Whitejr

Whitejr

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Just a shadow to the light

2018-08-24 Joined Indonesia
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Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Commented

Monkey king reference

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to curtainghost

in east continent the thing that you say will happen

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Whitejr

pro have class for any situation

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Whitejr

I don't saying that in the future you don't have interaction with your reader but just give a hint not the full picture of what you think so there can be many possibilities that can make the reading experience have unexpected situation of what they think and that what we call pro have class

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Lerex

And in the future chapter don't just admitted and respond of what you have planned and see your reader reaction and opinion of the said chapter And you can think of many road/possiblity from that like paradox or multiverse where you can become anything and the limit of this is your self

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Lerex

just make it original and interesting to read

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Lerex

just potential not the strength that he have right now but if he don't have any will to do the harsh training then he just like Gohan(Dragon ball) have so much potential than his father but pursuit another thing

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Lerex

is up to you right the almighty author And Add some betrayal in the future to make it interesting

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Replied to Lerex

just make it unexpected or complicated for this situation and add twist in every corner to make it interesting to read

Whitejr
Whitejr
1 years ago
Commented

timid kid with monstrous potential and have financial problems WOW classic but still interesting to read