Thank you for the kind review!
Honestly this is one of the best books I’ve read. There’s some chapters that frustrate me with slow pace but as a whole it’s an amazing story. I’ve bought the highest tier of privilege for probably a year in a row at this point. I highly recommend this story!
ch 0 -1 Why tier 2 priv will be cheaper
Action · Lord_Streak
Zaphyrella’s new appearance!
ch 116 Spirit Transformation, Part 2
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Marinelle’s new appearance!
ch 116 Spirit Transformation, Part 2
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Thank you so much!!!
ch 114 Fears and Worries
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Thanks! Fixed! You’re right. Looks like I forgot to type it in haha. 😅
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New Lassim! He’s 9.5 years old, ridiculous I know. Don’t worry, time skip soon so he is more at one with his current appearance. His body has become more mature due to the rapid breakthroughs. Dont worry, all children by the time they’re 14 would look more adult and have more mature bodies, but he’s just there faster since he hit Spirit Growth Faster.
ch 115 Spirit Transformation, Part 1
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Fluctuates based on strength but it really everyone cultivates to an extent as all nexarians receive elemental spirits at 8 years of that enhances their bodies. Other species live longer too. It’s kind of nebulous but people live a long time. It’s not super important, but it’s mainly there to make the battle between the gods, their creations and the Dragal be almost an eternal and long war that’s been happening for a long time. Also to explain older technologies and ancient things appearing in the story to be logical rather than “oh just random 2000 year old herb or object suddenly appears!” Kind of thing that makes almost no sense in other stories. At least this is more believable based on life expectancies and creation times.
With a flourish of the door's opening, in walked a scholarly gentleman, Sir Ian. He was a man that looked to be about 60 years old. In reality, he was already 8,000 years old as the average life expectancy in the world of Nexaria is 10,000 years.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Haha no worries, just please take the time enjoy what I’ve written and catch up to the current chapters! I think it’s pretty decent so far, but to each their own. I think my writing improves after chapter 25-30, but keeps more consistent later. Lots of practice is making it better I think. But, no worries if you don’t like it. I’ll keep writing anyways. 5 mass release chapters going out later soon too! Thanks for checking my story out!
"The time has come to decide the fate of this child—the fate of our universe hangs in the balance. My wife, Ava, and I have decided—we shall bestow upon him two spirits, the likes of which Nexaria has never seen. He shall command the fiercest lightning and the most indomitable waters—a storm incarnate," he proclaimed, his voice echoing through the chamber like a celestial choir.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Water works for the techniques and overall vibe of creating a typhoon. Gotta have the rain and lightning for a powerful shocking combo. The force of a tsunami and the electrifying destruction of lightning bolts. Incredibly dangerous and it synergizes well with each other more than wind. He and his halbard can generate enough force and pressure to do anything wind can.
"The time has come to decide the fate of this child—the fate of our universe hangs in the balance. My wife, Ava, and I have decided—we shall bestow upon him two spirits, the likes of which Nexaria has never seen. He shall command the fiercest lightning and the most indomitable waters—a storm incarnate," he proclaimed, his voice echoing through the chamber like a celestial choir.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Earth element is “nature” here. I wanted to make nature and metal elements a bit more distinct from each other.
He paused for a breath before continuing, "They can be any of the following: Light from the God of Day, Bavdall, Dark from the God of Night, Undos, Water from the Goddess Water, Ava, Wind from the Goddess of Winds, Ikmera, Fire from the God of Flame, Ribus, Metal from the Goddess of Metals, Moftia, Lightning from the God of Lightning, Famthar, or Nature from the Goddess of the Land, Miphine."
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
No guns in this world since I want it more similar to a Chinese cultivation story. Unique weapons exist but I just think guns don’t fit the fantasy setting I’m envisioning. They’re too op.
"I know you favor the halberd, so your spirit manifestation will most likely be that of the spirits that favor the halberd as well. The most popular being fire and metal spirits for halberd users. The rarer elements of Light and Dark are also a possibility considering your father's proficiency with his eternal Fire spirit. Whatever spirit you awaken tomorrow, make sure you listen well to the Iron Marquis' instructions to memorize your family's fighting techniques as a basis for the halberd arts you create. They are well balanced and you've trained well these last three years. However, you can never forget the basics as they will be the best foundation for your future killing techniques." He stated.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
Yea a little sad but lightning and water too OP combo haha
As he stood before the statue of Ribus, he felt a sense of pride well up within him. He was a son of fire, a descendant of warriors who had fought and triumphed in the name of their god. The flame that burned within him was a symbol of his heritage, a testament to the strength and resilience of his family line.
Fantasy · JPNovelFan
You’re an actual idiot. Typos do get fixed here and it’s actually prettt easy for an author to edit from chapter bullet comments. Trust me, I also literally have a contracted novel on here and can edit my chapters from typos people have pointed out too. You don’t need a stupid discord channel. Stop being so dense.
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Eastern · Observing the Emptiness
Khaalseru, Sovereign of the Celestial Heavens.
Probably. Gotta drag out them chapters for a bit.
ch 1929 Deduced Plan
The Martial Unity
Action · Lord_Streak