Webnovel Author: Great_Y - Novel Collection

An average story with lots of potential but has many flaws like involving religious mythology, MC's victim mentality and him taking credit for knowledge he received from Lilith as his own in front of others(Funny thing is he believes himself to be very intelligent and perceptive while listening to their praises. If not for Lilith he would be dead many times or not have achieved as much). Another unbelievable thing is people hesitating to gain power out of fear when the process of gaining it is very easy(No training or mastery needed in early stages). Hope author makes it more entertaining ahead.

Increasing power and fighting stronger entities. On repeat. Gets boring after a while. MC should stop fighting and author should instead focus on exploration, anything other than fighting. Writing also is lazy recently as it is same skills on repeat in all fights. Hope you make it interesting again.

Keep up the hard work. Don't let the spammers and trolls get on you. I really enjoy reading this story and can see how much effort you put into writing it. All the best with this novel and please don't drop or rush it in the future.

Hey author what does elo stand for? I see it frequently used.

yeah I was quick to write this review as I was thinking of putting it aside for some time but continued it some more and found out that it was clarified later.

I'm satisfied with the explanation given in later chapters.

I enjoyed reading it but Asna sharing her energy to save MC in virtual reality felt far fetched. Do they all use up the energy in real life if they use abilities in UVR then why aren't other players using energy supplements in real life to be at top-form always in these games. A big and poorly written plot armor. @author will it be clarified in later chapters