it feels like the details being used to give magic understanding & world design are a bit much over the MC progression, seeing how 35 chapters in & it’s only been little over a week time frame(?) in that world. But maybe author has it set as a slow start to give understanding before it picks up the pace. Plus lots of times where there appears to be repetitive sentences right after each other. Words might be slightly different, but still basically stating the previous sentence. But Again, the story is still good so far, just my opinion on things I see as a bump in my enjoyment of the story.
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I like how the author describes the world and environment experienced by the characters. I think this is a good novel if you don't really like novels that focus on war and are more slow and slice of life. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it]