tired of the same fanfics so ideas fill free to add are ask.

Imagine school kids taking some famous song or well-known speech and corrupting the words for humor.

Imagine the works of Ancient Grecian scholar, Cicero, and producing it in Latin (common tongue, vulgate)

Imagine print paper press technology taking "unknown text" and making nonsense with text alignment and missing punctuation.

Imagine digital publishing software taking corrupted paragraphs to show how professional a document you might create.

Paragraph alignment, word spacing, text alignment.

And there is 'Lorem Ipsum'; a paragraph out of context, for the wrong readership, corrupted of all meaning.

Have we really given it any thought?

Did language scholars sit down and discuss it in social circles.
Could the missing words be a secret code, and a way of passing messages amongst secret societies with secret handshakes.

Will code breakers discover hidden messages in breaking down the original Cicero text and Latin version?  Will the answer change if you consider the alignment and direct of words written in ancient Greek (a language that might transcribe leftward or rightward or a combination; depending on the age they wrote it).

I doubt it.  It doubt anything meaningful would be discovered; because the simplest answer is usually the correct one.

Lorem Ipsum exists because of corruption, reproduction, retelling, reprinting, misspelling, cut and pasting, and editing.

It is something to consider as I write today.  Will my word survive, and if they do survive; would I recognize them?

Expositionary Discourse.  The target is levity, but my aim might not be reliable.  Please leave me kind reviews!  This series will update with no advance schedule.

Some of the authors on Webnovels were inspired to write their own stories after reading the works of famous authors. Perhaps some of them believed that they could do a better job. Some of them ran out of things to read, so they decided to write the "story" that they want to read. While others… just want to write a story that they think will be popular to the readers.

Ironically, the stories that they had written also inspired other readers to write their own stories as well. Hopefully, this cycle will never end. So that the future generations will be able to read new and exciting stories that will show them a world filled with sword, magic, cultivation, and Lo--

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Xandarx: There's a reason for them to be famous as they have their style

Zenith: lol.

Xandarx: You can see it from their work, it's true. Like their character has embedded into the book. This is what make them different I think.

Zenith: I know. But not everyone is as great as you show them to be. They learn from their previous works While we are still struggling to finish one.

Xandarx: Yeah, I know.

Zenith: They move on and get better that's where the difference lies. If you see any CN author who made it big, you can see that they had their share of experience before getting there, or for that matter, any author in the Western world.

Murakami: Not necessarily publishing houses only accept works they think will sell.

Zenith: The ones who get it big the first time are rare.

Murakami: So you might not see how they built up to their debut novel. Authors can have 15-20 scrapped novels b4 they debut, and the public don't get to read a single one.

Reili: Yikes.

Xandarx: Yeah.

Zenith: That doesn't make the author lose his experience of writing those scrapped novels that's the point I was making.

Murakami: But it also means that it's more like hit and miss.

Reili: True because they don't get the feedback from fans.

Murakami: They get limited feedback from an agent/editor who doesn't want to read their work.

Zenith: Yeah, but it surely is better than nothing.

Murakami: And they're left with a bunch of abstract and vague advice that they have no idea how to implement.

Reili: If they don't enjoy it, the feedback won't be as insightful.

Zenith: They can learn from their mistakes from reading their own works.

Reili: Well…

Zenith: If possible, from platforms.

Murakami: If they knew how to do that they'd fix it and publish it.

Reili: It would make the process easier if someone who enjoys the book to give them better feedback.

Zenith: It's called rewriting from scratch, and it takes a tonne of time if the author feels more interested in some other idea of his, he would do that.

Reili: I suppose so since the author being inspired will bring his book along.

VKBoy: If the ones giving review are professional editors, then they don't necessarily have to have read your work with immersion because their suggestions will still likely cover the basic flaws that amateurish writers usually make.

Reili: Point taken.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: @VKBoy if they spot those errors they'll put down the manuscript after the first page

Reili: Then again, its a little bit like movie critics. They may hate the movie, but fans love it.

Zenith: Yeah.

Murakami: And then send a reply saying, "Don't send in another manuscript until you learn how to write properly."

Zenith: Professionals in the said field prefer not taking risks. Especially in movies, but books, you can keep trying.

VKBoy: Well, if there are errors in the first page itself, that's a whole different thing, lol.

Reili: True.

Murakami: No, but a good editor can tell the writing quality from just the first page even if you've crafted it perfectly, they can just tell that the rest will be shit.

Reili: You have to also take into account of one punch man. The original comic looks terrible, but the redraw made it amazing.

Zenith: That's smartness of the creator.

VKBoy: Well, in one punch man's case, it got attention from the companies after it got popular in the online communities.

Reili: So a persons writing and grammar may be terrible, but with a little editing, the story itself could be amazing.

Zenith: You can let the editor do the Shi*t and focus on your story, It works.

Overlord Venus: Yeah, solo leveling is a good example. The story is bland.

Reili: But it would also help if the author re-reads the edit to make sure the essence of their story is still there.

HavenlyJeep: Essence and core backbone.

Zenith: @Reili It depends on what the author wants, and how much work he is willing to put in.

Reili: @Zenith true.

VKBoy: Of course, some editors just butcher the style of the author.

Reili: Same but honestly I just use Grammarly and the read aloud function in word to make sure the chapter makes sense.

Zenith: You can learn about writing, grammar, editing if you truly want. It is just the question of, would you?

Reili: I'm more into thinking up ideas and writing them than editing.

VKBoy: Editing is also writing, mate. Rewriting is where real writing lies.

Zenith: It's a skill in writing a story, but your choice.

Reili: Point taken.

Murakami: You can't be a writer without being an editor.

Zenith: Editing it yourself can help you keep the heart of the story.

Reili: That being said, the more I write, the better my basic grammar became.

Zenith: You will keep the feels right.

Reili: Editing is now part of the process.

Zenith: And not make it just sound or look better, you give what the story wants
And that is a great thing.

Reili: Creative freedom.

Zenith: I want to learn grammar and revise what I learned.

VKBoy: @Zenith Learning grammar will take years, so take it slow and steady. That way, memories stick with you for longer times.

Reili: I do read mtl sometimes since I can't wait for chaps, but then I find myself reading in broken English and must stop.

Murakami: I'd like to correct that statement VKBoy. Learning grammar is easy
learning "usage" is hard.

VKBoy: lol, if you read mtl, your IQ drops. Believe me, this can affect a person's writing skill in the long run.

Reili: Definitely, which is why I stopped.

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Author's Notes

I'm sure you've read this a few times in the previous chapters, but I had been reading MTL chapters for the past few years. I usually read "Completed" stories, and most of them are around 2-4k chapters each. Of course, I read the translated chapters first. After I reach the latest translated chapter, I will immediately jump to *cough* Google Translate.

Yeah~ I know. Reading chapters through Google Translate was the most…epic mistake I did in the past. I've finished World Defying Dan God, Battle Through the Heavens uhh…and a few more novels using Google Translate.

In the later years, I discovered lnmtl.com, which gave me a better translation (at least the names of the characters are not written like Cloud Che instead of Yun Che (Against the Gods). 

To be perfectly honest, If I didn't start writing, I would have continued to read these machine translated chapters even now. Reading MTL works if English is not your first language.

This is something that those with English as their main language will scoff at. However, for those who just want to read. As in reading something without worrying about anything else, then they won't care even if it's a machine translated chapter. As long as they will be able to read the NEXT chapter, then it's all good.

This is also the reason why I admire translators. If not for them, these stories that we are not aware of will not be able to grace us with their presence. I would like to thank the translators of my favorite novels like Lord of Mysteries, Release that Witch, Against the Gods, Cultivation Chatgroup, Second Coming of Avarice, and so many other titles that I won't be able to list here.

To my beloved readers, if there will come a time when you feel like writing a story of your own and you're reading machine translated chapters, please stop now. I'm saying this for your own good. 

I understand how you feel. Believe me I do, but for the sake of the story you're going to write in the future, heed my advice. Stop now, while you still have the chance. Learning how to write from scratch with broken English is a painful process.

Then again, if you find an editor who is a masochist, consider yourself lucky. Let them clean up your mess for you, so you can focus on writing your story, and learn the art of writing while you write.

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Michael was gathered around his employees at the Eminence Gaming office. They were going to release the game. It was a monumental moment for the company since they were putting their first product on the market. The whole team was gathered around; honestly, Michael did not expect the game to be an instant hit upon release. He knew it would take some time; however, he did pay for some marketing over the weekend so he did expect favorable numbers from the first day. 

The game was on both app stores for nearly an hour now and the downloads were increasing at a steady rate. Michael heard an alert from his mission screen. 

[Mission 4: First Impression

Mission Objective: You have released the first product from your business empire. The product will be a milestone and will have a significant impact on both the public's and the employee's impression of your company. If your first game is a failure; you might even lose some employees. The game must achieve a high ranking in the app store within one week. 

Rewards: Depends on the rank in the app store by the end of the week. overall rank will be average of ranks in both app stores. ]

Michael was happy to get the mission. He already expected the game to break into top ranking anyways. However, he did not expect the game's performance to affect his employees. In hindsight it made sense, the game was designed by a 'mysterious' third party so the employees did not have full confidence in the game yet. Even with all the testing, once the game is released it would truly be in the spotlight and all the flaws will be revealed. 

The one-week deadline was problematic. He did not know of too many games that achieved top rank in the first week. However, he was confident in the game. The graphics were too extraordinary to not gather attention. 

The employees eventually dispersed and went back to work. The game was released and they just needed to wait for the results. The download chart was maintaining an upward trend, therefore so far everyone was optimistic. 

" So your game is released. What is your next step?" Jennifer approached Michael. She knew he was working on the game for the past few months. However, he was done with it now and she was wondering what his next project would be.

" Well, honestly that depends on the game's debut. If the game is well received then I will have to plan future updates. On the contrary, if the game flops then I will have to make another one." Michael explained. He had some ideas for future updates. He intended to keep up the game for a couple of years before shutting it down. 

Most mobile games have shorter lifespans than console games. It is too difficult to update old games and keep the graphics quality up to current games. It would just be better to design a brand new game or release a second version. Even smartphones change significantly within a couple of years. Developers needed to take advantage of hardware innovations and design superior software. 

Jennifer frowned at Michael's response; He seemed to forget about the parent company. "What about your traders? Don't you need to spend more time training them?" she thought Michael was not taking the training seriously. 

" Well, I have provided the resources, it is up to the interns to take advantage of it and learn. Trading is something that requires initiative; I cannot force anyone to be a trader. I do intend to spend some more time now that I am done with the game. However, it will take time for them to develop the skills to be professional traders." Michael explained. After all, all the interns had zero experience trading. They have only been studying for a week. So Michael did not expect much from them. 

Jennifer did not say anything else; After all, Michael was the expert. She understood that Michael was an introvert, therefore, had a hands-off approach to training.  She went back to her office to get some paperwork done. 

Michael decided to go home and get some homework done. His final exams were coming up and Michael's first semester of college would soon be over. He did not really care much for college now; however since he did not have to spend too much time studying he decided to stick with it and get a degree.

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William Taylor was having a depressing day. He was a successful YouTuber who had millions of fans. The problem was that he was tired of the mainstream games. He wanted to try something new; however, he was cautious about taking a risk and losing his fanbase. 

" Ring Ring"

William turned to his phone and looked at the caller ID. It was from the marketing agency he was trying to work with. The agency paid popular YouTubers to stream new games and advertise the game. He was excited at the chance to get paid to try a new game. 

He answered the phone; The conversation was short. The agent introduced the game and the developer. He agreed on a flexible pay for a let's play series based on the views. William hung up and immediately went to the app store to download the game.

He was about to get some snacks when he noticed that it was downloading really fast. "Whoa did my neighbor upgrade his internet?" William threw out that possibility. His neighbor was a cheapskate. He checked the game size and was surprised by its small size. The modern games easily went over one GB in size. He was skeptical about such a small game. After all, size matters.

William set up the recording software and the microphone. He started the game and was astonished by the loading speed. 

William was taken to the character creation screen. He explored the options and set up a goofy character.

" The character creation reminds me of Skyrim. I cannot believe a Mobile game has such complicated characters!" William commented. 

He was taken to what looked like the new player area. He completed a quick tutorial. After the tutorial, William felt like his head was stuffed. The game was too detailed for a mobile game. He felt like the game could keep up with the current pc games. 

The main objective of the game was to produce drugs and sell them. All players were given a small plot of land at the beginning. There were tons of different drugs to create. The easiest and quickest choice was marijuana. It had the lowest start-up costs and skill requirements; however, it usually had the lowest profits. Players can choose to specialize in different drugs and different production aspects. 

In order to get more land, players had to band together and form cartels to bid and fight for land. William chose to first join an NPC cartel and do some missions to earn some cash. 

" Wow, the graphics are so amazing. This game leaves everyone else in the dust?" William was so caught up in the game that he was forgetting to do commentary. That spoke volumes about the game's quality, as a professional presenter, what sort of game could draw his attention so much that he forgets to do his job? 

William enjoyed the missions from the NPC cartels. The mission revolved around protecting the drugs and raiding rival cartels. He loved the combat and was enthralled by the plot for the NPC cartels. Each cartel had an appealing backstory which encouraged players to become attached to them.

William heard an alarm. The recording software had sent an alert because he had been recording for three hours straight. He did not even notice the time flying. He stopped and started editing the footage. He wanted to share the game with all the fans. 

As a pro, he knew how to judge games. William knew that this game would break all records. He quickly let all his friends know. He wanted to form a cartel as soon as possible. This game was going to change the whole industry and he wanted to be at the front to get some benefits.

Michael was just an ordinary boy living in modern-day America. He grew up in an orphanage with a bleak future. One day he acquired a mysterious package only to inherit a system. Join Michael as he changes his fate and conquers his destiny; armed with a mysterious system that tries to convince him to take over the world.

This is my first novel so I would appreciate any constructive criticism and support.


This novel will also be posted on RoyalRoad.

Things to address:
• Support and thanks
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Support and Thanks!
Hi everyone! Whether you are a reader old who struggled through the original drip feed of chapters… or a new reader who has joined with the influx of re-uploads, welcome to the chaos :P 
I really must say that for me, personally, this has been such an amazing journey of highs and lows. I am not disillusioned with my own writing. I know I am not the worst – but I am also well aware that I am not the best by any means, even in the community of freelance online writers. So the fact that so many of you take the time to read A Hand-Woven Universe not only blows my mind but also makes me so happy. Although it might be a long endeavor – I will continue the story of Noone and Tapestry all the way to the end.
Promise.
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Obviously on all websites where this is uploaded, they have a system in place to help rank the stories. I won't beg too much, but please consider doing whatever it is to bring this story a larger audience!
On WN this means voting everyday – if you feel so inclined, and leaving a review.
On RR this means leaving a rating and review.
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Amazon Paperback/Kindle
After a multi-month haitus… I am proud to announce that Silence In Tapestry, Book 1 of A Hand-Woven Universe, is for sale on Amazon! 
If you enjoyed book 1 enough to consider purchasing a paperback copy, then I would like to give you my thanks now just for  the simple fact that you took the time to read all the way to that point. However, the paperback copy is not perfect. I had to do all of the writing, editing, and formatting myself. This means its quality will not be the MOST professional it could have been. For this I apologize, but for what it is – I am happy with it. Flaws and all.
If you would just like to support me but don't want to spend the money to purchase a paperback, please consider buying a kindle copy! It's far cheaper and I will receive about the same profit from either due to Amazon's royalty agreement.
Thank you all for being so patient with me getting this whole thing together. I know a lot of worries were going around about whether or not I would be back. Well, I am!
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For those of you who have been supporting me on Patreo n (even through the hiatus…) Thank you. I honestly can not express my feelings on this properly through words alone – which really calls into question my efficacy as a writer. Nevertheless, I hope you all are prepared for book 2!
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What happens to a world of Magic and Dragons when a cultivator bursts into their universe? What about when a cultivator is raised right under their noses?

How do Wizards and High Elves, Dungeons and Dwarves, fare against an unknowing cultivator and the Laws of the Universe?

Epochs ago an Immortal left his inheritance behind on a dying plane of existence. 

Now, at the edge of what was once desolate world, the immortals inheritance is about to make himself known. And his name is Noone.

An original cultivator of his world, unguided, and unrestrained.

Noone is the powerless child of a civilazation locked away at the edge of the world. When tragedy occurs, and his world is turned around, he inherits the Will of The Ancestor. An ancient legendary being who protected the conclave of Tapestry, until the desolate world above would become re-inhabitable.

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IMPORTANT: This is a long-form narrative. If you don't enjoy slower-paced world building then this isnt the novel for you.

NOT: a systems/reincarnation story

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Peter was dead busy nowadays but he couldn't neglect when the doctor called to inform him that the girl was not in her hospital room. After a while, even though he somehow managed to bring her back to the hospital, he was not at ease. He couldn't leave.. He was sure she will disappear again without getting her complete treatment and he felt himself responsible. He was awed at her strength of endurance. She could eat up all her pain without any complaints or demands. He had seen that her legs were bleeding when he saw her sitting on the bench before, but she was not ready to accept his help even then.
Peter had always despised girls, since they demanded something or the other every now and then and exaggerated too much. He was not the type to get into any relationships and he preferred to stay away from whoever came to stick up to him.
He liked it to be alone without any burden or responsibilities. If he was in his usual self, or if this girl was like any other girls he saw before, he would have abandoned her in the hospital and left the place for good. He might have given her all the monetary benefits which was enough to shut anyone's hunger.  
But this girl did not sway with money. At the time he rushed to the hospital before, to find her missing, 
he had seen the money left by her on the table, which he had given to her the previous day.. He had always believed that money could buy anything, trust, love, or respect.. but this girl kept on proving him wrong. 
Bella had already slept in the car while driving. Peter carried her and placed her in her hospital bed. As he turned to leave, he found that she had firmly gripped him with her fingers. He felt it hard to leave her, not after seeing the painful wrinkle that had grown over her face now. Releasing her hold, he went to call the doctor..
After the doctor checked her, he did not look very happy,
" She had been healing very fast and doing very well yesterday.. Now it had worsened. She would need great care to move about now since her leg had started to swell up. What about her parents? Any idea of her family..?" The doctor asked Peter.
" They are not at home, it seems. Some family emergencies. She will have to manage on her own.. How many days it would take doctor?" Peter felt strangely concerned about this girl.
" It may take a few days, a minimum of two or three days atleast."
Thanking the doctor and bidding him good night, Peter sat on the chair near Bella's bedside. He was terribly tired of workload, and this girl was making it more difficult for him. He watched her taking deep irregular breath, her sleep seems disturbed so he held her hands pressing her fingers lightly.. He saw her smiling beautifully as if in a dream.. She looked very pretty when she sleeps. Her lips molded with fine pretty creases glowing in the dim hospital light. After his grandma's death, it was the first time he was taking care of someone at a hospital and he did not felt it that bad..
Early in the morning he woke up with a startle.. His neck was aching due to sleeping in the chair.. He was shocked to find that the girl was not there in the bed. He looked around and felt relieved finally on seeing her coming out of the bathroom. 'Is she always this adamant in asking help?' he wondered seeing her limping as she walked.. She smiled at him and nodded a good morning.. Last night he had practiced a few sign languages so that he can communicate with the girl. He was himself surprised on his little efforts to make her happy. He gave her a good morning in sign language and saw her blushing secretly. It had occurred to him after reading the numerous scribbling on her bedside that it could have been the loneliness making this girl run away from the hospital, so he had decided to bring over his important documents over to the hospital and continue his office work here to give her a company. He had been calling Mark till yesterday night but he was not picking up the phone, so he decided to go to office himself to get the files.
As he parted with girl to set off to his office, he felt the girl giving a sober farewell so he assured her he will come back. Strangely he was behaving like an entirely different person around this girl and he wondered what it was in her, was it really sympathy and guilt, he doubted it..
As he packed up his things in the office, he noticed the third invitation from the international conference. He opened it and was surprised to find that this time it was decided to be held in his office. It would be held after exactly one week and he was given a special task too. He smirked at the demand they had put forward. He could never reject them since they were the highest of officials from all over the world comprising highly influential writers, scholars and businessmen. He did not like his task at all. It sounded silly and rude at the same time. He was asked to take Dona Jacob, the famous young author of pebbles out for a date..! It was not at all a professional thing to be asked and he was enraged. He immediately dialed the incharge.
"This is a part of an investigation and you are an important person in it. Dona had been nominated for Best Debut Author by the mass but we are not convinced by her interviews. Our sources have informed that you have already met Dona once. So we need you to take her out to a casual dinner and extract ideas about her stories. If she seems genuine then she would be qualified for the award. We will make sure that your company earns huge profit on this behalf." The man opposite knew his ways. He had known that Peter's business had been a little rough these days and a boost from any source would lessen his burden and bring his position back to his heights. 
Peter reluctantly agreed to make a deal. He was not at all fond of that girl and did not wish to ruin his time either but it was a business deal and there was no way he could step out.
He reached back to the hospital as soon as he could.. Bella had been scribbling something on a piece of paper when Peter entered the room and looked excited when he entered. She was trying hard to hide the too apparent emotion. 
Peter had continued his work already sitting at the hospital chair and watched laterally that Bella was looking at the stories in his hand too. She indicated that she too wanted to help and he said it was editing and was difficult. She looked sad and crossed when he underestimated her. 
Peter gave her a few sheets to just help her kill some time. Within a few minutes she handed back the paper to him demanding more. He read her editing with an uninterested gaze but was surprised to find the most beautiful writings.. She had melted the story and molded it into a perfect scenario. The event and the characters were portrayed perfectly well that the story gave a new promise, it became a wonder.. He was at a loss of words and wondered who this girl was. Was it just a coincidence that he met her..?

Isabella Lawrence, a deaf and mute girl born with misfortunes right from her birth.. A bad omen.. that's what everyone called her..lost her parents on the day of her birth and ended up living with her aunt who hates her..
Her life takes a U turn when a rich and rude young man enters her life making her life more miserable.. But sending in her a shiver of love...
And how does Bella solve her father's mystery..!!
Let's walk into Bella's world...a mixture of adventure .. hatred and a silent love..❤

I know it's a long break (more than a year) but I had to focus on my studies. Now into a 2-year internship with lots of free time in my hand. Thus I've decided to continue the novel, at the very least I can guarantee that I can keep writing for the next couple of years.

Guys, I'll officially upload the next new chapter in a couple of weeks; I'm editing all the chapters released, to improve the standard. Re-evaluation of the novel showed my standard of writing is weak, which's obvious given the fact that English is only my third language.   

I'm working on improving my writing skills but for the immediate results, an Editor software has been subscribed for premium.  

Readers are welcomed to re-read the chapters edited, all edited chapters will have the date of editing in the 'author's thoughts'. I'll be editing at least three chapters every day.

I know many readers might be angry or disappointed with the inconsistency and huge break for which I extend my humble apology to all the readers. And will be extremely grateful for all those re-joining the ride and thanks for reading my book.

Alistair strolled through darkness shunning himself from light, he was plunged into the depths of hell by the greed of his own family. He crawled from those depths leaving trails of blood, craving for vengeance and toiling like a crazy wounded wolf.
 
After years of struggle he stands at the peak, a peak no one could touch, a peak where he could disdain anyone. Alistair had long got his revenge and quenched his burning fire with blood of those wronged him. 

The man who was supposed to have achieved everything one could possibly attain in a lifetime was actually left with nothing but felt utter isolation and icy solitude before his inevitable end, the death.

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Alistair was given another chance, reincarnation, with a system and the inheritance of the entire universe. 

He’s determined to lead an entirely different life, a life in which he truly pursues happiness with lots friends, lovers and a lovable family.

Will he get over his past and really turn a new leaf??? 

Will a place where law of jungle has long seeped into the society allow him lead a pleasant life without any carnage or bloodshed?????? 

 
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Hello readers. I'm currently not able to access the site using my laptop. I'm not sure when this problem will be solved but until then I'm not going to post any chapters. I could write with my phone but it would drop the quality since my phone is not installed with proof reading software which help with my editing. I don't have an editor and I'm working on this novel on my own. Being a non-native english speaker myself, I would surely make a lot of mistakes while writing. (Even with the software I would do mistakes here and there. Imagine doing so without one ㅠㅠ) I hope this problem could be resolved soon. Thank you for your understanding. By then I will continue drafting.

Kim was thinking to himself while looking at his friends. Although he seems playful when he is talking to others, inside he was more mature. He thinks rationally, and act rationally. He always dreamed of becoming a researcher one day and win the Nobel Prize. He had a brilliant mind which was trapped in the wrong body, in the wrong era. If only he was somewhere else different, maybe people would become more open to him and give him chances. Every single time he displayed his geniuses no one seems to bother because none did understand.

Despite the setbacks, he doesn't really hate his life. He always has his lovely family and most trusted friends with him. They are the one who made his life interesting. Even if others didn't believe him, his family and friends always give moral support when he mentioned his dream. Regardless of whether they understand him or not, because of them he never gave hope with his ambition.

He muttered to himself again,

"Hahhh can't some interesting things happen to stimulate my brain. I'm dying here. The teacher just read his notebooks. I don't even know if he understands the content. If only a comet come smashing in or an earthqua-"

Suddenly, he felt a slight tremor. He thought he was imagining things, but the class seems to be quiet. Too quiet! Again, a tremor with higher magnitude shakes the ground.

"What is this? Earthquake?

Finally finished all main tabs of the soft I was making. I still lots and lots of ideas on how to improve the soft, but that for the later. Filled in info up to the last chapter and already found inconsistencies in the last chapter(Level 14, part 1) due to writing it not in top condition. 
I am also adding more to previous(Level 14, part 1) chapter, because at Wednesday I had no time to properly finish it, so I felt that I have to do it properly! Fixing some mistakes that I found thanks to software. Added arrows, that people asked for)) Added things that I wanted to initially add and etc.
Chapter will still remain mostly foundational and these types of chapters will often appear in the beginning until year 2-3 maybe, because leveling will slow down by that time substantially. And by the time MC will reach higher levels, this kind of chapters will pretty rare.
I will republish it in a few minutes. Will just do a final read before publishing, and fix mistakes missed at pre-editing. 
Me editing and republishing chapter doesn't mean there will be no chapter today, so no need to worry))
I am publishing Friday chapter but later. Maybe like hours later, but it will be published.
I have already started working on it. 
Enjoy! And see you in a bit))

Seems like the time has come for another party to begin. Let's hope this one will be a success. World - Potterian. Person - random.
***
Met truck-kun. Obviously died. Nobody survives after fateful meeting with him.
Afterwards, I was reborn in the different world with the system from my favorite game! However, there was a catch - I had negligible amount of knowledge about this universe. 
***
I open my eyes and see [You were caught during unauthorized entrance into a magic academy!] 
"Oh cmon... System, do you really need do this every time? Now... what will I do?" 
[Pick a race]
"..."

Hey Guys

So i saw a variety of comments so far on my fanfic . 

Some very appreciative, a ton of thanks for that.

Some however had a problem with the story or its progression speed or even portrayal of some of the characters which you guys thought was forced.

Anyway, i will be answering some of those things here, hopefully solving your issues.

First : some of the readers thought my fanfic is a copy of another on webnovel called 'teen gamer in teen wolf' or something like that.

Well i have read a part of that, I won't deny that. However, while some scene setting have been similar no doubt, the entire thing is not a copy. Especially that scene with first dinner at Allison's and the first night with her. I adapted them into the fanfic only because it was similar to what i had initially planned.

However to say my fanfic is entirely a copy, i would just say that either you have not read it properly or you enjoy picking on writers. 

In fact, statistically around 65-68% of fanfics on webnovel have similar setting to other fanfics based on same novel, tv series or movie. But guys, that is all they are, a fanfic. i am not gaining any money or fame out of this. I write because i like it. 

Plus honestly speaking, i know i might sound a bit cocky as an author right now, but please go and properly compare our novels if you think it's just a copy. whether by content, grammer, storyline or original character's description or background, i have always strived to do my best for there to be least possible holes in story and that reflects in my fanfic as per what i have seen.

however if you decide to hate this despite that then well i have nothing more to prove

Second: A lot of people were worried about the progression speed of the story, concerned that i might be skipping a lot of episode content compared to the original canon. well that is both true and not true. 

if you are worried about just the low amount of chapters then i would have to say your worry is not needed, because of two main reasons. first of all, my chapters are fricking long dude. i got the inspiration from author Leylin who has posted his work on Naruto fanfic at both fanfiction.net and webnovel. he believed in quality over quantity and that showed in his work. each one of his chapters are enormously long, on webnovel atleast they evaluste to around 50 to 60 pages per chapter. my fanfic is gonna be similar. if you read my fanfic in paging mode of webnovel, you will find that my chapters hover around and average of 40 pages, whereas generally chapters of  fanfics on webnovel span around 11 to 12 pages per chapter. so you can judge the rest. In total my fanfic until now is comparable to 15 to 16 chapters of any normal fanfic. so seeing that, i would say the story progression is going just fine.

another thing is that, Scott is not the MC in my fanfic . therfore I didn't see the need to completely follow the tv series events. I will definitely use the timeline of the series as a guide to my fanfic, but i wont be adhering to it word to word. I will add only those existing plots that i feel pertain to what my MC is developing towards. Plus, i might be adding new plots of my own, as you will see in the upcoming chapter.

Third : many of you had a problem with Allison's chracter in my fanfic or the MC's name. well, i don't have much explanation to the second one except that i like it, so sue me if u like.

about Allison, her character had always been something i pondered ever since watching the show. dude that girl just keeps forgiving Scott for everything he did intentionally or unintentionally. I dunno if you had the opportunity to observe the girls in the real world guys, but they don't do that, no no no. if any of you have recently come into a relationship then let me tell you, Scott is the worst model to follow.

Plus i felt the tv show was too skewed at Scott for most of the beginning of the storyline, for very obvious reasons. but that reflected on Allison's chracter in the show too. her getting together with Scott initially made a bit sense, beautiful girl and new werewolf who also happens to be a sweet understanding kid who wants to use his powers to excel in sports, kind of weird thing but acceptable. but later in the story i just felt Allison's character could have easily bonded with one of the others if the rest of the main characters were not shown as either idiots or jerks. it was not until Isaac came in later seasons that we saw that Allison could have easily moved on from Scott earlier in the series had there been any other option available.

anyway, i wanted to correct this hole in the story, hence my MC and Allison . obviously I am going to make a lot of changes to the plot line to support this since i like Allison's character and i can bond her pretty well with the concept of my MC as she is one of the only human teen in the show for a very long time. most of the main teen characters in the show have been one form of supernatural or other except for Allison and Stiles i think. so ya, that was my idea behind doing this. 

also, some of you found Allison bitchy or untrustworthy character. or that my MC stole her from Scott. but hey, have you seen teen wolf ? Scott is not one of the most cleanest of characters guys. in fact if you remeber, he was the one who cheated on Allison first immediately aftr their breakup, try to go and see episode 8 of season 1 if you don't remember. therfore, i decided to insert my MC a little bit before that to let allison naturally go to him instead for being honest and everything. in fact, in the series if you remember, Scott still doesn't tell her for a while after this why he did all that. it was only when the hunters start to go actively aftr Derek and Scott taht allison finds it out.

so ya guys, that is all for me this time. i think i addressed all the issues i mentioned at the start of this discussion. please do comment if you find anything wrong or that you have something to add to my opinion. i would love positive feedback, and to all haters : i love you too since you just increase my views and collections when you come here to spew poison on me and my fanfic. It doesn't make any personal impact on me you know, i just write because i like it not because of some professional thing. positive feedback helps me improve my craft, negative feedback is just another form of joy at how much people have tried to go deeper in to my fanfic. therefore both are welcome as far as I am concerned . even if no one reads my fanfic, i would still be posting anyway no matter if i took some short breaks, because ultimately I have a life and i post only as a self entertainment. some watch television, some watch videos, i write books, that is all.

thanks you guys, those who decided to read through this entire discussion. you have my respect. 
those who didn't, it is fine anyway. i will just point here when there is any query or question in future.

Oh and the next chapter will be posted in 12 hours. just a few bits of editing left which i will complete after coming back from my classes.

Goodbye. Ciao

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