lordGalvatron

male LV 5

Salted Fish

2017-07-09 Joined Indonesia
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lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
2 years ago
Commented

Did cultivator have zipper? why did i feel odd did you got wrong reference? how about see MyLittleBrother? . there a lot of stuff with smut scene in cultivator costume

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

Get well soon for r them

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Secret Killer

Secret Killer

Urban · NoWoRRyMaN

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

battle with twin god _ its good for reader, and great for word count,, Im enjoy the chapter,, that marvelous..

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Posted

Well.. Story was interesting.. Worldbuilding was great.. MC and other character was realisticaly good.. I dont know how yo put it in the word.. But this comfortable and not cliche.. I dont know how you put it but that was marvelous.. I hope the MC not overpowered.. And still have rival or enemy with the same tier power.. Apex OP MC was not good idea in game genre.. But that good idea if you got want some face slapping.. Im not usually put review in story cause.. But i just say you got one reader here now.. hope you make this story enjoyable.. And have a nice day..

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

Thank you for story

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Posted

Have a wonderful story.. Great myth and full of beauty name of ancient legend.. Translation was comfortable to read.. Story was interesting.. World buinding wonderful but maybe will need a lot of time if there no time skip story.. Tragic story.. But MC got second chance.. I hope this will not became long story that forgotten the initial goal.. I hope this story will end before 1000 chapter.. Good luck.. God bless you

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

Pick this one please..

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

Well.. Still not enough.. Let me wait for mass release.. Hope the author got durian fall and have a good mood to mass release

lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
lordGalvatron
3 years ago
Commented

Well it okay.. That was still great stories.. It a bit boring.. Yeah.. But its just like intermezo.. So, its okay.. Hope you got interesting plot.. And hope you keep always your health.. God bless you