The real problem is that this Hiruzen was one of the best elements of this fanfic. Fujin doesn't have a lot of meaningful relationships and seeing the interactions between him and Hiruzen was one of the things that I was mostly expecting. Now what other characters do we have to interact? His teacher, his ex teammate and his students who I don't even remember the names of? Also I always get disappointed when fate becomes part of the story especially after so many chapters that you have established that this is a story with logical progression without OP shits. Finally even if Fujin starts showing his power after that what's the point? I was expecting Hiruzen's reaction to Fujins power reveal. Now the best that we can get is the crowd saying something like 'As expecting of councilman...' and Naruto saying something like 'Big brother Fujin is so strong '. So in 2 chapters you ruined the most important character interaction in your story and also you ruined the logical and balanced power scaling.
This is the story that you get after a conversation with chatgpt. Repeating dialogs without meaning and no character development. Even npcs have more depth than this kakashi. 'Let's do this together' and general catch phrases are repeated every chapter. At least try to read the story before posting it.
by author you mean chat gpt
The girl, seeing her comrades down, approached more cautiously, her movements calculated. Kaizen watched her with a calm focus, his mind clear and ready. She feinted a high kick, then aimed a low sweep at his legs. Kaizen anticipated her move, executing a flawless backward handspring to avoid the sweep. As he landed, he sprang forward with a quick jab to her shoulder, using a Wing Chun technique to disrupt her balance.
Anime & Comics · FearTcb
Nice chapter
it's an OK story but it goes too slowly and it's impossible to read 1 chapter and enjoy it. Also it is clear that a lot of paragraphs are made by ai... However it has potential.
I want moreee
Maximilian Bones
What these children were playing was actually Yu-Gi-Oh Dueling Cards invented by Edward himself. The game has become widely popular in the wizard world--among both children and adults. Official competitions have already been conducted, and even an international one was held two years ago.
Book&Literature · LazySageDao
Do you believe that Aizen-sama wouldn't use women to gain political power?
Sasuke nodded with a thoughtful expression and said, "So that means I need to find 4 wives. Can the wives be civilians, or must they be ninja?"
Anime & Comics · Spalk
It literally explains the logic in the next paragraph. It is just a matter of priorities.
Right now, it is not worth it to spend my time overanalyzing all this information. This is a developed world with rich history. I am sure that there are already many ninjas and scientists who have answered most of my questions. I can just wait until I have Hokage's trust and immediately gain access to all the information. I should only start experimenting when I reach the limit of this world's knowledge.
Anime & Comics · Spalk
Guys does anyone know the name of the original novel? I can't find it on MTL
Shinigami in the Ninja World
Anime & Comics · Bleam