This is starting to feel like it is on repeat, we need some character development or something cause it’s starting to get stale like stale bread
"I'm scared…" he whispered to no one, his voice shaking with a vulnerability he usually buried deep. "I don't want to feel that again. That pain it's like it's still there, like I'm still right back in that moment… It took everything in me to try again, and now…" he trailed off, pressing a fist to his chest as if trying to hold himself together.
Urban · LazyDiablo
So does the tragedy tag mean this is going to end in a tragedy or that it has tragic elements to it?
So I’m guessing from his hacking, but still kinda a weird way to drop this
On the other end, there was a longer silence than before. When the general finally spoke, his voice was composed but taut. "Understood, Mr. black. I assure you, this situation will be handled with the utmost seriousness. You have my word that there will be no loose ends left, and any organization involved will be eradicated." The general paused, his words carrying a weight that was rarely given to anyone. "And for what it's worth… I apologize. I won't allow this oversight to happen again."
Urban · LazyDiablo
Lucian took a steady breath, his tone calm, yet carrying an unmistakable authority. "General, it's me Noir calling from another number."
Urban · LazyDiablo
Before the gunman could react, a glint of steel appeared in Lucian's hand, seemingly out of thin air. A sleek, black katana had materialized in his grip, its blade as sharp and deadly as vengeance itself. Lucian's expression was one of quiet fury, his eyes never leaving the man's face.
Urban · LazyDiablo
So does that mean it did happen? Cause that scene is where something did happen but everyone is suppose to pretend it didn’t.
Her fists clenched at her sides, her nails digging into her palms as she struggled to contain her anger. "This boy... How did I ever fall for his tricks in the past? How did I ever let him into our lives?!" Olivia's thoughts raced, disgusted with herself for how blind she had been. In her last life, she had been fooled by Victor's smooth words and fake charm. She had let him manipulate her, even allowing him to use her against her own son. "How could I have been so blind?!" she thought, rage and guilt boiling inside her.
Urban · LazyDiablo
Does she pop back up later in the story, or is this all we see of her before the destined day?
Especially because it does not say he will be happy, just that everyone around him will be.
[Overview: A person who's fated to be surrounded with happiness ???]
Fantasy · MCPG
correct, a truly barbaic way to do things
The storyteller glanced coldly at the confounded middle-aged Confucian scholar, "This is the fundamental strategy for nation-building, an act in accordance with natural and human principles. Those who tried to stop the inevitable were long since turned to dust and ashes. You remnant evildoers, however, still harbor malevolent intentions. Do you not know that the net of heaven is vast and unfailing, sparse yet letting nothing slip through?"
Eastern · Forget to wear a vest
Kinda hard to agree with you when every chapter has basically the same paragraph over and over
Lucian's gaze softened as he looked at Celestia. "You must know my story," he said quietly, a sad smile on his lips. "You must have heard it by now… the countless times I've been rejected, and still, I've kept hoping. It probably makes me look pathetic, doesn't it? Like some foolish, obsessed fool, still clinging to a dream that'll never come true." His voice trembled a little, though he tried to hold it together.
I Was Hoping She Would Notice but again Now When She Did... Im Tired
Urban · LazyDiablo