Five days went by in a flash. Li Wei swung his sword as he took away the last HP of the muscular goblin in front of him. "Finally! I now have 40 goblin blood," exclaimed Li Wei as he picked up the items dropped by the goblin. Goblin blood actually could not be collected by normal means. The player needed to have an "Empty Vial" in order to collect it but Li Wei was already prepared for that.

Li Wei spent most of his day hunting goblins in the dungeon to collect Goblin Blood while his evening was dedicated to training techniques. Goblins were much stronger than him at level 14-15. While he could usually fight a goblin in a one vs one, they often walked into groups which made it hard for Li Wei. In the end, he teamed up with some players he found at the dungeon. This was the reason it took so long to collect the 40 Goblin Blood; he could not monopolize all the items for himself and had to share with nine other players. Many players already started to attack the 10th floor of the dungeon. He often met parties of the Fleeting Clouds Sect and joined them temporarily; on two occasions, he even joined Cai Wenji's party.

The latter was delighted to have Li Wei join the party; this way, they could improve their coordination. Unfortunately, even with Li Wei joining, the party was not complete since Bright Sun chose to stop hunting and focus all her attention towards cooking. A few days after exchanging contribution points with Li Wei, the beautiful priest ended up upgrading her profession to Grade 1 Cook. She became the first Grade 1 Cook of the Cai Family. Even in the entire Fleeting Clouds Sect, there was only another Grade 1 Cook which showed how rare this achievement was at this stage of the game.

During that week, even when he shared his exp with his party, Li Wei leveled up twice and was now at level 14. His Myriad Sword Dance also reached level one, giving him access to [Sword Storm Dance]. It was an extremely practical skill especially since it did not differ much from Li Wei's usual fighting style. While training, he would alternate between the right-handed and the left-handed version of the technique. It was essential to get used to both hands since he wanted to use two blades and the technique was meant for only one at a time. He slowly gained some insights into the technique, but it was not enough yet to improve the technique. The Myriad Sword Dance felt very familiar to Li Wei. He quickly mastered it, pushing the completion rate to 95%. He would often lose himself while practicing and would end up with 99% Fatigue most of the time.

If he had the choice, Li Wei would naturally choose to train more but unfortunately, he was limited by the fatigue system. After hunting during the day, he would already end up with an average of 50% fatigue. That barely left him with enough to train his techniques if he wanted to be back to zero fatigue the next day. The room he was currently staying at the inn would normally reduce his fatigue by 75% after one night of sleep. In the end, since he wanted to practice all his techniques well, he had to rely on the Prosperity Hall to lower his fatigue. He was not as rich enough to go to the higher floor. For his personal consumption, the ground floor was more than enough, lowering his fatigue by 25%. The food excellent, and he would often go there for breakfast, taking advantage of the buff in stats to hunt goblins more efficiently.

After just a week, most of his gold was already gone and he was left with only 53 gold now. Naturally, all the gold was not spent solely on food. Part of the gold went towards improving Li Wei's equipment. Now, all his equipment were Peak Grade 1 with the exception of the [Tear of Fairies] and his enchanted ring which was merely a low-quality Grade 1. He did not change it yet since he liked the spell, [Earth Wall] that was bound to it.

After leveling up, Li Wei naturally invested his stat points in Dexterity. He started to find his stats quite unbalanced, but he chose to stick to his original plan. His Character stats were now:

Name: Seven

Race: Human

Level: 14 (5297/50000)

Class: Warrior

Profession: Grade 1 Fisherman

Title: None

HP: 120/120

MP: 100/100

Strength: 14(+3)

Dexterity: 21(+2)

Vitality: 9(+3)

Intelligence: 7(+3)

Wisdom: 9(+2)

Stat Points available: 0

Skills: [Cleave], [Strengthen], [Weapon Throwing], [Howl], [Blade Draw], [Gliding Steps], [Myriad Sword Dance], [Impale]

Fatigue: 48%

Impale was another skill that he recently acquired. Li Wei exchanged some contribution points at the Warrior Association for the skill. It cost 4000 Contribution Points, but it was a powerful skill.

[Impale (level 0)]
Thrust the user's weapon towards a target, damage +25
Mana cost: 20
Cooldown time: 20 seconds

Overall, Li Wei was quite satisfied with the way he spent the week. When he looked at the leaderboard ranking of the city, he stood in the top 1000. So far, only 10 players reached level 15 at Algate City but these players all came from the three big guilds and obtained a lot of resources from them.

Having finally collected all the goblin blood he needed, it was time to return back to the city. It was still three hours before the start of the night cycle, but Li Wei chose to go back now since there was a place he wanted to visit: the Alchemist Association.

...

"Hello sir, may I help you?" asked a receptionist to Li Wei. The latter just arrived at the Alchemist Association and was immediately greeted. He was surprised to see that the receptionist was actually a player and not an NPC. The receptionist was simply a poor player trying to obtain some Contribution Points from the Alchemist Association by acting as a receptionist. Similar tasks were available everywhere, but Li Wei never bothered to check the quests available and so, he was not aware of it. In fact, many players already integrated into the society. Everyone did not like to go to out to hunt monsters and found other ways to earn a living peacefully. Many guilds even sent some players to take important positions to help them develop.

"Hello. I would like to speak to the Alchemist Moody Writer," answered Li Wei.

"Moody Writer? One second please. I will see if he is free," answered the receptionist.

Moody Writer was one of the few Grade 1 Alchemists of the city. Compared to most of his fellow colleagues, he did not belong to any guilds right now and relied on his own efforts to level up his profession. Before, when he tried to join the big guilds, he was roughly rejected. Even mid-tier guilds kicked him out immediately. But in the end, he succeeded in becoming a Grade 1 Alchemist by himself and now, all the guilds were furiously chasing after him. However, Moody Writer did not forget the previous treatment he was given and in turn, he rejected the offers of the guilds. 

He was now working for himself at the Alchemist Association. He had quite a good reputation among the players since he was one of the few Grade 1 Alchemist from who they could buy items. Most Grade 1 Alchemists belonged to guilds and would not trade with normal players.

"Excuse me sir but Moody Writer declined meeting you. He is in the process of refining a batch of important pills and cannot be disturbed," politely answered the receptionist.

"Really? In that case, can you tell him that I might have something that can help him level up his profession?" asked Li Wei.

"Leveling up a profession? Really sir? Does such an item exist?" asked the receptionist with a glimmer in his eyes. He himself was an alchemist and was naturally interested.

"I said maybe. I am not sure, but can you relay my words to Moody Writer?" asked Li Wei.

"Mmm. You should first present to me the item. I cannot disturb an alchemist for such a reason without evidence! If I do so, I might cause him to fail his pill production!" righteously answered the receptionist while making a hand motion, hinting at Li Wei to take out his item.

The latter frowned. He clearly knew that the player in front of him wanted to acquire the item for himself or in the worst scenario, he might spread this information to his guild. Above the shoulder of the receptionist, was a small transparent badge but unfortunately, Li Wei did not recognize it.

"In that case, I will wait here for Moody Writer to finish his batch. Please tell him that," said Li Wei as he turned back and walked towards a couch.

"Please wait brother. Is there a way that we discuss among ourselves? You see, I am very interested in the item you are holding. Name a price!" declared the receptionist. He panicked for a second as he saw Li Wei's behavior and went straight to the point. 

"Oh? You are interested? Very well, my price is simple, one of each stat increasing Grade 1 and Grade 2 potions plus 20% on the future sales of the product! What do you think?" asked Li Wei.

"What? Brother, this is too expensive! I don't even know what item you have but I seriously doubt that even Moody Writer will accept such a price," answered the receptionist.

Stat increasing potions were as their name suggested, potions that could improve a player's stat. It was quite an expensive potion that the players at the top of the leaderboard all used. Li Wei himself used one at Algate City: The Body Strengthening Potion he obtained from Elder Jari. The cost of the materials of the potion only cost about 8 gold but yet, these potions were all priced at about 100 gold. It was a complete rip-off but still, many players chose to buy them. The high price was due to their availability. Less than ten alchemist players could craft them right now and so, they took advantage of that to increase the prices to that level. Even the different associations and the Fleeting Clouds Sect were offering them for exchange but that was against 1500 Contribution Points.

These potions could only be used once but players could use their stronger versions afterward. For example, Li Wei consumed the Grade 1 Body Strengthening Potion and obtained 1 point in Strength. If he was to drink that potion again, there would be no effect. However, he could drink the Grade 2 Body Strengthening Potion to further increase his strength.

"This is the price I set. If you cannot accept it, then please relay my message to Moody Writer!" politely answered Li Wei. He did not really want to trade with the receptionist and so, immediately placed a high price to push him away. Li Wei did not just want a simple trade; what he wanted right now was to build a relationship with an independent alchemist. He did not want to rely solely on the Fleeting Clouds Sect and so, decided to start building a few relationships here and there.

The receptionist's face hardened. He was very interested in the item since he only had a mediocre talent for alchemy and if he could level up his profession, that would mean a lot to him. However, he did not know if it was a scam, especially since the player in front of him did not want to show any items before signing a contract.

"Brother. Don't make things difficult for me. You know that I can simply not say anything to Moody Writer and he would not know anything that happened here. You could stay here and wait but that would be in vain since he lives at the Alchemist Association and rarely goes out," said the receptionist. According to what Li Wei said, he should be in possession of a sort of recipe. Considering the price, it should even be a unique recipe. If he was the one to obtain it, then his status would immediately rise.

"Really? Do you think you are the only receptionist here?" asked Li Wei while pointing at the other receptionists who were dealing with other players. Some of them were players while others were still NPCs. "Besides, don't forget that I can report your behavior..." 

Hearing that, the receptionist became furious, he started grinding his teeth, thinking of some ways to go around this but in the end, he could only go back to his counter and start messaging Moody Writer. He was just an employee right now and what Li Wei said was true. He could act freely to some extent but if he was reported, then the higher-ups would look into the matter and he might get some trouble. In the worst case, he might even get expelled from the association which will result in him wasting two weeks of his time at the association.

As Li Wei expected, he did not have to wait for long before Moody Writer replied. It was said that the players who focused on their professions were usually obsessed with them and would do anything to level them up.

"Moody Writer is still concocting his pills but he says you can go in for now. Here's a guest badge. Please go to room 291" drily answered receptionist.

In 2050, an unprecedented nuclear disaster forced all human beings to find shelter in undergrounds refuge. Not knowing when the level of radiation will reach acceptable levels, the world leaders decided to bet everything on the next generation. They reallocated all their resources into a single project. A new VRMMORPG about to be released is redesigned to accommodate the world population. It will not only provide people with a goal and leisure but also serve as a test to find the future leaders that will rebuild Earth.


Follow the adventures of an orphan as he climbs from nothing to the very top. He will face many difficulties, venture into a boundless world and finally build up his own kingdom. Caught in the storm of the struggles for power, he has no choice but to grow stronger. This is the story of the man to be known as the Emperor of Chaos.

Here's an edited version available on Amazon: 
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Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/nikostar2

*Knock Knock*
Raden opened the door.
"Mister Liang you're invited to the seven families banquet."
A guard gave him a letter.
'Oh?' 
It was obvious that his actions would have caused some ruckus, but he didn't expect that the most powerful families of the viscounty would give him so much attention.
He was invited to the wedding of the princess of the Li clan that would be held in three days. Usually, those events would be an excuse for the families to forge alliances and recruit new members.
'The Li clan...first between equals. Do they really value me so much?'
The Li clan was the one that administered the Academy. Holding the title of viscounty, they would try creating some balance between all the other clans: by inviting some talents in such a big event they could check which clan would recruit who.
'It's going to be interesting...'
'Well, it's time to take my cauldron!'
**********
*Knock Knock*
No one opened the door.
'Ah, well he's probably teaching or something...'
'What if I were to-' 'Nope. I respect personal privacy and wouldn't do anything like entering into houses without permission or something...'
Yet it was so tempting...
Then Raden thought about his teacher Qi Cultivation level.
'He's at least a Dantian Opening'
In comparison, a Dantian Opening was as strong as a Mid Second Stage Body. Actually comparing the two would be difficult since Body Cultivation had arbitrary distinctions between realms and stages, lacking bottlenecks or breakthroughs
'The library! I should look there for Body Cultivation Arts!'
...
*Knot*
Raden put his Red Badge on his chest proudly. He obtained it at the end of the trial, situated in the screen room.
He entered the library, displaying his badge at the supervisor, an old man, he seemed in his seventies bald and with a long white beard.
"Oh, I see you're the famous Jin Liang."
"Yes, I am." Jin Liang said proudly.
'...'
"Yes, I am." Raden said.
"Eheh, truly the new generations shall surpass the old. Here you can borrow books from the third floor."
"Thanks." The library, as most things in the academy, was divided into five floors, each one for a student rank.
Raden was walking away when he heard...
"Ah, be careful in the noble meeting!" 
'How does he k-?'
"Yes, I'll be. Thanks, elder."
He laughed stroking his beard, giving the impression of a grand sage.
'I want to do it too!' He thought instinctually. 'A shame I have no beard...'
He went up to the third floor directly.
'What a nice elder, I really want to check his background.' Raden smiled.
He starting browsing through Alchemy books and found disappointed that there were no high-level books.
'It seems that my teacher is really powerful...'
He started browsing through Body Cultivation Arts, searching for the higher grades ones.
He finally stumbled upon one.
<<Mid Earth Grade Book>>
A book like that would be sold at five thousand gold coins!
He started reading it.
'The cell needs some energy to function, a surplus would make the cells become more powerful, this is the basis of the Body Path! Naturally, this process occurs in Qi Cultivators in little quantity: some of their energy nourish the cell when circulating through the pathways, but this technique will allow you to strengthen your body faster...'
...
<<Wuxia Body levelled up!>>
'Beautiful, I was so immersed than I completely forgot to be in a library!'
'Wait...was it because it was so beautiful that I was immersed?'
"Oh, did you notice something boy?"
"AH!"
It was the library supervisor.
"We're closing for the night."
*Coff Coff* "Sure. Can I ask you something?"
"Feel free to ask."
"Why was I so immersed in that book?"
The librarian smiled.
"It is for the writing."
"Please, enlighten me further."
"The writing, you know the book was written by a Writer!"
'Wow, I absolutely didn't expect that!' He thought sarcastically.
"Don't undervalue the Writer profession! In that profession, you write books that contain a trace of your understanding of the world. The clarity of the message and the understanding of it depends on a writer. Why were you so immersed in that book and not in Alchemy one, for example? It's for the writer!"
'He must be a Writer...'
"And I am one, boy!"
'I knew...still I'm interested.'
"Do you want to know about my profession?"
"..."
He smiled in excitement.
'What is he doing?'
"Ahah! I'm happy to teach you! The Writer is an occupation based on Soul Traces: those excite your Soul and make you feel immersed. The quality of the writing material is also important.."
'Is he giving me a lesson? Did I accept or something?'
"For example writing on Jade boost your Soul Traces and..."
'Well...I might as well learn.'
...
'HE TALKED ONLY ABOUT THE 'GLORIOUS HISTORY' OF WRITING!!!!' Raden was exasperated.
"Ahah, boy! I didn't talk to a person for so long from ages!"
'And I understand why...'
"Feel free to return here, I'll teach some new lessons on Writing!"
"Yes, elder. Goodbye."
"Ah, by the way, my name is Ping Zui, goodbye!"
As Raden walked out of the crowd he heard some whispers.
"Did he really stand up one of his lessons?"
"A hero, a great hero!"
"He must have some problems..."
'...'
**********
*Knock Knock*
"Oh, Jin Liang! Please."
"Ah...Where's my cauldron?"
"You boy care only about material things and not about my hearth!"
"Yes, that's true."
"Good, I do it too. I've sent some servants to transport the cauldron to your new home!"
"New home?"
"Yeah, the Red Disciple home..."
"Ah!"
The Academy was organized in a concentric manner: the lower rank disciple on the outside and higher rank inside with each ring protected by guards. In each ring, there would be the schools and markets, while the Ki Tower and the teacher houses would be outside. Ai Bai was the only teacher who had his house in the Unranked ring!
"Hey what happened to my pill?"
"Pill, what pill?"
'You!'
"The perfect one, I want to sell it!"
"Ahhh" Ai Bai sighed. "You must understand something, kid. What do you think that will happen if they found that such a strong alchemist has such a low-level cultivation base?"
"Strong alchemist?"
"No one under Qi Manifestation was able to create a perfect grade pill! Not counting the fact that you're so young."
'It makes sense...but-'
"So, it is safer in my belly." He said maintaining a serious face.
"You!"
"Ahah, boy. Too late!" "Then I gave you a cauldron as compensation!"
"Ah" Raden sighed. Well, he shouldn't care too much for a pill. He'd be able to create more in the future.

Have you ever wondered why Chinese novels are so similar?
Beautiful, because I didn't.
This novel will, in fact, talk about a shameless (I wonder where I've heard that before...) nineteen years old boy that finds himself in the world that he himself wrote!
But a system lights the way, and with that light, his journey begins, to discover the true force that governs everything!

Gravity Garden? 
Angor only came here once before. It was when he was pulled inside by Sunders while unconscious and was immediately thrown out when he woke up.
He checked the place again. When the garden was created, it only occupied a small patch of land in Phantom Island. This time, however, Angor noticed that the garden was larger than before. He couldn't see the edge of it.
The sky was clear but without a sun. Angor couldn't find a light source, so he didn't know how the place was so bright as day.
They were standing within the outdoor library. There were desks scattered around the bookshelves with half-written files and quills in ink bottles on them, which meant Sunders often came here.
Angor could tell that the Gravity Garden was a lot inferior compared to Soul Genesis Garden in terms of completeness. The rules of the garden had not been established, and everything felt off. Also, he didn't find any gravity energy. The law of the garden was probably still in its initial state.
Still, Angor wished he could get his hands on such a miniature world too.
While Angor inspected his surroundings, Sunders was also looking at his student curiously.
The boy didn't change much on the outside. His skin was still pale white, and his eyes were as clear as always, without any hint of being tainted by the cruelty and mercilessness of the wizarding world. Everything on Angor looked just like before, apart from his blond buzz cut that barely covered the top of his head.
Next, Sunders smiled when he checked Angor's strength.
A level-2 apprentice at his bottleneck before breaking through to the next level.
Angor was still a level-1 when he went missing in Midnight Sovereign. It was only half a year and he gained so much experience… Besides, the boy spent less than two years in the wizarding world in total. Such growth speed had busted all common sense.
The gentleman pressed a hand on Angor's shoulder. "Do not resist."
Angor felt something tickling his ear, and before he could find out why, a stream of gentle energy entered his body and circled around his mind space before it quickly left.
Sunders sat in front of his desk, content with the test result. He didn't find any trace of potion usage in Angor's body, which meant the boy did not use such extra help to improve.
It was commonly agreed among wizards that anyone who became a wizard before the age of 30 was a top-class genius. Considering Angor's speed, he was very likely to hit the milestone before 20. Only certain talents from Origin World showed such aptitude before.
However, it took more than fast training to become a wizard. Angor also needed the accumulation of knowledge and the proper use of such knowledge to build his own path toward the future. Sunders planned to ask Angor to study more after the garden challenge.
It was time for Angor to pick a main subject.
"Nicely done. A level-2 apprentice in half a year without consuming potions. The magazine said you once performed Mystery alchemy, no? I see you didn't give up on the other 'profession'.
"I see it now. You totally should travel around instead of staying inside Brute Cavern all day. It's good for you that way."
Sunders assumed that Angor ran into another great destiny. Nevertheless, the biggest cause for Angor's growth should still lie within Singularity Dispersive Meditation. The one-of-a-kind channeling method had given Angor a miracle.
Sunders believed that Angor achieved so much by using a flawed singularity model. He wondered what other miracles would happen should Angor used the thirty-six-dimensional locator to create the ultimate form of axes of the universe.
Of course, Sunders never realized that Angor did so from the very start.
Angor felt proud after receiving Sunders' praise. But then, he noticed he just heard something strange. "Um, magazine?"
Sunders chuckled at Angor's silly reaction and tossed the newest edition of Precision Sky he picked up. "Read it. Is there anything untruthful?"
The first thing Angor saw on the paper was the highlighted news about Isabelle's return.
It's known by the public so soon?
Angor read on and saw that the article was actually more detailed than what he revealed that night. Either someone investigated, or Shadow told someone more information later.
He checked the title again: [The Sultan has Returned to the South! Will She Reshuffle All Forces in Wizarding World?!]
The title looks quite the bait. As for the author…
Your Stoney Granddaddy?
Angor quickly thought about Dual Sprite Talos.
"Oh? You're more interested in this one?" Sunders noticed Angor wasn't looking at the right page. "Huh… Isabelle's back? As I remembered, she was half-step to legendary half a year before she left everyone's view. If nothing held her back since then… she should be a legendary wizard now."
Angor didn't comment on Isabelle's matter and kept reading the next title, which had the same style of an overstatement.
[A Mystery Alchemist is Processed into Someone's Puppet?! It Turns Out to be—]
He managed to keep calm while reading the article. When he finished it, he finally failed to hold back a curse.
The first part of the page described how he was captured by Bogula in Silent Hill, while the latter half said how he was turned into Bogula's puppet. There was another short story in the middle that claimed how he almost created a Mystery item.
The second part of the article was definitely forged.
However, the author used creative wording and fine assumptions that perfectly recreated how Bogula usually made his puppets. Maybe the writer did see it before.
Your Stoney Granddaddy. 
Again.
Angor was almost sure that this writer was the strange sprite Talos who always talked to itself.
He never liked that shifty gatekeeper. He would have been fine if Talos opened the gate and let him out. This article that was full of assumptions only added to his negative impression of Talos.
"This is all nonsense." He tossed the magazine back on the desk.
"But Bogula did take you away, right?" Sunders crossed his legs while fiddling his walking cane.
"Yeah… that part is right."
"When I examined your body, I also found some new scars apart from your old ones. Bogula did it to you?"
"No…" Angor shook his head and wondered if he should tell the truth. "It's Lady Isabella."
"Isabella from Dark Castle? How did you mess with that woman?"
"Um, if you want to know, sir, I'll have to start explaining from when I fell into Fairy World."
"Fairy World? The tunnel in Midnight Sovereign sent you to Fairy World? Well, you can tell me about your journey if that's no problem. Also, leave anything you don't want to say. It's fine."
Angor nodded. He was going to tell his professor anyway.
"I ran into the rainbow dragonflies in the tunnel again. They gathered together like a huge cloud and saved me. By sitting on them, I left the plane passageway and entered Fairy World…"
Angor told Sunders everything about the abandoned underground village including how he met Akeso. He only kept the origin of Dodoro a secret.
He took Dodoro back in order to ask his professor to look into what helped Dodoro stay alive for a thousand years. Now that he did meet with Sunders, he thought otherwise.
In the end, Angor said that Akeso let him go peacefully. After that, he encountered a man named Dodoro who appeared to have lost his memory. Out of sympathy, he took Dodoro along.
After leaving Pocratee, it was the strange adventure in Water Grasse and in Dark Castle. Angor explained everything about them.
Sunders took a brief moment to collect important points in Angor's story.
"There's a dragonfly nest in the abandoned village? So it means there's another exit that leads to Nightmare Realm inside the plane passageway you went through. There must be a reason for someone to open such a passage and leave it there for a thousand years."
Sunders didn't say it aloud for Angor to answer. He planned to check out the village once he finished Monkey's request.
"Now, I didn't think Isabelle has something to do with you. Judging from what you said about her… she didn't come back for real. But it isn't easy to segment someone's soul and create an independent consciousness. Perhaps something happened to the real Isabelle that allowed her soul fragment to shake free from the host's control."


A young traveler who receives enlightenment from another civilization is on a mission to save his beloved mentor. In his journey to seek the ultimate truth, he travels extensively and along the way, he experiences some unpredictable encounters. Will he be able to save his mentor or will his path be derailed?

A Lot of Man are quite fond of harém stories (myself included) but pretty much EVERYSINGLE dude that write this genre in their stories tend to completely and utterly fuck their novel making a Lot of readers give them negative reviews and drop the story


It's not like Harém sucks to be honest. If done right you can create a pretty interesting story because of the potential drama and other factors. The other reason people choose harém is because they may have more than one girl they are fond of in the story and obviously The writer will add this tag in their story.



The autor from rosario + Vampire simply ended the story without the MC being with the Main heroine because he was afraid of the potential hate he would receive from the readers that prefer other heroines. But why have one if you can have more? (Lenny face)



This is going to be the Guide about How to write a harem that doesn't suck!



First thing First. If you're gonna make a Harém story then you need to at least write the harém genre in a way that makes sense, don't Just Go and shove 5 girls in the MC's ass right after 2 chapters, where is the damn romance and realism? Like, the MC Just looks at a girl once and he instantly "Falls in love" with her and the same thing is applied on the chick, dude Just stop right there. 




You need to make a Harém with a limited number of girls if you don't want to destroy your story (unless you are Einlion I don't recommend one making a harém with a huge number of girls). 




Next is the romance. Keep in mind that girls aren't Just sex Dolls whose only use is to be a trophy of the MC and satisfy his sexual desires. First you should start by their "fateful" meeting then later develop their feelings towards each other, Even if you introduce the girls in the story don't rush the romance! Feelings aren't a thing that Will develop instantly, there is no such thing as love at the First sight, Attraction? Sure! Love? No!!





Then there is the "Sister thing". Man, Just don't, I really meant it.



there is NO WAY THAT A GIRL WILL BE FUCKING HAPPY ABOUT SHARING THEIR MAN WITH OTHER CHICKS DESPITE THE STATE OF THE FUCKING WORLD!!! I highly doubt that a girl Will instantly become friends with her rivals like that, It wouldn't Even be Impossible if some girls hated each other's guts at the point of Just wanting to get rid off the competitor!! And why do the girls in the MC's harém become bisexuals instantly??!! Just What the Fuck??!


Add a type of rivalry between the girls, you can Even develop a sense of friendship between them after some time but Just don't follow the Stereotypes.




And of course... We can't forget about our MC can we? The First thing you need to know is that you really shouldn't make a lustful bastard (pretty much the majority of the MCs in this app) and a hypochrite hero (MGA). People Will Just hate your MC a lot and probaly All of his girls would be nothing more than puppets.



The MC in a harém novel should be a reliable Man that can shoulder the family's problems, also show that he has feelings about his girls too. A cool suggestion would be an Earthling MC that is used to monogamy slowly accept the harém! Remember that in a harém the Man is the Pillar that holds everything together, this is why the MC not only needs to be strong physically but also mentally.





Add some Variety in your harém! Why would you Just put the Black haired jade like skin with the perfect body without a single fat generic goodest human girl? Why not a slender dark elf? Or a Chubby alchemist? A tanned swordwoman or the plain talentless chick that puts a lot of effort to be strong?


If all the girls look and sound the same they Will Just be boring AF. Even personality wise writers tend to make ultra-gentle girls that are pretty much useless to the MC *CoughMGACough*. Why not put a Girl that is actually Evil in your story? I Hope this Will broaden the horizons of many readers hehehehe.


Also other thing that I really hate is when the girls have their original personality erased only to become the submissive fuck Dolls of the MC. I fuckin hate It all!!!!



I know that these are merely My opinion on the matter so feel free to ignore It completely if you want to.


I Hope these tips helped you guys and don't forget to comment!

This Will be My colection of tips and suggestions for writers here in WebNovel.

I Hope that a Lot of people see this and apply My tips in their stories hehehehe.

I'm getting really frustrated by the authors that kept going for the stereotypes without correcting them.

'Sacrifice.'
A word which was better off involving others than it was of involving themselves.
Contrary to expectations, after the First High Reverend's passionate speech, the Wise Mad King's hesitation grew, and he replied, "I wish to speak with the Director about this."
It turned out that the three High Reverends answered to someone even higher in rank than they were. From the Wise Mad King's hesitation, it could be ascertained that speaking to this director was nowhere as easy as making a phone call.
The other two High Reverends fell silent. After a few moments had passed, the First Reverend broke the silence with a voice filled with grievance. "If that is what you — the architect of this plan — have decided, then I will respect your decision."
A few more moments passed in silence, then the Wise Mad King heard a voice echo in his mind.
'I saw what transpired. Proceed with your plan. Do not fail me.'
The reply only contained three short sentences, which had taken only two seconds to relay, but the Wise Mad King looked as though he was just doused with a large bucket of water. The beads of sweat dripping down his forehead had completely drenched his garments. It was as though he had just returned from a short trip to the Underworld.
"The Lord most gracious, the Lord most wrathful..." The Mad King uncontrollably muttered under his breath, his voice croaking. He was desperately trying to rid himself of the fear that was consuming his mind. He never liked "talking" to the Director, but the present situation, which was a desperate one, had called for it.
He took some time to stabilize his breathing and heartbeat, and only then did he finally speak to the other two High Reverends, saying, "The Director said we shall proceed as we'd planned."
"It looks like there is no other choice, huh... Three Demigods will be sacrificed. Damnit! I feel bad; believe me," exclaimed the Third Reverend. However, his tone of voice oozed schadenfreude.
"A small price to pay. As long as our plan succeeds, even Demigods will be nothing more than ornaments to the history we would write!" The First High Reverend passionately said.
"However, we still don't know how the Second High Reverend plans to convince those three Demigods to give up their lives," said the Third Reverend to the First High Reverend.
The Mad King coldly sneered, "You're speaking as though the Faustian Tattoos and Power Marks were not made for this purpose."
As Godsfall's High Reverends were hurriedly making changes to their plans, Baiyi was on his way to rendezvous with his students, completely oblivious to the fear and chaos his actions had wrought.
He was still in a discussion with the Voidwalkers, trying to discern the purpose for which the altars had been set up, and by extension, the next plan that the enemies sought to make.
"Hmm, that altar really gives me that flashback feels, man. In fact, it reminds me so much of this old friend of mine," the Devil Walker said. "The runes surrounding it, and the way with which altar was set up, makes it look like Molocchus's work. I have seen it a few times. Although some details on that altar were a little different — which may mean that its function would be different, as well — it still resembles his work.
"Molocchus is an Abyss Lord, who was famous — or rather, infamous — for being sly. Although he was physically weaker than Thaas, he is a harder opponent to defeat. Unlike other demons, Molocchus admires the culture of humans. In the past, he stole a large number of human books and abducted academic sorcerers. He had even gone on to place spies within human academic organizations, such as the Doors of Conundrum.
"Taking inspiration from humans' knowledge of formations, he once designed a set of sacrificial altars. The amount of power possessed by the offerings determined how much power the person who was making the sacrifice would gain. This was akin to a trade by barter. However, there was a catch: if the person who made the sacrifice did not make more sacrifices afterward, Molocchus would ruthlessly rob them off every ounce of strength they possessed, including their souls.
"Hence, after making a sacrifice, if one sought to live longer, they would have to commit vile acts in order to obtain strong offerings, which were good enough to satiate Malocchus's desires. It was akin to a loan scheme, which had exponential interest rates, and in the end, the creditor would end up claiming the debtor anyway," the Devil Walker finished. 
"Which idiot would fall for that?" Baiyi scoffed.
"The more unassuming a trap is, the more people fall for it. Do you not remember Steam and other free-to-play mobile games back on Earth?" The Devil retorted. "Besides, there are humans so thirsty for power, they would do anything to gain it. And that is how we demons have managed to live off your humans. This is why our influence over you lot is so vast."
Baiyi was unable to refute the claim.
"Besides, do you want to know who first saw military potential in Leapers? It was Molocchus. He even trained a herd for himself. Leapers are stronger and more useful if trained; however, their physique remains so much weaker than other demon breeds. It is hard to whip them up to standard, I tell you. It is even harder to control them. No one has the patience to try," the Devil Walker explained. "For instance, that Leaper you battled earlier, it was strong enough to lead a herd of its own, yet it seemed to take orders from a superior. Thus, if I am not mistaken, that Leaper must have been trained since it was young, by its master. From that, we can deduce that Molochchus is one of the players in this."
"Another Abyss Lord? Well, I'll buy it. It does answer a question I have always had about Godsfall," Baiyi said, musing over the Devil Walker's information. "The cult's expansion into such a powerful organization, despite the Church's interference, would not be enough to draw in some humans. One would need to control an organization as powerful as a nation — a very powerful nation.
"Godsfall still does not have total influence over places like the Nothern Lands of Isythre or here, Marle. Hence, it would make sense if there are other forces backing them, and if one of the backers was a real Abyss Lord, not a lightweight like Thaas was, then it would make even more sense. After all, bewitching human with carnal delusions is what demons do best.
"So, does this mean that back then, during the demonic invasion, the reason why so many demons — including some of Thaas' former lapdogs — were able to infiltrate my academy was because of this Abyss Lord?" The Apprentice Walker suddenly asked.
He had never truly recovered from that event. Seeing the academy that was once his pride and had his name slowly deteriorate had stung and enraged him, and his tone of voice proved this.
"Pfft. What is loyalty to demons? It's nothing but a strange, insignificant concept. The only everlasting truth that we demons understand is 'rebellion'! So there's no such thing as 'former lapdogs'; there's only the subjugation of the servants of others, and that was what Molocchus must have done after Thaas' demise. Back then, they might have only mentioned Thaas' name to fool everyone," the Devil Walker said with a cruel chuckle.
"You said that that altar reminded you of Molocchus's handiwork, but to me, it resembles something I saw in the past. Do you remember the time I visited Mia's hometown?" Baiyi suddenly said, slowly immersing himself in a flashback.
"Back then, we saw a large complex of runic formations, and as it turned out, what we saw was just a small part of a super-massive Empire Complex. We told the Church about it, but nothing happened since then. Looking at how quietly it was resolved, I believe that their work had been destroyed by the Church. Now, though, It looks like they're at it again."
"Ohh ho ho ho! They are going to create a Nationwide Transmutation Circle! Trying to create the Philosopher's Stone, aren't we?!" The Alchemist Walker suddenly chimed in excitedly. The idea of "offerings" and "super-massive complex" had reminded him of something[1].
"Did you just picture the Wise Mad King as the Dwarf in the Flask or Father?" Baiyi muttered under his breath. "Why did you not go a step further and say that he was trying to use that Transmutation Circle to obtain the Truth, in order to become some sort of God?"[2]
"Hey, those are some old references you just made. I don't think these newbies get it,though," the Archmage suddenly said. However, there was a chance that he also did not know where those terms came from.
Suddenly, another Voidwalker who almost never partook in discussion joined the fray.
"This thing right here is the symbol of the God of Power, Deilos!" The Bard Walker cried, sharing with everyone a picture of something he had seen before so that they could compare it with the symbol Baiyi had shared. 
"Oh? Please, do continue." Baiyi quickly replied. He had to admit that he had never believed that the Bard Walker, who was a Master Gentleman, would be useful in a conversation like this.
"As we all know, other than the One True God of God's Grace, other gods do exist. One such example is the War God, who our crappy moderator, Hope, has established connections with. This God of Power, Deilos, is similar. Legends have it that he controls power; he is also rumored to be the benefactor who gifted humans mana and combat chi.
"He used to have his own followers and religion, but they died off after the rise of God's Grace. I learned about Deilos from the ancient books and records I collected. This is also how I know that this symbol represents him," the Bard Walker said, finishing his elucidation, thereby showing his usefulness, for the very first time.
"You actually collect books? I thought all you ever collected were women's undergarments," a random Voidwalker muttered.
The Bard Walker jumped when he heard this. "Would you pay me some goddamned respect? I'm a scholar, for crying out loud! My voyage into the world of women is just a hobby I nurse after hours. Besides, beautiful women are attracted to my devilishly handsome looks and immense knowledge. I'm not idiotic, but I am a cute male bimbo!"
"Besides, do you even know that creating songs, poems, and epic poetry require an incredible number of materials, including knowledge of heroic stories throughout the ages? I'm a bard who composes moving poetries, not some Webnovel writer. I'm not allowed to make sh*t up!"
As someone who had exchanged memories with the Bard Walker, Baiyi knew this to be true. It was true that the Bard Walker was actually very knowledgeable in historical and cultural subjects. If it were not for his lustful lifestyle, he could have been a great literary master.
[1] It's Fullmetal Alchemist. That something is FMA.
[2] Fullmetal Alchemist stuff!


Imagine being forced to live, after death, as incorporeal bodies trapped in a vast space of nothingness for thousands of years, with nothing to do but exchanging past memories with other cohabitants (read: weirdos).  Everybody wanted out, but there was no way to leave the Void... 
Until one day, a young man was finally summoned, as a powerful but reluctant mentor, by a bubbly and motivated but completely naive young girl. Baiyi, finally out of the Void, was the only one who could save all of the other 32 souls from their prison and his summoner might just be The Key to their freedom.
However, Baiyi had to use the techniques and abilities the other souls had taught him throughout the years, and together with his own extensive knowledge of anime and game tropes from his shady and dangerous past as an otaku, to face the biggest challenge of them all: training the clumsy young girl he was forced to partner up with… into a competent sorcerer!

Why the hell those two are together?! 

Seeing Meng Yue Ming and Long Ao Zhen in their true appearance side by side, somewhere deep in her heart Li Shi Ying felt hopeless. 

Even though she hated that Meng Yue Ming but she was still the female lead while she herself...was only a mob character. 

Seeing those two side by side made Li Shi Ying feel that the wheel of fate began to move. She had almost believed that she might change the fate preventing those two from becoming together but... 

The female lead and the Male lead. No matter how hard other characters tried, no one could separate those two. 

NYUT. 

Li Shi Yings heart felt pained when she thought of this. Is it truly over for her? The wheels of fate began to churn once again and this was the proof.  Cold hard proof that smashed onto her face, shattering her delusions.

She didn't even know that Long Ao Zhenwais close with this Meng Yue Ming. Have they seen each other before? In their real appearance of course. 

Could it be....no no no she couldn't just jump into conclusions. She knew very well that falling in love with the male lead for a mob character like her is forbidden but... 

She still hoped that one day she could succeed since she had got into the male leads good books. Right? 

Looking at the heavenly couple from afar, Li Shi Ying could only silently leave the place as she didn't want those two to spot her. If she met them she wouldn't know what to do. 

Li Shi Ying indeed felt down and desperate but this didn't make her give up. It wasn't enough. For her, this scene she just saw instead, made her eager to make a move. 

Right, she had to confess soon So that Long Ao Zhen comes to know about her feelings and hopefully he would see her in a new light after her confession. 

Li Shi Ying left the place preparing to do her confession as the other girls were busy admiring the heavenly couple which in fact weren't a couple at all. 

The rumor about Long Ao Zhen and Meng Yue Ming dating was indeed popular and many cheered for them but in fact, the dense dragon himself didn't know any of this. 

He visited Meng Yue Ming for his own purpose which was to get medicine for his bunny. Even though his bunny had been healthy lately but he still wanted her to be able to learn martial arts. 

He had thought of sending people from the higher realm for a pill but the pills made there mostly were only effective for mythological beasts. 

Mythological beast could eat human pills and medicine but humans couldn't. Realizing this, Long Ao Zhen tried to find anyone in the alchemist division and accidentally stumbled upon Meng Yue Ming. 

He had met her before when he actively broke through and so did Meng Yue Ming, so the two of them got close real soon. Long Ao Zhen asked Meng Yue Ming for a pill and Meng Yue Ming was delighted to grant his wish. 

That's how the rumor of the two of them dating started. Well, mostly it was Meng Yue Ming who silently agreed to the rumor making many of the students believe it.

The next day. 

Li Shi Ying was sightseeing the battle area of students practice. She was watching a couple of students spar when suddenly the whole arena became noisy. 

"Ah! the saintess is here. Ahhh young master Zhan is also here." The students around Li Shi Ying suddenly ran toward a certain battle area while shouting happily. 

Hm? Saintess? Young master Zhan? Who are they? 

"Erm, who are those two?" Curious to death, Li Shi Ying stopped a nearby student to ask about them. Were they also popular students like Long Ao Zhen? 

"You must be new here, aren't you. The saintess and young master Zhan are the most popular students here aside from His Highness. They are translators. Young master Zhan is even the 2'nd type of translator. A very rare one."

The student who explained this to Li Shi Ying loomed very excitedly as he went to the crowd surrounding those two. 

"Jiu Wei, explain about the background of these two. Li Shi Ying frowned when she heard the students explanation. She was shocked. 

She indeed knew about the existence of translators in this academy but didn't expect to see someone with the same power as her. The 2'nd type of translator, the writer type.

Doesnt this mean that the one named young master Zhan can use talismans just like her?

"I'll explain, mistress." Jiu Wei quickly told Li Shi Ying all he knew about these two. Just like what the students said, one of these two translators was just like Li Shi Ying. 

The first one called saintess is Xie Mei, a 16 years old cultivator from the cultivator division since she already reached master stage 1 star level.

She was called saintess since she was the holy saintess of the Immortal Sage Sect, the strongest sect in the whole Shi He Continent.

She was also the daughter of the strongest family in Qilin country, moreover, she became the inheriting disciple of this academy principal. 

Not only that, in the original storyline, this girl was the one who became Meng Yue Mings love rival in getting Long Ao Zhens heart, the second female lead.

COMPLETED SERIES

I'll find you even if we are worlds apart -Long Ao Zhen 

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Transmigrated into a trash body of general's daughter as female lead? Peh! Too mainstream! Transmigrated to be a villainess? Common! What about transmigrating and ending up as cannon fodder? Have read it before! 

From that many options to transmigrate how could she, Li Shi Ying a very ordinary English department college student, suddenly wake up in the crippled body of the female lead's ex-maidservant?! Heaven, this is too unfair! 

In this world where only the strong are respected, she can't cultivate? No problem! Dozens of high-rank spiritual beasts fight over protecting her! 

Beast Tamers are rare? Hmph! The beast language is her hometown language! 

Can't be an alchemist or array master? Who cares? She could just become a translator! Without a translator, all those rare jobs wouldn't even exist! 

Watch how she rules over the world without having a single bit of cultivation energy in her body! 

But, can someone please tell her how she suddenly became the Dragon Prince's wife? Momma, she wanna cry!!! 

This is a perfect story for those who are bored with the usual cultivation novel. 

Warning: Smut scene in chapters 7-9!! If you don't want to read it, just skip those chapters. 

If you like to read perfect grammar then this book might not be your cup of tea, but I'm still learning. So, it will become better in later chapters. 

Other project:
1. The CEO's Office Boy is a Girl (completed) 
2. 101 Days To Date Mr Target (coming soon) 

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